[COMPLETE] The Great Sinners of the Bible, L.A. Banks-mtf

[mightyfelix]

Thank you. This is in the MW.

[SpriteTip]

Section 18
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_18_banks_128kb.mp3
17:16

[mightyfelix]

Thank you.

[mleigh]

Section 13
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_13_banks_128kb.mp3
19:08

For the most part your recording is well done. There are, unfortunately, two places where the recording is written over. I don't know if it is salvageable or will need to be recorded again.

The two problem areas are
7:01 - 7:37: God will not curse the
good : therefore make them wicked, and cause them
to bring the curse on their own heads. Frederick
W. Robertson has well said that a more diabolical
wickedness can scarcely be conceived. Yet Balaam,
as the world goes, was an honorable and
veracious man; nay, a man of delicate conscientiousness
and unconquerable scruples—a man of
lofty religious professions, highly respectable and
respected.

There are men who would not play false and
yet would wrongly win. There are men who would
not lie and yet who would bribe a poor man to support
a cause which he believes in his soul to be
false. There are men who would resent at the
sword^s point the charge of dishonor, who would
yet for selfish gratification entice the weak into
sin and damn body and soul in hell. There are
men who would be shocked at being called traitors,
yet who in time of war will make a fortune by selling
arms and ammunition and provisions to their
country's foes.

11:21 -11:25: won because we all
have in our own consciousness something which
bears witness

I'm going to listen to section 18 now.



Thanks,

M

[mleigh]

Section 18
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_18_banks_128kb.mp3
17:16

This is PL OK.

Thanks,

M

[dolivervo]

Here is Chapter 16. Sorry for the day's delay!

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_16_banks_128kb.mp3

Run time: 19:13

[mightyfelix]

No problem at all. Thank you!

[mleigh]

Here is Chapter 16. Sorry for the day's delay!

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_16_banks_128kb.mp3

Run time: 19:13

Good job.

PL OK.

Thanks,

M

[Dumebi]

Hello, here's Chapter 22 - A King in Hiding. Time - 16:19

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_22_banks_128kb.mp3

[mightyfelix]

Excellent, thanks so much!

[mleigh]

Hello, here's Chapter 22 - A King in Hiding. Time - 16:19

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_22_banks_128kb.mp3

The chapter is very well read. I have just a few comments of changes to make it PL OK.

Please delete about 0.5 seconds of silence at the start so that there is between0.5 and 1 second of silence
At about 7:31 the words "of death" are missing in "there is no protection against the arrest of death"
At about 11:29 the words "and women" are missing in "all these things exist is to save lost men and women", make sure to delete the "a" stutter after "men"
Please add about 5 seconds of silence at the end so that there is around 5 seconds of silence

Thanks,

M

[dolivervo]

Here is Chapter 16. Sorry for the day's delay!

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_16_banks_128kb.mp3

Run time: 19:13

Good job.

PL OK.

Thanks,

M

Great! Thank you!

[Dumebi]

Hello, here's Chapter 22 - A King in Hiding. Time - 16:19

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_22_banks_128kb.mp3

The chapter is very well read. I have just a few comments of changes to make it PL OK.

Please delete about 0.5 seconds of silence at the start so that there is between0.5 and 1 second of silence
At about 7:31 the words "of death" are missing in "there is no protection against the arrest of death"
At about 11:29 the words "and women" are missing in "all these things exist is to save lost men and women", make sure to delete the "a" stutter after "men"
Please add about 5 seconds of silence at the end so that there is around 5 seconds of silence

Thanks,

M

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

I've amended all points highlighted. I may be hearing things but I think I might have messed up the audio and I can't figure out what I've done .
Time is now 16:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_22_banks_128kb.mp3

[mleigh]

Hello, here's Chapter 22 - A King in Hiding. Time - 16:19

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_22_banks_128kb.mp3

The chapter is very well read. I have just a few comments of changes to make it PL OK.

Please delete about 0.5 seconds of silence at the start so that there is between0.5 and 1 second of silence
At about 7:31 the words "of death" are missing in "there is no protection against the arrest of death"
At about 11:29 the words "and women" are missing in "all these things exist is to save lost men and women", make sure to delete the "a" stutter after "men"
Please add about 5 seconds of silence at the end so that there is around 5 seconds of silence

Thanks,

M

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

I've amended all points highlighted. I may be hearing things but I think I might have messed up the audio and I can't figure out what I've done .
Time is now 16:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_22_banks_128kb.mp3

You did a really good job of inserting the missing text. I wouldn't have been able to tell where it was if I hadn't know about it.

I don't know what happened with the audio. Did you run noise reduction on the first submission? I ask because the first time your volume was just about perfect and this time it his too high.
- Please reduce the audio volume by 2-3 dB.

- Also , the silence at the end is still short by about 1.5 seconds.

Thanks,

M

[Dumebi]

The chapter is very well read. I have just a few comments of changes to make it PL OK.

Please delete about 0.5 seconds of silence at the start so that there is between0.5 and 1 second of silence
At about 7:31 the words "of death" are missing in "there is no protection against the arrest of death"
At about 11:29 the words "and women" are missing in "all these things exist is to save lost men and women", make sure to delete the "a" stutter after "men"
Please add about 5 seconds of silence at the end so that there is around 5 seconds of silence

Thanks,

M

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

I've amended all points highlighted. I may be hearing things but I think I might have messed up the audio and I can't figure out what I've done .
Time is now 16:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_22_banks_128kb.mp3

You did a really good job of inserting the missing text. I wouldn't have been able to tell where it was if I hadn't know about it.

I don't know what happened with the audio. Did you run noise reduction on the first submission? I ask because the first time your volume was just about perfect and this time it his too high.
- Please reduce the audio volume by 2-3 dB.

- Also , the silence at the end is still short by about 1.5 seconds.

Thanks,

M

I think I may have cracked it - volume should now be ok and additional 1.5 seconds of silence inserted at the end.

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/greatsinnersbible_22_banks_128kb.mp3
Time is now 16:22