[GERMAN - group - scifi] Wunderwelten von Friedrich Wilhelm Mader - kit

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Post by schrm » August 16th, 2018, 11:42 am

Gavenport wrote:
August 16th, 2018, 7:15 am
Abschnitt 5 - Im Weltenraum - Länge 17:31

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/wunderwelten_05_mader_128kb.mp3

Achso - da ich mich selbst schlecht PL'en kann, bitte ich um Rückmeldung eines freiwilligen Hörers... ;-)
guten abend,

mach natürlich ich als bc sehr gerne!

danke für den schnellen beitrag!

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Post by schrm » August 16th, 2018, 11:48 pm

einen schönen guten morgen,


abschnitt 5 ist pl ok!

:-)
der abschnitt kam gar nicht als fachlich "dicht" vor, aber hat schon einiges an physik und spekulation im text.
und: echt gut, wie du die ganzen oho, bravo usw ausrufe gelesen hast!
danke dir bernd!

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Post by Algy Pug » August 20th, 2018, 12:48 am

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Post by schrm » August 20th, 2018, 12:53 am

Algy Pug wrote:
August 20th, 2018, 12:48 am
Section 1:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/wunderwelten_01_mader_128kb.mp3
10:23

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Thank you very much Algy Pug!
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Post by schrm » August 20th, 2018, 8:30 am

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Post by Gavenport » August 20th, 2018, 10:39 am

alles downgeloadet - das PL'en erfolgt in Reihenfolge des Eingangs... ;-)

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Post by schrm » August 20th, 2018, 11:23 am

Gavenport wrote:
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alles downgeloadet - das PL'en erfolgt in Reihenfolge des Eingangs... ;-)
vielen dank bernd - und viel spass dabei 8-)
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Post by Gavenport » August 21st, 2018, 1:48 am

Algy Pug wrote:
August 20th, 2018, 12:48 am
Section 1:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/wunderwelten_01_mader_128kb.mp3
10:23

Cheers
Very good reading! So I have only some minor comments:

at 2:54 you're saying 'Termeiten' instead of 'Termiten'

at 4:31 read: ...traue ich das Wunderbarste... a short word is missing: 'zu' (cut to much?)

at 9:33 ...das gibt eine famose Reisegesellschaft... sounds like 'riesen Gesellschaft'

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Post by Gavenport » August 21st, 2018, 5:21 am

hmm - i was just criticized for my 'sharp' PL'ing

i don't meant to offend someone just to help.

it's standard PL so there is no need for you to look at the two words 'Termiten' and/or 'Reisegesellschaft'. Your pronunciation all over the section is quite good and I thought you would be happy about a hint for the right pronunciation of this two words.

The failed editing or the editing to much and the missing word is not that bad but it's a bit irritating when listening so i thought to mention it.

So there is no offend meant! I just wanted to help.

regards
bernd

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Post by Gavenport » August 21st, 2018, 11:43 am

schrm wrote:
August 20th, 2018, 8:30 am
hi,

hier abschnitt 4
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/wunderwelten_04_mader_128kb.mp3
dauer: 17:17

lg,
PL:OK :thumbs:

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Post by schrm » August 21st, 2018, 11:58 am

Gavenport wrote:
August 21st, 2018, 11:43 am
schrm wrote:
August 20th, 2018, 8:30 am
hi,

hier abschnitt 4
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/wunderwelten_04_mader_128kb.mp3
dauer: 17:17

lg,
PL:OK :thumbs:
danke dir 2x bernd :-)
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Post by Algy Pug » August 21st, 2018, 5:08 pm

Gavenport wrote:
August 21st, 2018, 5:21 am
hmm - i was just criticized for my 'sharp' PL'ing

i don't meant to offend someone just to help.

it's standard PL so there is no need for you to look at the two words 'Termiten' and/or 'Reisegesellschaft'. Your pronunciation all over the section is quite good and I thought you would be happy about a hint for the right pronunciation of this two words.

The failed editing or the editing to much and the missing word is not that bad but it's a bit irritating when listening so i thought to mention it.

So there is no offend meant! I just wanted to help.

regards
bernd
Hi Bernd

Not a problem! No offence taken. I appreciate thorough PLing and am very happy to provide the corrections that you requested.

For "termiten" I just lapsed into my natural Australian brogue and the pronunciation of Reisegesellschaft was clearly incorrect. I too have struggles with missing words when listening.

Revised recording coming up shortly.

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Post by Algy Pug » August 21st, 2018, 5:27 pm

Section 1 corrected and reuploaded:

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10:25

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Post by schrm » August 21st, 2018, 11:11 pm

Algy Pug wrote:
August 21st, 2018, 5:27 pm
Section 1 corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/wunderwelten_01_mader_128kb.mp3
10:25

Cheers
thank you for your clarification algy pug, and your work!
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Post by Tabea » August 26th, 2018, 4:19 pm

Hier ist endlich Abschnitt 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/wunderwelten_02_mader_128kb.mp3
Länge: 11:28 min.

Tut mir leid, dass es so lange gedauert hat, aber ich bin nicht dazu gekommen..
Abschnitt 3 kommt dann wahrscheinlich morgen!

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