[COMPLETE] Captain Billy's Whiz Bang, Vol. 3, No. 28, December, 1921, by W. H. Fawcett (1885 - 1940) - icequeen

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » September 16th, 2021, 11:14 am

oogiesragdoll wrote: ↑September 14th, 2021, 8:40 pm Here is Section 6

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_06_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Duration: 3:38

Bahaha!!! That Love letter!

Section 6 is PL OK

RyanG · Post by **RyanG** » September 20th, 2021, 6:31 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_17_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (6:17)

Here is section 17. I'll finish section 18 tomorrow.

Thanks for the patience.

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 20th, 2021, 8:11 pm

RyanG wrote: ↑September 20th, 2021, 6:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_17_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Here is section 17. I'll finish section 18 tomorrow.

Thanks for the patience.

Thank you so much!
This is Ready for PL

Please remember to give us the file length for both of these as mm:ss

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » September 21st, 2021, 1:34 pm

RyanG wrote: ↑September 20th, 2021, 6:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_17_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Here is section 17. I'll finish section 18 tomorrow.

Thanks for the patience.

Terrific

PL OK, Ryan

RyanG · Post by **RyanG** » September 21st, 2021, 3:41 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_18_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (6:03)

Here's section 18. I made sure to include the timestamp this time!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 21st, 2021, 6:19 pm

RyanG wrote: ↑September 21st, 2021, 3:41 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_18_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (6:03)

Here's section 18. I made sure to include the timestamp this time!

Thank you!
Still don't have the file length for 17 . . .

RyanG · Post by **RyanG** » September 21st, 2021, 7:55 pm

silverquill wrote: ↑September 21st, 2021, 6:19 pm
RyanG wrote: ↑September 21st, 2021, 3:41 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_18_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (6:03)

Here's section 18. I made sure to include the timestamp this time!
Thank you!
Still don't have the file length for 17 . . .

Oh, sorry! I edited my first post a moment ago. The file length is (6:17). Thank you for reminding me.

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » September 23rd, 2021, 12:26 pm

RyanG wrote: ↑September 21st, 2021, 3:41 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_18_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (6:03)

Here's section 18. I made sure to include the timestamp this time!

Thank you so much, Ryan! Section 18 is PL OK

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 23rd, 2021, 8:33 pm

Thank you!
Only two sections remaining to come in.
I've sent PMs to both readers.

In the meantime, I'm going to launch another issue.
I'll post the link here when it is ready.

KDonProduction · Post by **KDonProduction** » September 26th, 2021, 5:45 pm

Section 19 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_19_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (4:40)

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 26th, 2021, 8:18 pm

KDonProduction wrote: ↑September 26th, 2021, 5:45 pm Section 19 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_19_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (4:40)

Thank you so much!
Ready for PL
Stay tuned for your reportl

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » September 27th, 2021, 9:33 am

KDonProduction wrote: ↑September 26th, 2021, 5:45 pm Section 19 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_19_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (4:40)

Hi, Kyle! This is very nicely read - sounds like you had a little fun with it, too, which makes it interesting.

I have a suggestion for you, but it's up to whether you want to do any editing, or just call Section 19 PL OK as it is:

Because this is a running list of short items, when a listener is not looking at the text while listening, it takes more time for the mind to process a switch from one item to the next. Giving a pause approximately twice as long between each of the items as what's there now will aid the ear in distinguishing the different mini topics.

Let me know if you decide you want to paste in longer pauses between the items, or if you prefer that I mark this PL OK

KDonProduction · Post by **KDonProduction** » September 27th, 2021, 6:47 pm

Took your advice and expanded the pauses between the different ads. I think it flows much better.

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_19_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (4:57)

Let me know what you think!

LCaulkins wrote: ↑September 27th, 2021, 9:33 am
KDonProduction wrote: ↑September 26th, 2021, 5:45 pm Section 19 is ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_19_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (4:40)
Hi, Kyle! This is very nicely read - sounds like you had a little fun with it, too, which makes it interesting.

I have a suggestion for you, but it's up to whether you want to do any editing, or just call Section 19 PL OK as it is:

Because this is a running list of short items, when a listener is not looking at the text while listening, it takes more time for the mind to process a switch from one item to the next. Giving a pause approximately twice as long between each of the items as what's there now will aid the ear in distinguishing the different mini topics.

Let me know if you decide you want to paste in longer pauses between the items, or if you prefer that I mark this PL OK

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 27th, 2021, 8:23 pm

Ready for Spot PL

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » September 28th, 2021, 5:31 am

KDonProduction wrote: ↑September 27th, 2021, 6:47 pm Took your advice and expanded the pauses between the different ads. I think it flows much better.

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_19_fawcett_128kb.mp3 (4:57)

Let me know what you think!

hey, that's really nice!!

Section 19 is PL OK

Thanks so much for contributing