[COMPLETE][Français][Religion]Introduction à la Vie Dévote par Sales - kit

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:9: :9: :clap: :clap: :thumbs: :thumbs: for Kitty. Gill has just about finished London Labour so it won't be forever. I hope it is an easier read :D (almost anything would be an easier read)

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Great work, Sonia! Well done.
I' ve started recording but I've still to edit.
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GillH wrote: August 23rd, 2022, 6:57 pmI' ve started recording but I've still to edit.
super, looking forward to these. I hope you are not sending a dozen at a time :lol: I can only take so much devotion in one go.

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yay, you started :clap: I finally hear you speak French. Not bad at all. I can detect an accent but most of the words are accurately spoken and understandable. Really no problems there. :thumbs:

I found a few small bits to correct:

> at 2:10: (p. 82) stumble and repeat: "par l'esprit de volupté" - one version can get cut

> at 4:59: (p. 84) "qu'ils voudroient avoir dans leur coeur" - this is optional, and you need not correct it this time, I only want to mention it in case you want to use the modern pronunciation in further chapters. The ending "-oit" is antiquated and was replaced by "-ait" in modern versions. You can read it "the old way" if you wish, but the previous reader opted for the modern pronunciation, so if you wish, you can do that as well. But both are correct, only nowadays nobody would say "-oit" anymore unless they want to sound quaint ;)

> at 6:30: (p. 85) "que je me désabuse de tes folies" - you say "désabusé"

great first chapter, thanks !

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yay another chapter, you're keeping a diligent pace here, Gill. :thumbs:
Section 19 perfectly corrected and PL ok now.

A few small notes for section 21:

> at 1:48: (p. 90) "que j'avais reçue dans mon sacré baptême, et que j'avais vouée et consacrée à mon dieu" - here you said "avois" again
> at the end: you forgot to say "première partie"

thanks, and have a good weekend

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Thank you!
Edited Section 21 (5:32)

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/viedevote_021_sales.mp3

I'm not promising to keep up this pace!
Have a great weekend.
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GillH wrote: September 3rd, 2022, 8:28 amEdited Section 21 (5:32)
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/viedevote_021_sales.mp3
I'm not promising to keep up this pace!
thanks, PL ok now.

And I'm not in a hurry and I have plenty of DPL jobs, so don't worry if you don't deliver daily. I won't be bored...

Have a nice rest of the weekend too.

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Section 33 (2/8) 6:42
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/viedevote_033_sales.mp3

And, in doing that, i realised the outro pf Section 27 wasn't quite right, so here's the corrected version (still 7:23)
Section 27 (2/2)
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/viedevote_027_sales.mp3
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and now you are caught up with the old sections :thumbs:

Section 33 is already PL ok.

One small part missing in Section 27:

> at 3:34: (p. 112) "véritablement, dieu est ici" – you forgot the first word

thanks

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GillH wrote: September 6th, 2022, 12:58 am Merci! (7:25)
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/viedevote_027_sales.mp3
:thumbs: et PL ok maintenant :)

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