For Section 3, we'll need some input from Larry. The last paragraph describes the figure, and we are omitting the letters for smoother listening experience, but in the last phrase, the letter is part of the sentence "and M is the outlet for the tar." How would you suggest this be read, Larry? In the recording, it's currently "and finally is the outlet for the tar." but we're not supposed to add to the text (i.e. the word "finally").talkendo wrote: ↑August 16th, 2022, 2:27 pm Section 3: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/sciammsuppl446_03_various_128kb.mp3 runtime 7:51
Section 17: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/sciammsuppl446_17_various_128kb.mp3 runtime 3:24
In Section 17, the only change I would suggest is in "Ab x d x C(t-t0)", that "x" be read as "times": A b times d times C, etc.
I had some trouble with the sound. It sounded to me a bit muffled. It could be because the volume was quite soft, within the low end of the acceptable range, or because there was excessive post-possessing, like noise-reduction, or because the microphone has a noise-cancelling effect enabled.
What is your editing process like, in terms of what effects you are using? Do you do any noise-reduction, amplification, etc?
Do you use a noise-cancelling microphone?
If you are recording at a lower volume and then need to amplify, check if you can increase your microphone's input volume so that you record closer to the desired volume.
I'm not suggesting re-recording these, it's just worth looking into for future recordings.
One last note, regarding filenames. They have an extra m - no need to fix that, unless you're reuploading the files, but otherwise I've made a note of it in the Magic Window and it can be fixed during the cataloguing stage.
Thanks!
