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Post by Kazbek » January 5th, 2021, 7:58 pm

chulsky wrote:
January 5th, 2021, 7:55 pm
HannaPonomarenko wrote:
January 5th, 2021, 5:16 pm
Здраствуйте!
Я как в анекдоте "на третий день индеец Зоркий глаз заметил, что у сарая нет одной стены" заметила, что в названии секции 12 опечатка в цифре. На новый 1927 г. - не PD :mrgreen:
:D Thank you, Anya! I fixed it. Наш индеец семь месяцев не замечал. :D
А я думал это про будущее... дистопия какая нибудь.

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Post by TanG » January 8th, 2021, 8:57 am

Kazbek wrote:
January 4th, 2021, 8:09 pm

Секция 16:
1:19 слышу "мы всё равно" вместо "мы все равно"
At the end of the book, say (in addition): "Конец книги стихов Дмитрия Веневитинова. "

Миша
Доброго времени суток, секция 16 с исправлениями
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poems_16_venevitinov_128kb.mp3
03:53
Thanks,
Tan.
I'm sorry, I might not be able to finish my sections in time.

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Post by Kazbek » January 10th, 2021, 9:02 am

TanG wrote:
January 8th, 2021, 8:57 am
Доброго времени суток, секция 16 с исправлениями
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poems_16_venevitinov_128kb.mp3
03:53
Thanks,
Tan.
Спасибо, PL OK!

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Post by victorseremet » April 13th, 2021, 6:02 am

Hello!

I would like to read Section 5 Песнь грека и Любимый цвет

Thank you

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Post by chulsky » April 13th, 2021, 10:04 am

victorseremet wrote:
April 13th, 2021, 6:02 am
I would like to read Section 5 Песнь грека и Любимый цвет
Thank you, Victor! Sec.5 is yours! :9:
Mark Chulsky / Марк Чульский
Readers invited: Стихи Веневитинова

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Post by victorseremet » April 16th, 2021, 7:31 am

Hello!

Here is Section 5 for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poems_05_venevitinov_128kb.mp3
Duration: 5:29

Any constuctive criticism is welcome.

Thank you!
Victor

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Post by chulsky » April 16th, 2021, 3:24 pm

victorseremet wrote:
April 16th, 2021, 7:31 am
...Section 5 for PL...
Thank you, Victor!
Mark Chulsky / Марк Чульский
Readers invited: Стихи Веневитинова

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Post by Kazbek » April 19th, 2021, 6:15 pm

victorseremet wrote:
April 16th, 2021, 7:31 am
Hello!

Here is Section 5 for PL:
Nice work, Victor! Just a couple of notes:

(1:41) I hear "склонилась к пИщали" instead of "склонилася к пищАли"
(1:44) Editing glitch between внезапно and волны
(2:14) I hear закрыт instead of зарыт

Thanks,
Misha

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Post by victorseremet » April 29th, 2021, 10:24 pm

Kazbek wrote:
April 19th, 2021, 6:15 pm
(1:41) I hear "склонилась к пИщали" instead of "склонилася к пищАли"
(1:44) Editing glitch between внезапно and волны
(2:14) I hear закрыт instead of зарыт
Hi Misha,

Thank you for your review and comments.
Here is the corrected file:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poems_05_venevitinov_128kb.mp3
Duration: 5:30

Thank you
Victor

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Post by Kazbek » May 1st, 2021, 9:43 am

victorseremet wrote:
April 29th, 2021, 10:24 pm
Here is the corrected file:
Thank you, Victor. PL OK!

Misha

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