[Complete] - Sonnets and Odes - lt

Eysiss · Post by **Eysiss** » January 15th, 2022, 8:44 am

Algy Pug wrote: ↑January 12th, 2022, 3:35 pm Here is Ode 7:
...

Algy,
at 0:16, 5th line it seems to me you say "When then" instead of "What then"

Emanuela

Eysiss · Post by **Eysiss** » January 15th, 2022, 8:48 am

Algy Pug wrote: ↑January 11th, 2022, 9:06 pm Sonnet 25 - 1:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sonnetsandodes_148_petrarca_128kb.mp3
....

this is difficult
at 0:08, 2nd line I really cannot hear clearly. I'm sorry
it seems to me you say " O(h) which" instead of "o'er which"
but it could be just me, not able to hear the subtle difference.

Thank you!
Emanuela

Iunta4Ios · Post by **Iunta4Ios** » January 15th, 2022, 10:35 am

Sezione 123, sonetto 15 e sezione 127 sonetto 17 corrette:
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sonnetsandodes_123_petrarca_128kb.mp3
(1:13).
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sonnetsandodes_127_petrarca_128kb.mp3
(1:12)
Sezione 125 , sonetto 17 in the MW seems to me already correct. Maybe am I wrong?
Pier

Iunta4Ios · Post by **Iunta4Ios** » January 15th, 2022, 11:05 am

Sezione 131, Canzone VI corretta:
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sonnetsandodes_131_petrarca_128kb.mp3
(4.34)
Pier

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » January 15th, 2022, 1:31 pm

Eysiss wrote: ↑January 15th, 2022, 8:28 am
Algy Pug wrote: ↑January 12th, 2022, 3:35 pm ...
Hi Algy
here my suggestion for sect. 132, Ode 6.

at 0:26, pag 79, 4 lines to bottom, I hear "those eyes" instead of "these eyes"
at 3:37, pag 91, 3rd line, I hear something like "thaw art" instead of "Thyself art"

Emanuela

Section 132 corrected and reuploaded

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sonnetsandodes_132_petrarca_128kb.mp3
4:00

Cheers

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » January 15th, 2022, 1:45 pm

Sections 140 and 148 corrected and reuploaded.

Cheers

Iunta4Ios · Post by **Iunta4Ios** » January 16th, 2022, 7:59 am

Here the revised section 133, sonetto IXX:
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sonnetsandodes_133_petrarca_128kb.mp3
(1:31)

The duration of section 135 is actually 1:28 (1:18 was a typing error of mine).
It seems to me that the recording at 0:32 is already correct: please confirm to me what I have to change there.
Pier

Iunta4Ios · Post by **Iunta4Ios** » January 16th, 2022, 8:21 am

Excuse me a short note:
Reading sonnet XXI, I was taken by surprise by the sharp change in tone

:
What could Laura have done to our poet? it is true that she never encouraged him, but what could she have ever done to deserve such strong accents so offensive and harsh?
Then I remembered that the Canzoniere does not speak only of Laura and, reading with greater attention, I realized that the poem is aimed at the corrupt condition of the church of his time.
Pier