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SaraHale
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Post by SaraHale » April 19th, 2021, 1:43 am

Hey, Tracie! :D

Here are this week's sections.

Section 5, 7, and 8 are ready for PL. Feel free to take your time.

More sections for next Monday!
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Recording: Nuggets of the New Thought
PLing: The Mystery of a Hansom Cab, The Dawn, and The Story of Cairo

listenclosely
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Post by listenclosely » April 19th, 2021, 6:58 am

SaraHale wrote:
April 19th, 2021, 1:43 am
Hey, Tracie! :D

Here are this week's sections.

Section 5, 7, and 8 are ready for PL. Feel free to take your time.

More sections for next Monday!
Sara,
Looking forward to it. Your voice and expression have a wonderful melody!
Tracie

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Post by SaraHale » April 19th, 2021, 8:29 am

listenclosely wrote:
April 19th, 2021, 6:58 am
Sara,
Looking forward to it. Your voice and expression have a wonderful melody!
Tracie
Thank you so much! You truly made my day. :9:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Recording: Nuggets of the New Thought
PLing: The Mystery of a Hansom Cab, The Dawn, and The Story of Cairo

listenclosely
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Post by listenclosely » April 19th, 2021, 11:43 am

PL Notes for Sara

Section 5: Look Aloft
2:58 "invariably" read as inarivbly
6:56 "throughout" read as through

Section 7: In the Depths of the Soul
6:28 "caste" read as casset
7:18 "instances" read as inasistances

Section 8: Forget It
No corrections needed

SaraHale
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Post by SaraHale » April 19th, 2021, 11:46 am

listenclosely wrote:
April 19th, 2021, 11:43 am
PL Notes for Sara

Section 5: Look Aloft
2:58 "invariably" read as inarivbly
6:56 "throughout" read as through

Section 7: In the Depths of the Soul
6:28 "caste" read as casset
7:18 "instances" read as inasistances

Section 8: Forget It
No corrections needed
Thanks, Tracie. I'll fix them as soon as I can.
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Recording: Nuggets of the New Thought
PLing: The Mystery of a Hansom Cab, The Dawn, and The Story of Cairo

SaraHale
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Post by SaraHale » April 20th, 2021, 5:47 am

Hey Tracie!

Section 5 and 7 are ready for spot PL.

Section 9 and 10 are ready for PL.

I want to record while the weather here is still nice. So, I may upload a few sections before Monday (hopefully). But you can take your time if you need to. :thumbs:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Recording: Nuggets of the New Thought
PLing: The Mystery of a Hansom Cab, The Dawn, and The Story of Cairo

listenclosely
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Post by listenclosely » April 20th, 2021, 11:00 am

PL Notes for Sara

Section 9= The Kindergarten of God
8:19 disillusionment read as disillusment

Section 10=The Human Wet Blanket
3:24 heretical read as heterical

Spot check for Sect 5 and 7 sounded great. Thanks!

SaraHale
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Post by SaraHale » April 21st, 2021, 8:46 am

Thanks, Tracie!

Here are the edited PL Notes:

Section 9= The Kindergarten of God
@8:18 - His disillusionment spoils not the sport

Section 10=The Human Wet Blanket
@3:21 - indulging in such heretical notions

I've included what I've recorded along with the word that needed correction. Are the edited sections very noticeable? And have I said them correctly this time?
listenclosely wrote:
April 20th, 2021, 11:00 am
PL Notes for Sara

Section 9= The Kindergarten of God
8:19 disillusionment read as disillusment

Section 10=The Human Wet Blanket
3:24 heretical read as heterical

Spot check for Sect 5 and 7 sounded great. Thanks!
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Recording: Nuggets of the New Thought
PLing: The Mystery of a Hansom Cab, The Dawn, and The Story of Cairo

listenclosely
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Joined: March 25th, 2021, 8:36 am

Post by listenclosely » April 21st, 2021, 12:32 pm

SaraHale wrote:
April 21st, 2021, 8:46 am
Thanks, Tracie!

Here are the edited PL Notes:

Section 9= The Kindergarten of God
@8:18 - His disillusionment spoils not the sport

Section 10=The Human Wet Blanket
@3:21 - indulging in such heretical notions

I've included what I've recorded along with the word that needed correction. Are the edited sections very noticeable? And have I said them correctly this time?
listenclosely wrote:
April 20th, 2021, 11:00 am
PL Notes for Sara

Section 9= The Kindergarten of God
8:19 disillusionment read as disillusment

Section 10=The Human Wet Blanket
3:24 heretical read as heterical

Spot check for Sect 5 and 7 sounded great. Thanks!
Hi Sara,
The corrections for 9 and 10 are great. The edited sections are smooth and seamless!

SaraHale
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Post by SaraHale » April 22nd, 2021, 3:06 am

listenclosely wrote:
April 21st, 2021, 12:32 pm
Hi Sara,
The corrections for 9 and 10 are great. The edited sections are smooth and seamless!
Thanks, Tracie! :9: I'm happy to hear that.

Well, section 11 is ready for PL. Enjoy! :thumbs:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Recording: Nuggets of the New Thought
PLing: The Mystery of a Hansom Cab, The Dawn, and The Story of Cairo

listenclosely
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Post by listenclosely » April 22nd, 2021, 11:39 am

SaraHale wrote:
April 22nd, 2021, 3:06 am
listenclosely wrote:
April 21st, 2021, 12:32 pm
Hi Sara,
The corrections for 9 and 10 are great. The edited sections are smooth and seamless!
Thanks, Tracie! :9: I'm happy to hear that.

Well, section 11 is ready for PL. Enjoy! :thumbs:
Sara,
Section 11 is all good!

SaraHale
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Post by SaraHale » April 22nd, 2021, 11:43 am

listenclosely wrote:
April 22nd, 2021, 11:39 am
Sara,
Section 11 is all good!
Thanks, Tracie! :9:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Recording: Nuggets of the New Thought
PLing: The Mystery of a Hansom Cab, The Dawn, and The Story of Cairo

SaraHale
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Joined: June 17th, 2016, 1:20 pm
Location: Egypt

Post by SaraHale » April 24th, 2021, 8:37 am

Hey, Tracie!

Section 19 and 21 are ready for PL.
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D
Recording: Nuggets of the New Thought
PLing: The Mystery of a Hansom Cab, The Dawn, and The Story of Cairo

listenclosely
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Post by listenclosely » April 26th, 2021, 9:00 am

SaraHale wrote:
April 24th, 2021, 8:37 am
Hey, Tracie!

Section 19 and 21 are ready for PL.
Hi Sara! Here are the PL Notes.

Section 19, 11:49 "jostled" read as joiced
Section 21, 4:07 "Bernard" read as Bernand

Thanks, Tracie

listenclosely
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Post by listenclosely » April 26th, 2021, 11:36 am

listenclosely wrote:
April 26th, 2021, 9:00 am
SaraHale wrote:
April 24th, 2021, 8:37 am
Hey, Tracie!

Section 19 and 21 are ready for PL.
Hi Sara! Here are the PL Notes.

Section 19, 11:49 "jostled" read as joiced
Section 21, 4:07 "Bernard" read as Bernand

Section 25, no errors = PL OK

Thanks, Tracie

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