[ARABIC] كليلة ودمنة (Kalila wa dimna)-annise

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AidaAida
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Post by AidaAida » August 23rd, 2020, 2:21 pm

Hi Michael,

Please, section 6, 7, 8 and 9.

Section 06 : الباب الاول : باب الاسد والثور، الجزء الاول
Section 07 : باب الاسد والثور، الجزء الثاني
Section 08 : باب الاسد والثور، الجزء الثالث
Section 09 : باب الاسد والثور، الجزء الرابع

Thanks,
Aïda
Book lover :D

Kazbek
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Post by Kazbek » August 23rd, 2020, 4:57 pm

AidaAida wrote:
August 23rd, 2020, 2:21 pm
Hi Michael,

Please, section 6, 7, 8 and 9.

Section 06 : الباب الاول : باب الاسد والثور، الجزء الاول
Section 07 : باب الاسد والثور، الجزء الثاني
Section 08 : باب الاسد والثور، الجزء الثالث
Section 09 : باب الاسد والثور، الجزء الرابع

Thanks,
Aïda
Thanks, Aida! :)

Michael

issamel
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Post by issamel » September 3rd, 2020, 3:22 am

Hello,

I would like to give section 10 a try :D
Issam

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Post by Kazbek » September 3rd, 2020, 2:03 pm

issamel wrote:
September 3rd, 2020, 3:22 am
Hello,

I would like to give section 10 a try :D
Thanks! Assigned. :)

Michael

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Post by issamel » September 6th, 2020, 8:20 am

Last edited by issamel on September 6th, 2020, 8:30 am, edited 1 time in total.
Issam

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Post by Kazbek » September 6th, 2020, 8:28 am

issamel wrote:
September 6th, 2020, 8:20 am
Hey,

Here's section 10

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Thank you! We also ask readers to give the duration (mm:ss) for every uploaded recording. :)

I believe our proof-listener is a little busy at the moment, so it may take a few days before we have feedback for you.

Michael

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Post by issamel » September 6th, 2020, 8:31 am

Kazbek wrote:
September 6th, 2020, 8:28 am

Thank you! We also ask readers to give the duration (mm:ss) for every uploaded recording. :)

I believe our proof-listener is a little busy at the moment, so it may take a few days before we have feedback for you.

Michael
Thank you for the heads-up, I forgot about that :D
Issam

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Post by Kazbek » September 6th, 2020, 8:39 am

issamel wrote:
September 6th, 2020, 8:31 am
Kazbek wrote:
September 6th, 2020, 8:28 am

Thank you! We also ask readers to give the duration (mm:ss) for every uploaded recording. :)

I believe our proof-listener is a little busy at the moment, so it may take a few days before we have feedback for you.

Michael
Thank you for the heads-up, I forgot about that :D
Thanks! It took me a moment to find it above just now, but I guess my puzzle-solving skills are now certifiably superior to some bird species. :D

Michael

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Post by SaraHale » September 13th, 2020, 4:49 am

Hey Aïda,
Beautiful recording!

I do have a few PL Notes.
Page 11
- @00:29 أًَلحمد لله
كسرة مش فتحه
- @00:54 للصواب
حرف الـ ص بيحتاج لتفخيم
- @01:51 لبرزويه
- @01:56 لبرزويه

Here's the correction link: https://voca.ro/1eK4jMhY6Yjo
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by SaraHale » September 13th, 2020, 6:27 am

Hey, Issamel!

Welcome to LibriVox. I'd like to tell you that you've done an AWESOME job recording this long section.

Before I go on with my PL Notes, I would like you to know that you are free to ignore what you like. You aren't on any obligation to correct all of them. I just like to write what I noticed in the recording.

PL Notes:
PDF Page 133
@2:20 - فان الغدر you said العذر (which means excuse).

PDF Page 134
@3:00 - حتى حملتَهُ
I don't know how to explain it, so here's how I pronounce it.
https://voca.ro/1lsAzx9IFSEt

@3:15 - في التغييب عن موقع الامر
you said من موقع الامور


PDF Page 136
@6:40 - نعم قد بلغنى
you missed قد

@6:50 - والتضييع للامانات
you said امانه

@7:27 - ان يُسر
you said يستر

@7:37 - القى عن نفسك وزره
you said نفسه

@7:59 - ما يحملني على
you said يجعلنى


PDF Page 138
@10:38 - من العفو عن اهل
you said على اهل


PDF Page 139
@12:58 - فا ما
I know it's unclearو but I believe it is فاما من من دونه


PDF Page 140
@14:59 - اصبحت لُعلمي ببراءَتي
you missed لُعلمي


@15:10 - وظهوراً
you said طهوراً


PDF Page 143
@19:29 - لك هذا المثل ايها الملك
you said المثال


PDF Page 144
@20:47 - وهل ويلك
you said وهل رأيت


PDF Page 145
@23:22 - ذلك ولا يعرفهُ
you missed لا


PDF Page 147
@25:30 - ولا تأخذك فيهِ
you said تأخذه


PDF Page 149
@28:46 - فانك ممن لا
you said فانت


PDF Page 150
@30:55 - فجهر النمر
you said فهجر النمر


PDF Page 151
@33:02 - لم يُعلَم له جرم
you said يَعلَم


Again, feel free to correct what you would like. And I hope you will try recording another section. Talk to you soon!! :D
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by SaraHale » September 13th, 2020, 6:57 am

Hey, Hourya!

You have done a beautiful job with your sections. I have a very few PL Notes.

Section 18
PDF Page 254
@01:05 - بُغضاً
similar to the pronunciation of من البغض


Section 19
PDF Page 263
@06:15 - ان يفتكوا بهِ
you said يتفكروا


Section 26
@01:22 - في رأيى ونظري
you missed ونظري


@02:49 - you missed
نهاية الفصل الـ 26
نهاية كتاب كليلة ودمنة
you said انتهى instead of نهاية
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by Kazbek » September 13th, 2020, 8:22 am

issamel wrote:
September 6th, 2020, 8:20 am
Here's section 10
Hi, Issam. You may have already heard this, but I'll still mention that we ask readers to make changes in their existing recording rather than make a new recording from scratch. Let me know if you need help with the editing process. Don't worry if the editing isn't seamless. As Sara noted, it's your choice whether to make all, some, or none of these changes.

Thanks!
Michael

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Post by issamel » September 15th, 2020, 2:30 pm

Thank you for the PL, I will do that as soon as I get back home in a couple of days :D
Issam

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Post by AidaAida » September 15th, 2020, 5:38 pm

SaraHale wrote:
September 13th, 2020, 4:49 am
Hey Aïda,
Beautiful recording!

I do have a few PL Notes.
Page 11
- @00:29 أًَلحمد لله
كسرة مش فتحه
- @00:54 للصواب
حرف الـ ص بيحتاج لتفخيم
- @01:51 لبرزويه
- @01:56 لبرزويه

Here's the correction link: https://voca.ro/1eK4jMhY6Yjo

Chapter (01) is ready for spot PL : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

Length : 03:46

Thanks :D
Aïda
Book lover :D

Kazbek
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Post by Kazbek » September 15th, 2020, 6:34 pm

issamel wrote:
September 15th, 2020, 2:30 pm
Thank you for the PL, I will do that as soon as I get back home in a couple of days :D
No rush! If you do decide to make some changes and not others, please let Sara know which places were changed (or which ones weren't, if that's a shorter list), so she knows where to do spot PL. :)

Michael

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