[ARABIC] كليلة ودمنة (Kalila wa dimna)-annise

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Houryology
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Post by Houryology » July 1st, 2020, 3:15 pm

Hello ^^

Here's section 21

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

recording length 9: 45

Kazbek
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Post by Kazbek » July 1st, 2020, 3:17 pm

Houryology wrote:
July 1st, 2020, 3:15 pm
Hello ^^

Here's section 21

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

recording length 9: 45
Thank you, Hourya. You're on a roll! :)

Michael

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Post by Houryology » July 2nd, 2020, 5:03 am

Kazbek wrote:
July 1st, 2020, 3:17 pm
Houryology wrote:
July 1st, 2020, 3:15 pm
Hello ^^

Here's section 21

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

recording length 9: 45
Thank you, Hourya. You're on a roll! :)

Michael
Hi Michael :)

I'd like to claim section 18

Kazbek
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Post by Kazbek » July 2nd, 2020, 5:38 am

Houryology wrote:
July 2nd, 2020, 5:03 am
Hi Michael :)

I'd like to claim section 18
Great! Assigned. :)

Michael

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Post by SaraHale » July 4th, 2020, 5:10 am

khaledfouad1993 wrote:
June 22nd, 2020, 10:57 am
Hi,
Here is my recording of section 13

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_13_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

Recording length: 24:51
PL OK Good job! :thumbs:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by khaledfouad1993 » July 12th, 2020, 3:13 am

SaraHale wrote:
July 4th, 2020, 5:10 am
khaledfouad1993 wrote:
June 22nd, 2020, 10:57 am
Hi,
Here is my recording of section 13

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_13_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

Recording length: 24:51
PL OK Good job! :thumbs:
Thank you very much
Thank you
Khaled Fouad :)

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Post by SaraHale » July 18th, 2020, 8:37 am

Houryology wrote:
July 1st, 2020, 3:15 pm
Hello ^^

Here's section 21

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

recording length 9: 45
You've done a good job with this recording. :9: I've a very minor PL notes.

@8:54 to @9:00 - this part is a repeated line. Please remove it.

Could you please leave 5 second of silence at the end of the recording?

I'll listen to the rest of your recordings and get back to you.
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by SaraHale » July 18th, 2020, 9:01 am

Houryology wrote:
June 29th, 2020, 2:02 pm
Hi :)

Here's section 22

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_22_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

recording length: 12:10
Brilliant recording as always! :9: Again minor PL notes:

@9:54 to @9:57 repeated line. Please remove it.

@11:03 missed a word فاستخرجتُها

Could you please add 5 seconds of silence at the end of the recording?

Thanks!
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by SaraHale » July 18th, 2020, 9:14 am

Houryology wrote:
June 28th, 2020, 6:20 am
Hi Sara :)

Here's section 23
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_23_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 6:18
This one is PL OK. :clap: You don't have to adjust the silence for this one. :thumbs:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by Houryology » July 18th, 2020, 4:58 pm

SaraHale wrote:
July 18th, 2020, 9:01 am
Houryology wrote:
June 29th, 2020, 2:02 pm
Hi :)

Here's section 22

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_22_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

recording length: 12:10
Brilliant recording as always! :9: Again minor PL notes:

@9:54 to @9:57 repeated line. Please remove it.

@11:03 missed a word فاستخرجتُها

Could you please add 5 seconds of silence at the end of the recording?

Thanks!

Thank you Sara ^^

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_22_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 12:10

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 9:40

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Post by SaraHale » July 19th, 2020, 9:00 am

You're most welcome! (*^_^*)

You have done an AWESOME job with the editing by the way. Well done! :thumbs: Here's your PL OK
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by SaraHale » July 19th, 2020, 8:28 pm

Hey,

You've done an AWESOME job with the editing. :thumbs:

But there is 1-second silence at the end of the recording. Could you please make it 5 seconds of silence? Thanks so much!! :D
Houryology wrote:
June 27th, 2020, 8:10 am
SaraHale wrote:
June 21st, 2020, 11:19 pm
Houryology wrote:
June 12th, 2020, 5:22 pm
Hello :), here's section 5

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_5_ibnalmuqaffa.mp3

Length 21:49
Hey Hourya, It's so nice to meet you. I'm so sorry for taking so long to hear your beautiful recording but I had a lot on my plate lately. I have PL notes for you. But feel free to judge what you would like to correct.

First the file's name
kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3, yours is missing 0 (as Michael mentioned) but it is also missing "128kb".

I've also noticed your Name under Contributing Artists. We don't add Metadata Tags when we export the files as this is done automatically. Just double-check this part with Michael.

@00:13 - Dot org not نقطة org. I think Dot is a familiar word for native Arabic speakers to hear when they hear a website.

@2:32 - عندما نسبه الى البهائم This part is missed from the recording.

@2:48 - ولا اي نتيجة I hear او instead of ولا

@2:53 - هذا الكتاب فأنه I hear فأن instead of فأنه

@2:53 - استتم I hear استتِم instead of استتَم

@3:36 - أصيب منهُ I hear بها instead of منهُ

@3:49 - في إراحه I hear راحه instead of إراحه

@5:12 - والفطنة I hear الفتنة instead of الفطنة

@5:48 - I hear العقل instead of العاقل

@6:05 - I hear أن مثلهُ instead of كان مثلهُ

@7:21 - اهواءً double-check this one for me.

@9:43 - لا يعلَوَ double-check this one for me.

@12:27 - وعليه the و is unclear for me.

@12:43 - I hear من كن instead of من كُن

@12:51 - I hear ورَب instead of ورُب

@16:39 - missed في in اذا كان في

@17:44 - I hear الذى instead of الثلاثة الذين

@17:48 - I hear فتنازعو instead of فتنازعوه

@20:56 - I hear احدهما instead of احدها

@21:45 - missed saying نهايه الفصل الـ5
Hey Sara ^^

I've corrected all the mistakes except from 5:11 الفطنة and 7:21 اهواءً (they sounded right to me)

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

length 21:45

Thank you for your time
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by Kazbek » July 20th, 2020, 4:54 am

Thanks for PLing, Sara!

Michael

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Post by SaraHale » July 20th, 2020, 6:23 am

Kazbek wrote:
July 20th, 2020, 4:54 am
Thanks for PLing, Sara!

Michael
You're most welcome. :thumbs:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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Post by Houryology » July 20th, 2020, 9:31 am

SaraHale wrote:
July 19th, 2020, 8:28 pm
Hey,

You've done an AWESOME job with the editing. :thumbs:

But there is 1-second silence at the end of the recording. Could you please make it 5 seconds of silence? Thanks so much!! :D
Houryology wrote:
June 27th, 2020, 8:10 am
SaraHale wrote:
June 21st, 2020, 11:19 pm


Hey Hourya, It's so nice to meet you. I'm so sorry for taking so long to hear your beautiful recording but I had a lot on my plate lately. I have PL notes for you. But feel free to judge what you would like to correct.

First the file's name
kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3, yours is missing 0 (as Michael mentioned) but it is also missing "128kb".

I've also noticed your Name under Contributing Artists. We don't add Metadata Tags when we export the files as this is done automatically. Just double-check this part with Michael.

@00:13 - Dot org not نقطة org. I think Dot is a familiar word for native Arabic speakers to hear when they hear a website.

@2:32 - عندما نسبه الى البهائم This part is missed from the recording.

@2:48 - ولا اي نتيجة I hear او instead of ولا

@2:53 - هذا الكتاب فأنه I hear فأن instead of فأنه

@2:53 - استتم I hear استتِم instead of استتَم

@3:36 - أصيب منهُ I hear بها instead of منهُ

@3:49 - في إراحه I hear راحه instead of إراحه

@5:12 - والفطنة I hear الفتنة instead of الفطنة

@5:48 - I hear العقل instead of العاقل

@6:05 - I hear أن مثلهُ instead of كان مثلهُ

@7:21 - اهواءً double-check this one for me.

@9:43 - لا يعلَوَ double-check this one for me.

@12:27 - وعليه the و is unclear for me.

@12:43 - I hear من كن instead of من كُن

@12:51 - I hear ورَب instead of ورُب

@16:39 - missed في in اذا كان في

@17:44 - I hear الذى instead of الثلاثة الذين

@17:48 - I hear فتنازعو instead of فتنازعوه

@20:56 - I hear احدهما instead of احدها

@21:45 - missed saying نهايه الفصل الـ5
Hey Sara ^^

I've corrected all the mistakes except from 5:11 الفطنة and 7:21 اهواءً (they sounded right to me)

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3

length 21:45

Thank you for your time
Hi Sara ^^
Here's section 5

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 21:50

Thank you for listening!

Hourya

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