Very Short Stories And Verses For Children By Lucy Clifford - lt

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fromdehart
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Post by fromdehart » April 7th, 2021, 4:14 pm

Hello Roma,
Here is Section 1- Master Willie:
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_01_clifford_128kb.mp3

Length: 00:12:31

Patrice :)
"You will know your path by the fun of it." :D

fromdehart
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Post by fromdehart » April 7th, 2021, 4:54 pm

Hi Roma,

Here is Section 2 - Swinging:
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_02_clifford_128kb.mp3

Length: 00:01:32

Patrice :)
"You will know your path by the fun of it." :D

slgill
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Post by slgill » April 8th, 2021, 7:35 am

Here is Section 12, "The Violets"- https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_12_clifford_128kb.mp3

length- 03:39

Hope you enjoy!

:) Sue

cleosteinhauser
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Post by cleosteinhauser » April 8th, 2021, 2:56 pm

Hi!
Here is section 18: The Proud Boy
Length- 2:36
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_18_clifford_128kb.mp3

Here is section 19: Seeking the Violets
Length- 2:00
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_19_clifford_128kb.mp3

Also, thank you so much for your help and patience. This is pretty new to me and I'm sorry it's taken a little while to get better!

slgill
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Post by slgill » April 8th, 2021, 3:03 pm

Here is section 22- https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_22_clifford_128kb.mp3

length- 01:40

Ugh!! This little poem took me A LOT longer than it should have! :cry: I don't know why, but the evenness of the verse volumes was giving me fits on this one. Hopefully it's not too bad, but if it is, let me know and I'll try to mess with it some more.

Sue

ConnorE53
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Post by ConnorE53 » April 9th, 2021, 12:06 pm

RomaSingh wrote:
April 2nd, 2021, 11:14 am
ConnorE53 wrote:
March 31st, 2021, 10:16 am
Here is section 11 The Poor Little Doll, all sorted =)
It is 3:17 long =)
Here is the link to the recording https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_11_clifford_128kb.mp3.mp3
I will be posting the rest of my work today as well, been tinkering with them a few days =)
At 1:27 you say, "Presently he looked up at the doll again and yawned." The actual line is "Presently he looked up again and yawned." At 1:38 you say "I'll take that doll and hang it up on the apple tree to scare away the sparrows." The actual line is "'ll take that doll and hang it up to the apple tree to scare away the sparrows." The beginning could also use a little more silence, as you're right at the 0.5 mark. Please re-upload with the same file name. Thanks!
Hello, I will take the comments into account and get onto making the adjustments, should be able to next week =)
Thank you so much for the feedback =D

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Post by RomaSingh » April 9th, 2021, 6:55 pm

slgill wrote:
April 6th, 2021, 2:57 pm
Hi Roma,

Here are the files for sections 13 "The Fiddler" and 17 "A Coming Down the Street":

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_13_clifford_128kb.mp3 length- 01:24

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_17_clifford_128kb.mp3 length- 01:51

Hope all is well with these!

:) Sue
Thanks, Sue! Both are PL OK!

RomaSingh
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Post by RomaSingh » April 9th, 2021, 7:02 pm

abahman wrote:
April 6th, 2021, 7:51 pm
Hi Roma, here's section 33 for you. Please let me know if you need anything else. Thanks!

Section 33 "Smut"
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_33_clifford_128kb.mp3 (length: 3:06)
In the beginning, we aim for 0.5-1 seconds of silence, you have more. At 1:09 you say "Then Smut went and sat down on the lord's writing-table." The actual line is "Then Smut went and sat him down on the lord's writing-table." At 1:49 you say "Never before did I see a little dicky-bird with a furry coat, a long tail, and little white teeth." The actual line is "Never before did I see a dicky-bird with a furry coat, a long tail, and little white teeth."

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Post by RomaSingh » April 9th, 2021, 7:06 pm

qthemusic123 wrote:
April 7th, 2021, 12:35 am
RomaSingh wrote:
April 6th, 2021, 10:41 am
qthemusic123 wrote:
April 6th, 2021, 7:45 am
Hi, Chapter 27 The Tinkers Marriage (01:19)
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_27_clifford_128kb.mp3

and
Chapter 32 A First Love Making (01:36)
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_32_clifford_128kb.mp3

Ready for PL.

Thanks
Sue.
Section 27: In the beginning, you have over a second of silence, we aim for 0.5-1 seconds of silence.
Section 32: PL OK!
Hi, Here is the correction.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_27_clifford_128kb.mp3
1:19
PL OK, thanks!

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Post by nbvoices » April 12th, 2021, 6:29 pm

Hello, here are my 3 selections, 26- the Kite, ,37- the Pink Parasol ,42- the Little Maid. Let me know if there are any issues. thanks. Nancy


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_26_clifford_128kb.mp3 2.80 KB length: 2:59

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_37_clifford_128kb.mp3 3.44 KB length: 3:40

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_42_clifford_128kb.mp3 1.29 KB length: 1:22
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RomaSingh
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Post by RomaSingh » April 13th, 2021, 11:28 am

EvenFlow wrote:
April 7th, 2021, 1:28 pm
Here is the recording for section 9:
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_09_clifford_128kb.mp3
[03:29]
In the beginning, we aim for 0.5-1 seconds of silence, you have more.
Noise reduction would be beneficial in the ending silence. Let me know if you don't know how to do this. :wink:
At 30 seconds, you say, "It seemed like a dream *where* he stood up after a sleep in the field, and looked over the wall, and saw the garden, and the flowers, and the children playing all about." The actual line is "It seemed like a dream *when* he stood up after a sleep in the field, and looked over the wall, and saw the garden, and the flowers, and the children playing all about."
At 50 seconds you say "He looked at the *gardener* before him". The actual line is "He looked at the *garden* before him.
At 57 seconds you say "It was the world which belonged to children." The actual line is "It was the world which belonged to *the* children."
At 1:11 you stutter a little bit, if you can clip that part out, that would be great.
At 1:38 you say, "We do not know," the *child* said." The actual line is "We do not know," the *children* said."
At 1:50 you say, "What have you to do?" the *child* asked." The actual line is "What have you to do?" the *children* asked."
At 2:22 you stutter again, you can go ahead and clip out that part.
At 2:25 you say, "But they hardly heard the last words, for he was already off." The actual line is "But they hardly heard the last words, for he was already *far* off."
You can clip out the "on April 6th, 2021" at 3:20.

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Post by RomaSingh » April 13th, 2021, 11:35 am

ABVoice wrote:
April 7th, 2021, 3:39 pm
RomaSingh wrote:
April 6th, 2021, 10:34 am
ABVoice wrote:
April 4th, 2021, 8:24 am


Hello,
This is the cleaned up version of Section#39 The White Rabbits. I tried to do all the things that you said.

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_39_clifford_128kb.mp3

Please let me know if I have to do anything else.
Thanks.
Two things: In the beginning, you have less than 0.5 seconds of silence, we aim for 0.5-1 seconds of silence. Noise reduction could be beneficial as well, you can use my instructions I gave before.
Hi Roma,
Here is another version of Section#39 The White Rabbits. I double checked it and think that everything is good now. Thank you for your patience. I'm doing the editing for the first time.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_39_clifford_128kb.mp3
Regards,
Avani
Yes, editing does take a while getting used to; I bet you in no time you'll be a pro at it. As for the recording, there is just one note on it. It falls out of the target range at 94.3 dB. Please re-upload with the same file name. Thanks!

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Post by RomaSingh » April 13th, 2021, 11:36 am

ConnorE53 wrote:
April 9th, 2021, 12:06 pm
RomaSingh wrote:
April 2nd, 2021, 11:14 am
ConnorE53 wrote:
March 31st, 2021, 10:16 am
Here is section 11 The Poor Little Doll, all sorted =)
It is 3:17 long =)
Here is the link to the recording https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_11_clifford_128kb.mp3.mp3
I will be posting the rest of my work today as well, been tinkering with them a few days =)
At 1:27 you say, "Presently he looked up at the doll again and yawned." The actual line is "Presently he looked up again and yawned." At 1:38 you say "I'll take that doll and hang it up on the apple tree to scare away the sparrows." The actual line is "'ll take that doll and hang it up to the apple tree to scare away the sparrows." The beginning could also use a little more silence, as you're right at the 0.5 mark. Please re-upload with the same file name. Thanks!
Hello, I will take the comments into account and get onto making the adjustments, should be able to next week =)
Thank you so much for the feedback =D
Awesome, thanks!

fromdehart
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Post by fromdehart » April 13th, 2021, 4:05 pm

"You will know your path by the fun of it." :D

RomaSingh
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Post by RomaSingh » April 14th, 2021, 11:12 am

fromdehart wrote:
April 7th, 2021, 4:14 pm
Hello Roma,
Here is Section 1- Master Willie:
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/veryshortstories_01_clifford_128kb.mp3

Length: 00:12:31

Patrice :)
Such a pleasant recording, the storyline is so beautiful! PL OK!

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