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Post by Iunta4Ios » May 29th, 2020, 10:41 am

mrnmrz72 wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 9:59 am


Ah looks like my speed is just not good enough. New file for section 5 including corrections is here

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/dialogomassimisistemi_05_galilei_128kb.mp3

The new duration is 23:18.
But Marzia, now two "giornate" are completed! Hurrah! That's great news :clap:
I'll listen to your revised section as soon as possible.
Pier!

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Post by Iunta4Ios » May 29th, 2020, 10:44 am


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Post by mrnmrz72 » May 29th, 2020, 10:51 am

Iunta4Ios wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 10:41 am
mrnmrz72 wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 9:59 am


Ah looks like my speed is just not good enough. New file for section 5 including corrections is here

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/dialogomassimisistemi_05_galilei_128kb.mp3

The new duration is 23:18.
But Marzia, now two "giornate" are completed! Hurrah! That's great news :clap:
I'll listen to your revised section as soon as possible.
Pier!
Check us out! Two giornate completed, we totally rock🤘 :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

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Post by Iunta4Ios » May 29th, 2020, 12:14 pm

Marzia, sec. 5 perfect now :9: ! PL OK! (Notwithstanding my try to deceive you indicating at 4: 54, page 35, instead of page 34!)
Pier

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Post by Eysiss » May 30th, 2020, 5:37 am

Hallo there.
Here my reviewed sec 20

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/dialogomassimisistemi_20_galilei_128kb.mp3
duration 30:12

I changed all 3 spots, also the "leggieri" one, after giving again a lot of thinking and mumbling. I decided to stick to the text.
Hope everything is allright now

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Post by Iunta4Ios » May 30th, 2020, 6:35 am

Emanuela , your opinions are certainly not so "leggieri"! :thumbs:
I'll check the section soon!
Pier

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Post by Iunta4Ios » May 30th, 2020, 7:02 am

Eysiss wrote:
May 30th, 2020, 5:37 am
Hallo there.
Here my reviewed sec 20

Emanuela
Absolutely perfect! :9:
PL OK- :clap:
Pier

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Post by Eysiss » May 30th, 2020, 7:43 am

I'm glad!
:9:

Now my suggestions for Section 54:
3:06 pg 439, 3 lines from bottom: "L'altra sorte" instead of "L'altra sorta"
10:45 pg 442, 8 lines from top: "rappresentante il lobo terrestre" instead of "rappresentante il globo terrestre" (I hear that but I can be wrong)
11:39 pg 442, 20 lines from top: "si muovono verso sinistra" instead of "si muovono verso la sinistra"
13:58 pg 443, 5 lines from top: "avvegna che" instead of "avvenga che"
20:56 pg 447, 2nd line from yop: "e le loro diversita'" instead of "e loro diversita'"

Cheers
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Post by Iunta4Ios » May 30th, 2020, 10:49 am

Here is the updated sec. 54
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/dialogomassimisistemi_54_galilei_128kb.mp3
(31:54 m)
(Note: last correction is at 26:56, not 20:56 m)
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Post by moniaqua » May 31st, 2020, 1:57 am

Iunta4Ios wrote:
May 28th, 2020, 10:37 am
So which role would you assume? I propose Sagredo, as "arbitrator". :lol:
Naa. Since you are the one, who has the knowledge, there is only Simplicio left for me :lol:
Eysiss wrote:
May 28th, 2020, 12:03 pm
Galileo would rise and tell "Emanuela, you silly woman...."
He wouldn't. You are reading his book so that people who can't read might understand him ;)
Iunta4Ios wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 12:05 am
but it is necessary to have someone opposing Galileo's ideas and allowing him to demonstrate his reasons!
See, that's the perfect role for me :D
mrnmrz72 wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 9:59 am
Ah looks like my speed is just not good enough.
Well, first I read "My speed is just good enough" (without the "not") and I did agree :) Really, you're doing fine. Thank you for your section :thumbs:
mrnmrz72 wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 10:51 am
Check us out! Two giornate completed, we totally rock
WOW! :clap: :clap: :9: :9: :thumbs: :thumbs:
Eysiss wrote:
May 30th, 2020, 5:37 am
I changed all 3 spots, also the "leggieri" one, after giving again a lot of thinking and mumbling.
Brave woman! :clap: I am sure Galileo is watching us, being happy that you think such a lot about his text.

Guys, we have only four sections left in Giornata quarta! That means three days almost finished! :9: And, additionally, we do have already two thirds completed! :clap: :thumbs: We're so cool!

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Post by Eysiss » May 31st, 2020, 2:40 am

Hi Pier
now everything is perfect. Sec. 54 is PL Ok!!
(Note: last correction is at 26:56, not 20:56 m)
sorry about that! I noted it down correctly, but then my eyes failed me....


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Post by Iunta4Ios » May 31st, 2020, 4:55 am

Thanks Emanuela,
One section less to end of quarta giornata! :D
I specified the timing of my last correction just to make easier your final checking!
Pier

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Post by Eysiss » May 31st, 2020, 5:09 am

Ok, then I will ask for section 55!
It's a long one, looking at the numbers of words, it will take a while, but I'd like to contribute in finishing this section.

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Post by Iunta4Ios » May 31st, 2020, 5:33 am

Emanuela, sec 55 is yours!
Alleluia! The future listener of "giornata quarta" will be finally no more bored listening always only to my monotonous voice! :roll:

And I ask section 56 for myself!
Pier

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