the story of Durof and the pig was so sad really made my heart ache.mireia123 wrote: ↑September 15th, 2021, 2:53 pmMP3: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw030_cabezacomponer_pardo_mc_128kb.mp3
MP3: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw030_cerdohombre_pardo_mc_128kb.mp3
But both stories are excellently narrated
I will mark the second already PL ok.
2 PL notes for La cabeza a componer:
> in the beginning we recommend a silence of about 0.5 to 1 second maximum, everything more seems very long for the listener to wait for the start. You have nearly 2 seconds here, so you could cut a bit from there.
(The other story has the same length in the beginning, but there are no other errors, so I will not fail it just for that )
> at 5:51: repetition, one version can be cut out: "Lo mismo que su antecesor, practicó un registro en la sesera"
thank you
Sonia