COMPLETE: Lasers, by Hal Hellman -jo

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Oops, I´ve just realized section 8 has already been claimed by Roselbex. If I may, I´ll take section 9 then.
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Roselbex wrote: September 13th, 2021, 1:54 pm Hi, I have uploaded Section 7 Length 7:00
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lasers_07_hellman_128kb.mp3

Two places where figures were discussed, I eliminated some words but I think the paragraphs still make sense. The instances are at 4:25-4:50 Page 30 and 5:23-5:49 Page 32. I will redo them if you want. Thank you
I'll listen to this in the morning, and I've assigned you Section 8.
~ Larry
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Thiago wrote: September 16th, 2021, 10:01 pm Oops, I´ve just realized section 8 has already been claimed by Roselbex. If I may, I´ll take section 9 then.
Yes, I hadn't updated the MW yet.
But, I'm glad to assign you Section 9

Thank you for your interest in this project.

That now brings us to FULL!
~ Larry
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silverquill wrote: September 4th, 2021, 7:40 pm
Thank you for your interest in this project!
I've assigned Sections 4 and 5 to you.
Hi Larry - I am going to leave section 4 as is. I sent it to a radio guy friend of mine and he couldn't hear the flutter on the recleaned file.

I think I found the problem, which was a mike box being too close to its own cable. I'll proceed with 5. Thanks, Verla
Cheers, VERLA

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Roselbex wrote: September 13th, 2021, 1:54 pm Hi, I have uploaded Section 7 Length 7:00
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lasers_07_hellman_128kb.mp3

Two places where figures were discussed, I eliminated some words but I think the paragraphs still make sense. The instances are at 4:25-4:50 Page 30 and 5:23-5:49 Page 32. I will redo them if you want. Thank you
Thank you!
I think the way you handled those instances is excellent! :thumbs:
The only thing that needs to be fixed is the footnote.

At 2:50 you say, "footnote 13" but don't read it, and instead repeat "footnote 13" and read it at then end.

Instead of "footnote 13" just say "footnote" then paste the reading of the footnote back there at about 2:50, and at the end of the footnote, just say "end footnote" and continue reading. Of course cut it from the end.

Upload your corrected recording under the same file name and post the link here again.

Other than that this is a great recording!
I'm looking forward to your next one. :D
~ Larry
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Cheers, VERLA

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Thank you! Absolutely prefect, and very well read.
No hint of that mystery noise either.

I have the next booklet in this series prepped to launch soon.
~ Larry
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silverquill wrote: September 17th, 2021, 7:30 pm
Thank you! Absolutely prefect, and very well read.
No hint of that mystery noise either.

I have the next booklet in this series prepped to launch soon.
Thank you, and yes, it was definitely that cable too close that was causing the noise.
Cheers, VERLA

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I have reuploaded Section 7 with corrections Length 7:15
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lasers_07_hellman_128kb.mp3
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silverquill wrote: September 17th, 2021, 7:30 pm
I have the next booklet in this series prepped to launch soon.
Hi Larry - I am unsubbing this topic. You can PM me when you have the next one ready to go.

Verla
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Roselbex wrote: September 18th, 2021, 5:07 pm I have uploaded Section 8 Length 12:14
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lasers_07_hellman_128kb.mp3
Oops! You've uploaded this as Section 7
Please rename and upload again.

I've got the original 7 as revised, and it is PL OK
~ Larry
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Roselbex wrote: September 27th, 2021, 12:15 pm I have reuploaded Section 8 Length 12:14
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lasers_08_hellman_128kb.mp3
Just one thing to correct:
9:58 there is a stumble to fix.

Optional: The two footnotes in this section don't really add any substantive information to the article -- just references to other booklets, so these could be cut out. I wasn't going to mention it if there wasn't something else to fix. Overall, excellent job of reading!

I will be launching another in this series soon, but I don't think it is one mentioned here. :wink:
~ Larry
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I have reuploaded Section 8 with corrections Length 11:45
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lasers_08_hellman_128kb.mp3

Another booklet would be great, I'll try to watch for it, thank you
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