[COMPLETE][Supernatural]The Haunted Homes and Family Traditions of Great Britain, by John Henry Ingram - kit

[Dollf4c3su]

This is section 079

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_079_ingram_128kb.mp3 (11:51)

[Kitty]

Here is Section 132:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_132_ingram_128kb.mp3

thank you, Jim. This was quite an unsettling story, because the ghost is hurting people, unlike in most other stories where nothing much dangerous is happening. I cna't believe they let the servant maids get hit so often without interfering

Absolutely PL ok, flawlessly narrated

Sonia

[Kitty]

This is section 079
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_079_ingram_128kb.mp3 (11:51)

thanks, Suzie, well you made it in the nick of time after all, super And a wonderfully narrated story as well, I enjoyed it quite a lot. Textually, all flawless, only one tiny stylistic correction at the end needed:

> we need a standard of 5 seconds of silence at the end, you stop quite abruptly with barely one second. Could you add 4 more please ?

Thanks

Sonia

[Dollf4c3su]

This is section 079
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_079_ingram_128kb.mp3 (11:51)

thanks, Suzie, well you made it in the nick of time after all, super And a wonderfully narrated story as well, I enjoyed it quite a lot. Textually, all flawless, only one tiny stylistic correction at the end needed:

> we need a standard of 5 seconds of silence at the end, you stop quite abruptly with barely one second. Could you add 4 more please ?

Thanks

Sonia

Oops! Yes ma'am.

[Dollf4c3su]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_079_ingram_128kb.mp3 (11:55)

I hope this one is good

[Kitty]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_079_ingram_128kb.mp3 (11:55)
I hope this one is good

yes excellent, thank you, now PL ok

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Here are three:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_150_ingram_128kb.mp3
2:42

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_151_ingram_128kb.mp3
6:59

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_152_ingram_128kb.mp3
5:11

Jim

[jray]

Hello Sonia

Section 97 is ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_097_ingram_128kb.mp3 (12:21)

I was playing around with doing voices in this, hope its sound okay and do you have any tips for doing voices?

This finish's my first few sections on my first book. Ill keep an eye out for the next book you do but I'm also going to float around and get a feel for other parts of librivox.

Also thank you for putting up and helping me with my first few Sections.

[Kitty]

Here are three:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_150_ingram_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_151_ingram_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_152_ingram_128kb.mp3

thank you, Jim, all three perfectly PL ok very uncanny to have such dreams that come true.

Sonia

[Kitty]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_097_ingram_128kb.mp3 (12:21)

I was playing around with doing voices in this, hope its sound okay and do you have any tips for doing voices?

I personally love hearing character voices, so I enjoyed the section. It sounded good, but it's not a must.

If you like to "act out", I suggest checking out the drama subforum, there you can be as dramatic as you wish and do voices whenever you think it fits a character. viewforum.php?f=27 Chances are you'll meet me again as DPL in some of these plays, as I'm very active there as well. I would suggest starting with a short role and checking out how you like the process.

Back to your section, here are a few PL notes to correct:

> at 0:24: (p. 360) "Blenkinsopp Castle" – you forgot "castle"
> at 2:26: (p. 361) "was given that of Bryan de Blenkinsopp" – you omitted "of"
> at 6:28: (p. 364) "was entirely untenanted" – I think you said "untainted"

thanks

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Indeed. I rarely remember dreams. Interesting stuff. Thanks, Sonia. Jim

[jray]

If you like to "act out", I suggest checking out the drama subforum, there you can be as dramatic as you wish and do voices whenever you think it fits a character. viewforum.php?f=27 Chances are you'll meet me again as DPL in some of these plays, as I'm very active there as well. I would suggest starting with a short role and checking out how you like the process.

Back to your section, here are a few PL notes to correct:

> at 0:24: (p. 360) "Blenkinsopp Castle" – you forgot "castle"
> at 2:26: (p. 361) "was given that of Bryan de Blenkinsopp" – you omitted "of"
> at 6:28: (p. 364) "was entirely untenanted" – I think you said "untainted"

thanks

Sonia

I believe I've fixed the mistakes.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_097_ingram_128kb.mp3(12:21)

YES i finely got the last 5 second right.

I'm not really in to acting but ill take a look at the drama sub forum

thanks

[Kitty]

I believe I've fixed the mistakes.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_097_ingram_128kb.mp3(12:21)

you did one cut by mistake, could you reinsert this part (you had it in your previous section)

> at 2:29: (p. 361) "was given that of Bryan de Blenkinsopp and his lady love" – the last part is missing now

The rest is fine

thanks

Sonia

[jray]

> at 2:29: (p. 361) "was given that of Bryan de Blenkinsopp and his lady love" – the last part is missing now

The rest is fine

thanks

Sonia

All fixed, thats what I get for not pulling up the book I guess.

Sadly it doesn't sound as close to the original recording as the other one.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/hauntedhomes_097_ingram_128kb.mp3 (12:22)

[Kitty]

All fixed, thats what I get for not pulling up the book I guess.

haha, yes, always check with the book, that's why I write up the page numbers in my notes, so I can find the page back easier

Sadly it doesn't sound as close to the original recording as the other one.

it sounds perfect to me, wouldn't hear a difference in sound. All PL ok now, thank you

I hope you're having just as much fun in the next project you are participating in

Sonia