No Man's Land, by H.C. McNeile - philc

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » November 28th, 2021, 6:24 pm

Hi, Adrian! I'll pick your solo up for DPL

Give me a few days to catch up with you. I've queued sections 1-5

afinevoice · Post by **afinevoice** » November 29th, 2021, 1:42 am

LCaulkins wrote: ↑November 28th, 2021, 6:24 pm Hi, Adrian! I'll pick your solo up for DPL Give me a few days to catch up with you. I've queued sections 1-5

Thanks for picking this up, Lynette!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » November 29th, 2021, 8:55 am

Section 1 is PL OK

hey, Adrian, if you open the editing for the initial post so that you can delete the tilde from the project thread title, other DPLs won't think you still need one.

afinevoice · Post by **afinevoice** » November 29th, 2021, 10:06 am

LCaulkins wrote: ↑November 29th, 2021, 8:55 am Section 1 is PL OK

hey, Adrian, if you open the editing for the initial post so that you can delete the tilde from the project thread title, other DPLs won't think you still need one.

Done

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » November 30th, 2021, 7:12 am

Section 2 is PL OK

Just to make sure, Adrian, I meant it will take a few days for me to catch up with you, not that I wanted you to wait for me before putting up new recordings.

afinevoice · Post by **afinevoice** » November 30th, 2021, 9:48 am

Ah, I misunderstood. I'll get back to it soon

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » December 1st, 2021, 8:12 am

Section 3 is PL OK

afinevoice · Post by **afinevoice** » December 1st, 2021, 1:42 pm

i’ve started the next section (6) and plan to finish it tomorrow. 5 was a hoot. I had to stop so many times as I was laughing. Quite comedic I thought. I’d be interested to know if you agree when you get to it Lynette

afinevoice · Post by **afinevoice** » December 2nd, 2021, 5:00 am

Here's section 6 https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/nomansland_06_mcneile_128kb.mp3 for PL

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » December 2nd, 2021, 11:07 am

Ha!! Section 5 is hilarious, yes.

I can see how it kept making you laugh while recording - but you come across smoothly and in the perfect tone for reading classic British understated humor. Loved it.

There is one glitch near the end - the tin smith has arrived, and one of his words is cut off. at 39:10, we have "Yes, he remarked at l___" (should be length). It does jar right when you're highly immersed in the comedy of the whole scene.

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » December 3rd, 2021, 3:45 pm

Section 6 is PL OK

afinevoice · Post by **afinevoice** » December 4th, 2021, 2:39 am

LCaulkins wrote: ↑December 2nd, 2021, 11:07 am Ha!! Section 5 is hilarious, yes. I can see how it kept making you laugh while recording - but you come across smoothly and in the perfect tone for reading classic British understated humor. Loved it.

There is one glitch near the end - the tin smith has arrived, and one of his words is cut off. at 39:10, we have "Yes, he remarked at l___" (should be length). It does jar right when you're highly immersed in the comedy of the whole scene.

Hi Lynette, I believe I've fixed that. Please find an updated file here https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/nomansland_05_mcneile_128kb.mp3

afinevoice · Post by **afinevoice** » December 4th, 2021, 2:40 am

Here's Part 7 for PL https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/nomansland_07_mcneile_128kb.mp3

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » December 4th, 2021, 7:15 am

5 is beautifully edited. PL OK :thumbs

7 is queued

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » December 5th, 2021, 9:18 am

Whoa! Part 7 is PL OK

Spooky story. Apparently, WWI ghost tales from the front and trenches abound.