[COMPLETE] Hast Thou been working?, by Ada Negri - kaz

czandra · Post by **czandra** » September 17th, 2022, 5:41 am

Isad wrote: ↑September 17th, 2022, 2:22 am Scanned book is uploaded on Archive.org

Source : https://archive.org/details/negri-ada-fatalite - p. 136-138

Maintes remerciements, Isad! Une contribution aux archives en même temps, c'est opportuniste!

Czandra

Isad · Post by **Isad** » September 17th, 2022, 5:57 am

czandra wrote: ↑September 17th, 2022, 5:41 am Une contribution aux archives en même temps, c'est opportuniste!

Oui, tant qu'à faire !
Et il y aura une version epub/mobi/doc/odt sur la Bibliothèque numérique romande quand tout sera vérifié une 2e fois

czandra · Post by **czandra** » September 17th, 2022, 6:21 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/hastthouworking_negri_fr_cz_128kb.mp3

3:03

par ailleurs, Isad, je peux faire l'écoute du vôtre si vous voulez....

Czandra

Isad · Post by **Isad** » September 17th, 2022, 6:43 am

czandra wrote: ↑September 17th, 2022, 6:21 am par ailleurs, Isad, je peux faire l'écoute du vôtre si vous voulez....

OK et inversement

czandra · Post by **czandra** » September 17th, 2022, 7:47 am

En effet, c'est tellement bien fait, Isad, que vous m'avez laissée tremblotante moi-même! PLok

J'aime beaucoup votre choix de fin de phrase, je trouvais confondants les -- dans le texte. Les vôtres sont meilleures.

Czandra

Isad · Post by **Isad** » September 17th, 2022, 8:14 am

czandra wrote: ↑September 17th, 2022, 6:21 am https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/hastthouworking_negri_fr_cz_128kb.mp3

Ton enregistrement est convaincant

Il y a juste à 1:51 : j’entends « mais un éclair » au lieu de « mais qu’un éclair »

Isad · Post by **Isad** » September 17th, 2022, 8:15 am

czandra wrote: ↑September 17th, 2022, 7:47 am En effet, c'est tellement bien fait, Isad, que vous m'avez laissée tremblotante moi-même! PLok

Merci

czandra wrote: ↑September 17th, 2022, 7:47 am J'aime beaucoup votre choix de fin de phrase, je trouvais confondants les -- dans le texte. Les vôtres sont meilleures.

Les tirets je pense correspondent à la versification italienne et ce peut aussi être une convention pour prendre moins de place sur la page. Cela me dérangeait un peu. Alors, pour plus de fluidité, je les ai supprimés dans les strophes avant de lire

ShiNeko · Post by **ShiNeko** » September 17th, 2022, 9:22 am

Dear friends, please, tell me if I can mark some of French sections PL OK or not.

czandra · Post by **czandra** » September 17th, 2022, 10:37 am

Yes, Isad's version is PLokay

Czandra

ShiNeko · Post by **ShiNeko** » September 17th, 2022, 11:16 am

czandra wrote: ↑September 17th, 2022, 10:37 am Yes, Isad's version is PLokay

Thanks

Inkell · Post by **Inkell** » September 18th, 2022, 5:47 am

Poem: https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/hastthouworking_negri_en_ik_128kb.mp3
Title: Hast Thou Been Working?
Language: English
Translator: Adelheid Maria von Blomberg (1863-1949)
Source: https://archive.org/details/fateandotherporm00negriala/page/72/mode/2up?view=theater
Length: 02:37

Don't speak any of these languages unfortunately but I can contribute an English version at least

ShiNeko · Post by **ShiNeko** » September 18th, 2022, 7:41 am

Inkell wrote: ↑September 18th, 2022, 5:47 am Don't speak any of these languages unfortunately but I can contribute an English version at least

Thank your for the contribution! Maybe you'll be able to find Spanish translation? There might be one.

Inkell · Post by **Inkell** » September 18th, 2022, 4:58 pm

ShiNeko wrote: ↑September 18th, 2022, 7:41 am
Inkell wrote: ↑September 18th, 2022, 5:47 am Don't speak any of these languages unfortunately but I can contribute an English version at least
Thank your for the contribution! Maybe you'll be able to find Spanish translation? There might be one.

I looked for a bit but couldn't find one, I'm not very good at looking for this stuff though and wasn't really getting any results

NinaBrown · Post by **NinaBrown** » September 19th, 2022, 11:20 am

I have been invited to read the Polish translation. As I explained to ShiNeko I need to find a quiet corner to set myself up for recording again (it's been a while...) but I am happy to try.

I am writing here because I found another Polish translation, one I like much more, the translator is a famous Polish writer and poet Maria Konopnicka (1842-1910), I found this translation on WikiZrodla, the link is here: https://pl.wikisource.org/wiki/Czyś_ty_pracował%3F... the date of publication is 1901. If you think it may be a good idea I can try to record both versions. Please let me know,
-nina-

PS I wish I could read the original Italian, sometimes beautiful translation is not very exact. (sight)

Post by **Kazbek** » September 19th, 2022, 2:24 pm

NinaBrown wrote: ↑September 19th, 2022, 11:20 am I am writing here because I found another Polish translation, one I like much more, the translator is a famous Polish writer and poet Maria Konopnicka (1842-1910), I found this translation on WikiZrodla, the link is here: https://pl.wikisource.org/wiki/Czyś_ty_pracował%3F... the date of publication is 1901. If you think it may be a good idea I can try to record both versions. Please let me know,

I can confirm that it is PD. The URL doesn't work as a link for me because of the trailing dots. It does in this hyperlinked form.

I'll let our BC answer the other questions.