Hello, Miss Oksana, welcome to the project
No, you won't have to re-record, but there are a few things to look at:
Your recording is too quiet, please add 12 dB,
https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Amplifying.
Also, please post the length of your recording, so we know your section was uploaded in full. That's all you HAVE TO do.
Now, you are asking for "feedback on the quality." Here you are:
(this is beyond the standard proof-listening, fixing these are up to you, it's pretty good as it is!).
The head post says: "
No more than 0.5 to 1 second of silence at the beginning of the recording! ... There should be ~5 seconds silence at the end of the recording." You have left 1.3 and 4.2 respectively. Not a big deal, but uniform pauses make listening more relaxed.
@1:07 "что же он это", I hear "что же это он"
@2:00 "не хотя" (в совр. грамматике "нЕхотя"), I hear "нехотЯ"
@2:40 "выходить из-за него" I hear "выходить из-за нее"
@2:52 "княжна", I hear "княжня"
@2:57 "пустилась вперед, нискОлько", I hear "вступилась вперед, нЕсколько"
@3:35 "па" (pas) is a separate foreign word, should be heard distinctly. I hear "пана цыпочках"
@3:45 "непременно", I hear "непремерно"
@4:03 "княжна", I hear "княжня"
@4:25 "несообрАзным", I hear "несоОбразным"
@4:48 "папА" is a French word and must be stressed on the last syllable. If it were Russian, it would be "папы"
@4:57 "одобрении", I hear "ободрении"
@5:28 "княжнA", I hear "княжня"
Here it is, thank you for asking
Looking forward for more sections from you
Happy New Year!