[COMPLETE]Henry IV, Part 2 by William Shakespeare - kit

[Craigos]

Act 2 Scene ii

Narrator Missing line......'Exeunt Bardolf and Page'

Everything else is PL OK. If you get the line to me, I can just drop it in.

Cheers

[ktaylor07]

PL Notes for Act 5.1

Shallow 5.1 -- PL-OK
Falstaff 5.1 -- PL-OK

[WiltedScribe]

Thanks, all! Craig, your corrections are now PL OK; I've also edited in your credits to the Dramatis Personae and have uploaded the final version for Sonia to listen to (as it's officially our first finalized file that is ready!)

I've also updated the MW with everyone's PL notes. As always, please double-check it periodically in case PL notes for one or more of your files pop up, so you can take care of corrections in a timely manner.

[WiltedScribe]

Oops! I think I missed this in my initial PL, but I am missing a Hastings line in 4.1. Jenn, if you want, you can record it in a separate file and I will paste it into the scene.

Besides, the king hath wasted all his rods
On late offenders, that he now doth lack
The very instruments of chastisement:
So that his power, like to a fangless lion,
May offer, but not hold.

[ktaylor07]

PL for Act 5.3

Shallow 5.3 -- PL-OK
Falstaff 5.3 -- PL-OK

[WiltedScribe]

Thanks, Kelly! It looks like three of your four scenes are now ready to edit!

[ktaylor07]

Thanks, Kelly! It looks like three of your four scenes are now ready to edit!

yes -- Hope to have them done soon!

[Kitty]

Thanks, all! Craig, your corrections are now PL OK; I've also edited in your credits to the Dramatis Personae and have uploaded the final version for Sonia to listen to (as it's officially our first finalized file that is ready!)

wohoooo my first job here ! Wow you have all been busy in the last few days.

I listened to the huge cast right away and it seems all is in order:

> at 1:06: missing: "the Earl of Surrey, read by..."
> at 1:13: missing: "Blunt, read by..."

I see they are also missing in the MW, so I am guessing they did not have any speaking roles. Bizarre they would have to appear on stage anyway, I mean with a precise name and all.

So if you can confirm there are not lines missing by these two people, then the DP are PL ok.

I will be travelling the next week, so any other PL jobs will be done only when I return.

Sonia

[WiltedScribe]

Thanks so much, Sonia! Yes, I can confirm that Surrey and Blunt are non-speaking roles, and I, too, share your confusion as to why they appear in this play when they have no lines to say. I guess Shakespeare was looking for historical accuracy without granting them the privilege of speaking lol.

[ktaylor07]

Here are my corrections to Morton 1.1 and Mistress Quickly 2.1

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/2henryiv_morton_1_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/2henryiv_hostess_2_1.mp3

[WiltedScribe]

Great! Thanks, Kelly. Based on Craig's notes, all the corrections are there where they should be, so it looks like those files are now PL OK! (And 1.1 is ready to edit!)

[Craigos]

Travers1_1 Missing line at the end
'This strained passion doth you wrong, my lord.'
Sorry, I missed this. The rest of the 1_1 is put together, just need this one line.

Narrator_2_1 Missing line 0:51 'To Bardolph'
Not doing very well here!! I missed this as well.

All the scenes have been edited, so I just need the lines.

[WiltedScribe]

Not to worry, Craig, sometimes we only uncover these things in the middle of editing. I've updated the MW with these requests.

I can only record Travers's line tomorrow night, which I will do so that you can put it into the scene by Monday.

[jennlea]

Okie dokie! Was able to PL the rest of my scenes. I will be working on corrections for my parts tomorrow.

3.2
Shallow- PL-OK!
Silence- Missing last line: "That's fifty five year ago"
Falstaff- PL-OK!
Wart- PL-OK!
Feeble- PL-OK!

4.4
Clarence- PL-OK!
Westmoreland- PL-OK!
Harcourt- PL-OK!

5.4
Mistress Quickly- PL-OK!

5.5
First Groom- PL-OK!
Falstaff- Optional fix: 0:18- heard "O, If I had time to have made new liveries..."; text reads "O, If I had had time to have made new liveries...".  Doesn't technically change the meaning but does add extra emphasis.  Up to Brad if he'd like to fix it.
Shallow- PL-OK!
Lancaster- PL-OK!

[WiltedScribe]

Thank you, Jenn!

In the meantime, I have recorded my own corrections, which should now pass muster:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/2henryiv_henryv_5_5.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/2henryiv_travers_1_1.mp3