[Complete] Pagan & Christian Creeds, by Edward Carpenter - lt

[vviera]

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/paganandchristiancreeds_03_carpenter_128kb.mp3
15:52

I'm pretty sure [gr a] should be "Alpha", beta, greek letters.... Please confirm and I'll change that with whatever other corrections. What is [gr g]?

Cz

Thanks for section 3!

All of your text is right. I believe that the "gr" designations are referring to points on a graph in an illustration which is omitted in the text-only version. If I remember right, I went and found a scanned copy of the book on archive.org and saw the original drawing. When I recorded this section, I left them out altogether since they didn't make sense without the visual. It would be great if you could go in and rerecord to take them out. It's only a couple of spots. Here are the time marks:

8:08-8:49 pdf p.11, paragraph beginning "The constellation Virgo"
11:17 pdf p. 12, sentence within paragraph; paragraph begins "A curious confirmation"

p.s. Yes, see here.

[vviera]

Here's section 17 (Chapter 10):

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/paganandchristiancreeds_17_carpenter_128kb.mp3
(20.50)

I'm away for a few days, so won't be able to make any corrections until next weekend.

Peter

Wonderful, thanks! No hurry on corrections.
Verla

[vviera]

Here's section 17 (Chapter 10):

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/paganandchristiancreeds_17_carpenter_128kb.mp3
(20.50)

I'm away for a few days, so won't be able to make any corrections until next weekend.

Peter

Wonderful, thanks! No hurry on corrections--if there are any.
Verla

[vviera]

Here's section 17 (Chapter 10):

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/paganandchristiancreeds_17_carpenter_128kb.mp3
(20.50)

I'm away for a few days, so won't be able to make any corrections until next weekend.

Peter

Hi Peter -
I hope you had a pleasant time away. Here are the PL Notes:
:25 in intro: repetition: please delete the last statement "Chapter 10, The Saviour-God and the Virgin-Mother"
1:01 repetition: "And when the man abandons"--in first paragraph
13:57 omission: "and she gave birth"--in paragraph beginning "Anyhow, and as a matter of fact,"
16:47 repetition: "and that the word"--in footnote 2 beginning "See Kingsborough's..."

Thanks,
Verla

[steelpython]

Hi all,

Could I please read sections 4-5?

[vviera]

Setting this up for you.

All set.
I strongly recommend shortening the file name... paganandchristiancreeds would work.

Ready to send to Readers Wanted. I have great hopes given that we're already seeing interest.

Thank you!

[vviera]

Hi all,

Could I please read sections 4-5?

Hi Steel -

Congrats on passing your 1-minute test earlier today!

In order to assign you your first section, I need to know what name you'd like to be listed under in the catalog. It can be your username, your real name, or a pseudonym of your choice. I will create that catalog entry in the process of assigning the section.

Since this is your very first, I'll assign one section, #4, and after you have that PL OK you can claim another one. Don't hesitate to ask questions here. It's a supportive environment and you'll get helpful answers.

So, catalog name?

Thanks,
Verla

[steelpython]

Thanks Verla,

My name is Joshua Vellacott (as my catalog name). Sounds good!

[Peter Why]

I have a couple of hours before I'm due to leave home, so I made the edits in Section 17/Chapter 10:

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/paganandchristiancreeds_17_carpenter_128kb.mp3

(20.42)

Peter

[czandra]

section 3 reloaded with corrections: 15:51

Thanks for the time marks!

Cz

[czandra]

Section 4 has French, is that okay with Joshua, or should I do it and he do 5? Don't mean to mix it up, but the French is a thing....

Verla, your MW isn't showing the reader names? Remember to let the system suggest, and click that.... I get it wrong still.
Cz

[vviera]

Hi all,

Could I please read sections 4-5?

Hi Joshua -

Do you speak French? Section 4 has some French in it, and czandra has volunteered to read it. Would you mind switching to section 5?

[vviera]

Section 4 has French, is that okay with Joshua, or should I do it and he do 5? Don't mean to mix it up, but the French is a thing....

Verla, your MW isn't showing the reader names? Remember to let the system suggest, and click that.... I get it wrong still.
Cz

I've asked Joshua here and in PM, so don't start 4 until we hear from him, please.

The reader names aren't showing because I haven't assigned you any other sections. Earlier I asked if you wanted to trade the French for the other ones (as opposed to doing both the previously requested and the French) and I didn't get a clear answer, just that you'd already done section 3. Should I put you down for all the French? Plus the others you requested? Or just French? Give me all the specific numbers you want, please.

Verla

[czandra]

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/paganandchristiancreeds_32_carpenter_128kb.mp3
17:17

Cz

[vviera]

section 3 reloaded with corrections: 15:51

Thanks for the time marks!

Cz

Your corrections sound great. Really seamless.

At 8:16 you render [gr g] as gamma and at 11:18 you render the same thing as upsilon. ??