[essays] The Tocsin of Revolt by Brander Matthews -ck

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Post by Carolin » July 30th, 2018, 1:53 am

Thank you so much!
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Post by aniroo » July 30th, 2018, 7:19 am

MrsHand wrote:
July 27th, 2018, 5:57 pm
Here's Section 14, 26:29


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Section 14. One little edit needed. At 24:14 there is a false start of "and the worn" then a click and the words "and the war worn spearman" Just need to delete the false start and the click and we're good to go! :D
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Post by Carolin » July 30th, 2018, 11:26 pm

Thank you :thumbs:
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Post by Carolin » August 6th, 2018, 10:52 pm

Thank you :thumbs:
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Post by aniroo » August 7th, 2018, 10:06 am

MrsHand wrote:
August 6th, 2018, 5:39 pm
The revised 14, 26:27.


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Section #14 revised PL OK :clap: Thanks !

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Post by Carolin » August 7th, 2018, 10:48 pm

Thank you :D
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Post by allanrtate » August 13th, 2018, 12:21 pm

Hello,

I just wanted to check in and say that I have been working on my essay even though you've not heard from me. I recorded some excerpts for my VO coach at Gravy for the Brain. After going back and forth with her a few times, I'm feeling that the deliver is sounding good and the time has come to move forward. I will start recording for real tomorrow and hope to complete by end of next week. BTW, I'll be on vacation in Vermont Thursday to Monday. This is fun and challenging. I appreciate the opportunity to do this.

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Post by Carolin » August 14th, 2018, 3:17 am

Thank you for checking in alan!
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Post by allanrtate » September 13th, 2018, 7:30 pm

Hi Carolyn,

The 2 month deadline is tomorrow, so I wanted to let you know that I'm close to being done. I'm pushing to post by EOD tomorrow, but may need to work this weekend to finish up. As I think you know, this is my first attempt at an essay this long. The process has been fun & challenging. I learned a lot! I did, however, underestimate the time required. Thanks in advance for understanding. I think you'll enjoy the end result.

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Post by Carolin » September 14th, 2018, 2:23 am

Thank you allan!
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Post by allanrtate » September 24th, 2018, 12:36 am

Hello Carolin,

My recording has been uploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/tocsinofrevolt_03_matthews_128kb.mp3

It is 24:36. I welcome feedback.

Enjoy,

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Post by Carolin » September 24th, 2018, 9:25 am

thank you allan! :D
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Post by aniroo » September 24th, 2018, 11:22 am

allanrtate wrote:
September 24th, 2018, 12:36 am
Hello Carolin,

My recording has been uploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/tocsinofrevolt_03_matthews_128kb.mp3

It is 24:36. I welcome feedback.

Enjoy,

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Hi, It is an interesting section and you did a great job reading it. There is just one word I think needs replaced. At about 23:25 there is a sentence something like " and when it may find itself roofed at last, but I heard you read rooted instead of roofed. It is a small difference, but I think a meaningful one. Also, I think some of the other readers read the year at the bottom of the essay. i.e. 1917 It is not necessary, maybe, but it does put the essay in context.

Enjoyed listening and look forward OK ing it when the edit is resubmitted.

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