[ARABIC] كليلة ودمنة (Kalila wa dimna)-annise

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Kazbek
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Post by Kazbek » September 15th, 2020, 6:35 pm

AidaAida wrote:
September 15th, 2020, 5:38 pm

Chapter (01) is ready for spot PL : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

Length : 03:46

Thanks :D
Aïda
Thank you, Aïda!

Michael

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Post by issamel » September 20th, 2020, 4:05 pm

SaraHale wrote:
September 13th, 2020, 6:27 am
Hey, Issamel!

Welcome to LibriVox. I'd like to tell you that you've done an AWESOME job recording this long section.

Before I go on with my PL Notes, I would like you to know that you are free to ignore what you like. You aren't on any obligation to correct all of them. I just like to write what I noticed in the recording.

PL Notes:
PDF Page 133
@2:20 - فان الغدر you said العذر (which means excuse).

PDF Page 134
@3:00 - حتى حملتَهُ
I don't know how to explain it, so here's how I pronounce it.
https://voca.ro/1lsAzx9IFSEt

@3:15 - في التغييب عن موقع الامر
you said من موقع الامور


PDF Page 136
@6:40 - نعم قد بلغنى
you missed قد

@6:50 - والتضييع للامانات
you said امانه

@7:27 - ان يُسر
you said يستر

@7:37 - القى عن نفسك وزره
you said نفسه

@7:59 - ما يحملني على
you said يجعلنى


PDF Page 138
@10:38 - من العفو عن اهل
you said على اهل


PDF Page 139
@12:58 - فا ما
I know it's unclearو but I believe it is فاما من من دونه


PDF Page 140
@14:59 - اصبحت لُعلمي ببراءَتي
you missed لُعلمي


@15:10 - وظهوراً
you said طهوراً


PDF Page 143
@19:29 - لك هذا المثل ايها الملك
you said المثال


PDF Page 144
@20:47 - وهل ويلك
you said وهل رأيت


PDF Page 145
@23:22 - ذلك ولا يعرفهُ
you missed لا


PDF Page 147
@25:30 - ولا تأخذك فيهِ
you said تأخذه


PDF Page 149
@28:46 - فانك ممن لا
you said فانت


PDF Page 150
@30:55 - فجهر النمر
you said فهجر النمر


PDF Page 151
@33:02 - لم يُعلَم له جرم
you said يَعلَم


Again, feel free to correct what you would like. And I hope you will try recording another section. Talk to you soon!! :D

Thank you once again, I did them all so I think it is ready for spot PL :mrgreen:

Section 10 : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

time 33:44
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Post by Kazbek » September 20th, 2020, 4:16 pm

issamel wrote:
September 20th, 2020, 4:05 pm

Thank you once again, I did them all so I think it is ready for spot PL :mrgreen:

Section 10 : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

time 33:44
Thank you, Issam!

Michael

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Post by Kazbek » September 22nd, 2020, 6:17 am

Sara let me know that she won't be able to continue as DPL. Big thanks to Sara for her contributions! :clap: I'll DPL the rest of the project.

Michael

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Post by Kazbek » September 23rd, 2020, 8:05 pm

AidaAida wrote:
September 15th, 2020, 5:38 pm
SaraHale wrote:
September 13th, 2020, 4:49 am
- @00:29 أًَلحمد لله
كسرة مش فتحه
Chapter (01) is ready for spot PL : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Hi Aida,

I did spot PL for section 1, and I wanted to check with you about the PL note above. I'm not sure what was in the original recording. I'm hearing alhamdu lillaha, and it looks like Sara was suggesting lillahi instead (although she didn't pronounce the final vowel in her sample). Did you decide to leave your version, or did I misunderstand the PL note? :)

Michael

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Post by AidaAida » September 24th, 2020, 8:02 am

Kazbek wrote:
September 23rd, 2020, 8:05 pm
AidaAida wrote:
September 15th, 2020, 5:38 pm
SaraHale wrote:
September 13th, 2020, 4:49 am
- @00:29 أًَلحمد لله
كسرة مش فتحه
Chapter (01) is ready for spot PL : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Hi Aida,

I did spot PL for section 1, and I wanted to check with you about the PL note above. I'm not sure what was in the original recording. I'm hearing alhamdu lillaha, and it looks like Sara was suggesting lillahi instead (although she didn't pronounce the final vowel in her sample). Did you decide to leave your version, or did I misunderstand the PL note? :)

Michael
Hi Michael,

"Lillahi" is the correct one. I recorded it again : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

Thanks,
Aïda
Book lover :D

Kazbek
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Post by Kazbek » September 24th, 2020, 4:11 pm

AidaAida wrote:
September 24th, 2020, 8:02 am
Hi Michael,

"Lillahi" is the correct one. I recorded it again : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

Thanks,
Aïda
Thanks, Aida! PL OK! :thumbs:

Michael

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Post by Kazbek » September 24th, 2020, 8:28 pm

issamel wrote:
September 20th, 2020, 4:05 pm
Thank you once again, I did them all so I think it is ready for spot PL :mrgreen:

Section 10 : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

time 33:44
Thanks for undertaking all those corrections! I wanted to check with you about two of them. As before, you're welcome to leave them as is, and doubly so because Arabic isn't my native language. :D

PDF Page 134 @3:00 حتى حملتَهُ
I hear "hamaltuh", and this is also how Sara said it... but doesn't it mean "I brought" instead of "you brought" (hamaltah)? (and, yes, I do realize that I'm up against two native speakers :lol:)

PDF Page 136 @7:30 ان يُسر
I hear "yusra" instead of "yusarr".

Michael

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Post by issamel » September 25th, 2020, 4:04 am

Kazbek wrote:
September 24th, 2020, 8:28 pm


Thanks for undertaking all those corrections! I wanted to check with you about two of them. As before, you're welcome to leave them as is, and doubly so because Arabic isn't my native language. :D

PDF Page 134 @3:00 حتى حملتَهُ
I hear "hamaltuh", and this is also how Sara said it... but doesn't it mean "I brought" instead of "you brought" (hamaltah)? (and, yes, I do realize that I'm up against two native speakers :lol:)

PDF Page 136 @7:30 ان يُسر
I hear "yusra" instead of "yusarr".

Michael
Not at all, you are right about hamaltah, I had it that way, but I changed it as I was told to :mrgreen:

I changed both,

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

33:48
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Post by Kazbek » September 25th, 2020, 6:35 am

issamel wrote:
September 25th, 2020, 4:04 am
Not at all, you are right about hamaltah, I had it that way, but I changed it as I was told to :mrgreen:

I changed both,

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

33:48
Thanks, Issam! The corrections are PL OK, but I noticed that the recording grew by 4 seconds since the last version. I took a closer look, and I think you forgot to delete one of the corrections from the end of the recording. While we're deleting stuff, could you also shorten the silence at the start? It should be no more than 1 second. :)

Michael

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Post by issamel » September 25th, 2020, 12:02 pm

Kazbek wrote:
September 25th, 2020, 6:35 am

Thanks, Issam! The corrections are PL OK, but I noticed that the recording grew by 4 seconds since the last version. I took a closer look, and I think you forgot to delete one of the corrections from the end of the recording. While we're deleting stuff, could you also shorten the silence at the start? It should be no more than 1 second. :)

Michael
Sorry about that, I think I know what Ctrl+Z does now :lol:

Fixed it
Issam

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Post by Kazbek » September 25th, 2020, 2:48 pm

issamel wrote:
September 25th, 2020, 12:02 pm
Sorry about that, I think I know what Ctrl+Z does now :lol:

Fixed it
Thank you, PL OK! Congratulations on completing your first LibriVox contribution in Arabic (not an easy one)! :clap:

For the future, we ask readers to provide a link and duration for every upload. It helps us to catch mishaps, which happen to everyone. :)

Michael

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