[COMPLETE] Щелкунчик и мышиный царь, by Эрнст Теодор Амадей Гофман - tg

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Helga35 wrote: March 10th, 2022, 2:41 am Здравствуйте!Прошу для просчтения следующий текст
11 Побѣда
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Здраствуйте, Ольга! Записала за Вами 11 секцию "Победа".

Спасибо)
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I beg pard, I have neither any possibilities to do the PL now nor can imagine to do it the nearest feature.

Thank you and all the best wishes!
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I can remove you as DPL, but it isn't like there are a whole lot of other Russian-understanding PL's around right now. We can be patient. :)
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Thank you Alexander for letting us know. I am very grateful to you for a good job on PLing this project.
In vain we tried to contact you. I even sent Margarita a PM in fb. Glad to hear from you today. Повертайся живим.

Tricia, I'll be the DPL. Thank you.
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OK, I'll make the change. :)
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HannaPonomarenko wrote: March 10th, 2022, 4:04 am
Helga35 wrote: March 10th, 2022, 2:41 am Здравствуйте!Прошу для просчтения следующий текст
11 Побѣда
Helga35
Здраствуйте, Ольга! Записала за Вами 11 секцию "Победа".

Спасибо)
Здравствуйте, высылаю запись.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selkuncikimysinyjcar_11_gofman_128kb.mp3
Время 15:23
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Helga35 wrote: April 6th, 2022, 2:48 am
Здравствуйте, высылаю запись.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selkuncikimysinyjcar_11_gofman_128kb.mp3
Время 15:23
Здраствуйте, Ольга. Скоро проверю.

Спасибо
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Helga35 wrote: April 6th, 2022, 2:48 am
Здравствуйте, высылаю запись.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selkuncikimysinyjcar_11_gofman_128kb.mp3
Время 15:23
Ольга, Ваш мышиный царь жутко прекрасен! Мне кажется, Вы могли бы читать леденящие душу истории с большИм успехом.

Sec 11 PL notes.
Один добрый человек сделал программу Checker https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Checker для проверки технических характеристик. Рекомендуют закидывать свои записи в неё перед загрузкой на сайт librivox.

Checker показывает, что:
The recording should be in mono sound, not stereo sound.
The volume falls outside of the target range (86–92 dB). У Вас 85,6 dB - немного не хватило до нижнего уровня. Сделайте, пожалуйста, Amplify, а в будущем ориентируйтесь, пожалуйста, на значение 89 dB.

В конце только 4,2 сек тишины. Опытным путём установлено, что некоторые плееры съедают последние 5 сек записи. Чтобы слова в них не попали, добавьте, пожалуйста, ещё 0,8 сек.

0:02 I hear одиннадцать, but there should be одиннадцатая
0:28 missing phrase "Щелкунчик и мышиный царь Эрнста Теодора Амадея Гофмана; переводчик не указан."
02:34-02:38 отвлекающий фоновый звук сигнализации
03:25 бум
04:07 повтор "чтобы чтобы"
10:16 I hear раздвигался, but there should be задвигался
11:24 повтор "всё всё"
11:47 гул
14:17 повтор "он ранен он ранен"
14:42 I hear мышинновых, but there should be мышиного (мышинаго)

В общем Ваш артистизм прям захотелось "трудоустроить". Проектов чтения по ролям у нас было всего два, но, может быть, пора задуматься над следующим)
Спасибо!
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TanG wrote: November 27th, 2021, 9:58 am
Sec 02 PL notes:
(PL level:CC)

01:38 – “вещицу -- шЁлковое платьице,” – I hear – “шелкОвое” (p. - of the book)
Thank you!

Edited part 2
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selkuncikimysinyjcar_02_gofman_128kb.mp3
6:47

edited only these 2 words instead of a phrase because 'убранное пёстрыми лентами' was a difficult task even the first time and I don't want to make it worse =))))

Tan.
Great patching! Sec 02 is PL Ok :thumbs: Sorry for belated feedback.
Thank you.
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HannaPonomarenko wrote: February 18th, 2022, 9:00 am
Jannie905 wrote: February 3rd, 2022, 5:51 pm 3rd section of "The Nutcracker"

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selkuncikimysinyjcar_03_gofman_128kb.mp3 7:52
Hi Jannie! Since Alexander hasn't shown up for a while I've PLed your Sec 03.
You've done a good job portraying children's feelings in this section. Your Masha won my great sympathy :)

There are a few things that need to be addressed:
  • We need 0.5 - 1 sec of silence at the beginning, while there are 1.4 sec.
  • We need 5 sec of silence at the end, while there are 4,7 sec.
  • 7:46 I hear "конец секции", there should be "конец третьей секции".
  • 4:43 "хочет" sounds too low. Please amplify it a little bit.
  • 7:52 short noise at the very end. Please delete it.


Just a piece of advise. For future recordings try to noise clean twice with lower values instead once with a high one. For example, twice with 10 instead of 20. It usually sounds more natural.

Otherwise it's a good job and a great start :thumbs:
Thank you
Hi Hanna!
Here's the new link to the 3rd section.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selkuncikimysinyjcar_03_gofman_128kb.mp3
Tried to do what I could with that "хочет"))
Hope it's ok. At least the Checker said so.
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Jannie905 wrote: April 14th, 2022, 10:01 am
Hi Hanna!
Here's the new link to the 3rd section.
Thank you, Jane. I'll try to PL soon. Please always post the duration of your uploaded records.

UPD. Sec 03 is PL Ok now :thumbs:
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Jannie905 wrote: April 16th, 2022, 9:29 am Section 6, duration 09:02

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selkuncikimysinyjcar_06_gofman_128kb.mp3
Thank you for a nice reading. You were so sad at the beginnig describing Masha's sickness, I even started to worrie about you) But the last line sounded quite joyful and I was glad together with the children listening to it)

Sec 06 PL notes:
6:12 the pause is too long
6:19 the pause is too long
7:33 I hear Пирлипат? but I see Пирлипатѣ (ѣ (ять) читается как "е")
7:39 distracting noise
8:22 I hear Пирлипат I see Пирлипаты

For future recordings please try to noise clean a bit softer - for example twise with the value 5 instead of once with the value 10.

Thanks :)
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