COMPLETE GROUP: [Russian] Детство by Лев Толстой-mas

[chulsky]

Excellent patching, Sofia and Wolfgang! Thank you!
Sec.1 and 6 PL OK

[chulsky]

Section 15
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_15_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 with length 07:19

Dear Wolfgang,
It was a pleasure to listen, thank you!
There are a few stresses that could be fixed if you wish, but please, do make it right @4:18. The others -- up to you
@1:13 - "дремOтoй", I hear "дремотОй"
@4:18 - "пОлно", I hear "пoлнO". Here the stress changes the meaning; "пОлно" means "enough, don't talk about it"
@5:45 -- "ФарфOровую", I hear "ФAрфоровую"
@5:50 - "пухОвой", I hear "пУховой"

[HannaPonomarenko]

My English is not good enough to express how grateful I am to have such a ответственного и грамотного DPL. Большое спасибо, Марк!

[MariaMironova]

Добрый день! Я бы хотела прочитать 8-ю, 9-ю, 10-ю и 11-ю часть. Спасибо!

[HannaPonomarenko]

Добрый день! Я бы хотела прочитать 8-ю, 9-ю, 10-ю и 11-ю часть. Спасибо!

Добрый день, Мария! Отмечу в заметках Вашу заявку до тех пор, пока Вам не одобрят 1-minute test.
Спасибо

[victorseremet]

Hello Mark,

Here is Chapter 5 for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_05_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 11:36
Any constuctive criticism is welcome.

Thank you
Victor

[HannaPonomarenko]

Hello Mark,

Here is Chapter 5 for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_05_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 11:36
Any constuctive criticism is welcome.

Thank you
Victor

Thank you!

[becevka]

Section 15
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_15_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 with length 07:19

Dear Wolfgang,
It was a pleasure to listen, thank you!
There are a few stresses that could be fixed if you wish, but please, do make it right @4:18. The others -- up to you
@1:13 - "дремOтoй", I hear "дремотОй"
@4:18 - "пОлно", I hear "пoлнO". Here the stress changes the meaning; "пОлно" means "enough, don't talk about it"
@5:45 -- "ФарфOровую", I hear "ФAрфоровую"
@5:50 - "пухОвой", I hear "пУховой"

Hello Mark,
Many thanks for the notes, I have reuploaded the corrected audio https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_15_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 it is still 07:19 in duration.
I have attempted to correct them all.
Please let me know if I need to correct anything else.
Thanks.

[HannaPonomarenko]

Thank you!

[chulsky]

...I have reuploaded the corrected audio https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_15_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 it is still 07:19 in duration.
...

Thank you very much, Wolfgang! Excellent patching!
Sec.15 PL OK

[DomDom]

Hello Hanna and Chulsky

Here is the 17th chapter. I hope it's ok. I know I have several stress problems even if I checked them all. When I read I tend to change some of them. I hope it's good enough for you.
Tell me if it's not. I will understand.
I had fun doing it. ;o)

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_17_tolstoy_128kb.mp3

Duration : 11 min 16 sec

Have a nice evening.

Dominique

[HannaPonomarenko]

Hello)

Hello Hanna and Chulsky

Here is the 17th chapter. I hope it's ok.

It's wonderful, Dominique! I've listened briefly.

I had fun doing it. ;o)

That is the most important thing

Please feel free to claim any other free chapter.

Thank you

[chulsky]

Here is Chapter 5 for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_05_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 11:36
Any constructive criticism is welcome.

Hello, Victor. Again, excellent reading, just a few little notes:
1:35 -- "безпрестанно", I hear "безпрестPанно" (modern spelling "беспрестанно," means "non-stop")
5:25 -- again, "безпрестанно", I hear "безпрестPанно" (you did it right at 10:45!)
7:25 -- stress: "травИть", I hear "трAвить"
7:30 -- I would add here "сноска ... Такъ онъ безразлично называлъ всѣхъ мужчинъ ... конец сноски," but let Anya express her opinion
7:50 -- "хотѣлъ," I hear "хотѣлъ бы"
Thank you!

[chulsky]

Here is the 17th chapter. I hope it's ok. I know I have several stress problems even if I checked them all. When I read I tend to change some of them. I hope it's good enough for you.
Tell me if it's not. I will understand.
I had fun doing it. ;o)

Thank you, Dominique, very good, clear reading. I could hear you had fun doing it.
The couple of "stress problems" are slight, not worth fixing. However a few words are not in the form they are written:
2:12 -- "оглядывалась," I hear "оглядывать"
2:40 -- "разсказъ," I hear "разсказать"
9:14 -- "красавцемъ," I hear "красавец"
9:25 -- 2 sec. pause is confusing, in this context 0.5 sec is enough.

Hope to hear your voice in other chapters too

[HannaPonomarenko]

7:30 -- I would add here "сноска ... Такъ онъ безразлично называлъ всѣхъ мужчинъ ... конец сноски," but let Anya express her opinion

I'm in favor to let the reader to decide on footnotes question (to read or not to read). Since the general meaning of the word большак is "the host" http://gramota.ru/slovari/dic/?word=%D0%B1%D0%BE%D0%BB%D1%8C%D1%88%D0%B0%D0%BA&all=x
reading without the footnote also makes sence, so let's leave it as Victor read.

Thank you, Mark)
Btw, I only heard this word in last name Большакова of some acquaintance of mine before)