(Complete) The Twin Mystery by Nicholas Carter - lt

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15 PL OK. Thank you, Paul.
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Just one thing on PL
3:18 tongue trip on "the gentlemen"

thanks,
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vviera wrote: November 2nd, 2021, 7:21 pm
Just one thing on PL
3:18 tongue trip on "the gentlemen"

thanks,
Verla
I was hoping it would be taken as an, um, unusual artistic interpretation. Here's the fix:

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_16_carter_128kb.mp3 (13:46)
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tobester123 wrote: November 3rd, 2021, 3:29 pm
vviera wrote: November 2nd, 2021, 7:21 pm
Just one thing on PL
3:18 tongue trip on "the gentlemen"

thanks,
Verla
I was hoping it would be taken as an, um, unusual artistic interpretation. Here's the fix:

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_16_carter_128kb.mp3 (13:46)
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tobester123 wrote: November 3rd, 2021, 3:29 pm I was hoping it would be taken as an, um, unusual artistic interpretation. Here's the fix:

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_16_carter_128kb.mp3 (13:46)
In all fairness to you, I did listen to it 3 or 4 times before I could make up my mind. In the end, I decided it was just an ooch past the "that phrase kinda sounds like he might be tipsy" line of slurring vs. clarity :lol:

PL OK, thank you.
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Chapter 13 is ready for PL! Chapter 14 is recorded I will be editing and uploading tomorrow.

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_13_carter_128kb.mp3 (12:04)
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KDonProduction wrote: November 27th, 2021, 5:19 pm Chapter 13 is ready for PL! Chapter 14 is recorded I will be editing and uploading tomorrow.

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_13_carter_128kb.mp3 (12:04)
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tobester123 wrote: November 3rd, 2021, 3:29 pm
I was hoping it would be taken as an, um, unusual artistic interpretation. Here's the fix:

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_16_carter_128kb.mp3 (13:46)
Sorry, I dropped the ball on this.
Sec. 16 PL OK.
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KDonProduction wrote: November 27th, 2021, 5:19 pm Chapter 13 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_13_carter_128kb.mp3 (12:04)
Hi Kyle, A few notes:

cut beginning silence to between .5 and 1 sec.
9:21 text, said - heard, asked
9:28 "livery" is pronounced like the organ meat, liver (ick), so LI-ver-ee
9:54 word "just" omitted - changes the meaning of the sentence
10:16 not sure if this is a tongue trip or editing glitch - where it says "same maybe"
10:50 text, whenever - heard, wherever

Thanks. You have an expressive reading style. I'll look forward to 14 :)
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Thank you for the feedback Verla! I made the edits to the file below.

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_13_carter_128kb.mp3 (12:05)
vviera wrote: November 27th, 2021, 8:33 pm
KDonProduction wrote: November 27th, 2021, 5:19 pm Chapter 13 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_13_carter_128kb.mp3 (12:04)
Hi Kyle, A few notes:

cut beginning silence to between .5 and 1 sec.
9:21 text, said - heard, asked
9:28 "livery" is pronounced like the organ meat, liver (ick), so LI-ver-ee
9:54 word "just" omitted - changes the meaning of the sentence
10:16 not sure if this is a tongue trip or editing glitch - where it says "same maybe"
10:50 text, whenever - heard, wherever

Thanks. You have an expressive reading style. I'll look forward to 14 :)
Verla
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KDonProduction wrote: November 28th, 2021, 2:51 pm Thank you for the feedback Verla! I made the edits to the file below.

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_13_carter_128kb.mp3 (12:05)
Great corrections - really smooth. Marked PL OK!
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KDonProduction wrote: November 28th, 2021, 3:34 pm Chapter 14 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_14_carter_128kb.mp3 (16:59)
Oops! Could you please go back and check your edits from 3:30 forward, then resubmit? In less than a minute, I found these four:
3:30 repeated phrase "though two of the attendants were walking off hastily"
3:48 repeated phrase "Patsy crept up as closely as he could"
4:08 repeated phrase "But you ain't sure he's onto the case"
4:22 repeated phrase "If you do, you'll lose your pay."

Did you maybe upload the wrong file?

Lynne, please leave the MW designated as "Assigned."

Thanks! We'll figure it out.
Verla

p.s. It's nice to know I'm not the only one who has to repeat and repeat sometimes to get it right!
Cheers, VERLA

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vviera wrote: November 28th, 2021, 4:50 pm
KDonProduction wrote: November 28th, 2021, 3:34 pm Chapter 14 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_14_carter_128kb.mp3 (16:59)
Oops! Could you please go back and check your edits from 3:30 forward, then resubmit? In less than a minute, I found these four:
3:30 repeated phrase "though two of the attendants were walking off hastily"
3:48 repeated phrase "Patsy crept up as closely as he could"
4:08 repeated phrase "But you ain't sure he's onto the case"
4:22 repeated phrase "If you do, you'll lose your pay."

Did you maybe upload the wrong file?

Lynne, please leave the MW designated as "Assigned."

Thanks! We'll figure it out.
Verla

p.s. It's nice to know I'm not the only one who has to repeat and repeat sometimes to get it right!
It’s still assigned… no one changed it yet :D
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I did another listen and removed a few more repeated phrases! Thank you for your help.

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_14_carter_128kb.mp3 (16:38)

I definitely need to repeat some lines multiple times to get it juuuust right haha.
vviera wrote: November 28th, 2021, 4:50 pm
KDonProduction wrote: November 28th, 2021, 3:34 pm Chapter 14 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/twinmystery_14_carter_128kb.mp3 (16:59)
Oops! Could you please go back and check your edits from 3:30 forward, then resubmit? In less than a minute, I found these four:
3:30 repeated phrase "though two of the attendants were walking off hastily"
3:48 repeated phrase "Patsy crept up as closely as he could"
4:08 repeated phrase "But you ain't sure he's onto the case"
4:22 repeated phrase "If you do, you'll lose your pay."

Did you maybe upload the wrong file?

Lynne, please leave the MW designated as "Assigned."

Thanks! We'll figure it out.
Verla

p.s. It's nice to know I'm not the only one who has to repeat and repeat sometimes to get it right!
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