Here's the amended version of Act 2:Kitty wrote: ↑November 3rd, 2022, 6:39 am thank you, Mattea, excellent play-acting again. And compared to your impeccable British upper class accent, I fear I (as your mother here) will fail miserably to try to live up to this.
You made her much more arrogant than I expected her when I read the play, I thought she was only the demure, hen-pecked girl. But you give her another deeper layer, and this way, we sympathize a bit less with her lot, because she seems to be much more like her mother an interesting twist in the play. I love it that each player gives their own interpretation and gives the play a new unforeseen turn.
Act 4 is already PL ok.
One missed line in Act 3:
> at about 1:55: please insert: "Hush, mamma dear; all Leslie means is that she is proud of her husband’s goodness. What wife would not be?"
Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/profligate_irene_2.mp3
(5:44)
I'm glad I was able to add a new dimension to the character