COMPLETE: The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

[MakennaMarch]

At the end of section 43 should I simply say "end of chapter"? Or "end of series" since it is the end of multiple books?

[knotyouraveragejo]

I appreciate the offer, Makenna. I'm going to give those a little more time before I decide that the chapters need to be redone. If it comes to that, I will be happy to take you up on it.

As for the end of section 43 - I would say the typical end of chapter #, volume #, etc and then please also add End of The Younger Sister by Catherine Ann Hubback.

To be honest, I don't know what the readers of the last chapter of each "book" have said so I'll have to listen to the ends of those sections to check.

[ADKreader1122]

Hi Nichole,
Here are the PL notes for Vol. 3 chapter 10:
--at 3:18 please change "coalition" to "collation" in "A collation in a marquee..."
--at 11:25 omit the incorrect version of "...the feeling of interest which could incite him..."
--at 11:58-12:04 please omit the break in recording and background noise; remove the incorrect version of "...like all women who love their husbands..."

Thank you,
Lora

[MakennaMarch]

Sounds good. Thanks, Jo.

[knotyouraveragejo]

Hi Nichole,
Here are the PL notes for Vol. 3 chapter 10:
--at 3:18 please change "coalition" to "collation" in "A collation in a marquee..."
--at 11:25 omit the incorrect version of "...the feeling of interest which could incite him..."
--at 11:58-12:04 please omit the break in recording and background noise; remove the incorrect version of "...like all women who love their husbands..."

Thank you,
Lora

Hi Lora - I made an attempt at fixing this section since Nichole hasn't picked up my PM. See what you think -

edited version here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_34_hubback_128kb (This is currently the file linked in the MW) 29:28

original file here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_34_hubback_128kb2021_10_08_17_58_23.mp3 29:45

[knotyouraveragejo]

Hi Nichole,
I am sorry it has taken me so long to PL your submissions. For Vol. 3 Chapter 8 I have the following notes:
--at 20:18 please change "convenience" to "convalescence" in the phrase "...for she had, on her convalescence..."
--at 27:56 please change "brother-in-law's" to "brother's" in "...her brother's little menage..."
--at 28:29 please omit the repetition of "If she could only..."
--at 34:21 please change "visibility" to "visibly" in "...on the growing visibly growing attachment..."

Thank you very much,
Lora

Also for section 32: this one was a little more difficult - see what you think, it's not perfect, but hopefully good enough.

edited version here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_32_hubback_128kb 40:05

original file here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_32_hubback_128kb2021_10_08_17_58_33.mp3 40:06

[ADKreader1122]

Jo,
These two sections sound great; you did a fabulous job and I've marked them both PL Okay.

Thanks so much,
Lora

[knotyouraveragejo]

Thanks!

[ADKreader1122]

Hi Jo,
Here are the PL notes for Vol. 3, chapters 11 and 12. I am hoping that perhaps you can work your editing magic on them.
Chapter 11:
--at 4:14 change "affection" to "affectation" in "...and a little affectation..."
--at 6:44 change "coalition" to "collation" in "...was invited to the collation..."
--at 18:26 change "be convinced" to "condescend" in "You must condescend to be beholden..."
--at 19:21 change "from" to "for" in "For whom shall I dip?"
Chapter 12:
--at 3:20 change "shrouded" to "showed" in "...her white crape gown showed..."
--at 26:37 change "articulated" to "accurately" in "...the address had been accurately surveyed..."

Thanks so much,
Lora

[knotyouraveragejo]

Some of those will be a challenge, but I'll see what I can do...

[knotyouraveragejo]

Section 11 ready for Spot PL.

[knotyouraveragejo]

Section 12 also ready for Spot PL.

[ADKreader1122]

These fixes will work quite well--thanks, Jo! PL Okay for those two sections.

Lora

[knotyouraveragejo]

[ADKreader1122]

PL Okay for Vol. 3 chapter 13.

L.