JoannaHoyt wrote: ↑October 24th, 2021, 7:26 pmIn Act 1, I didn't know if you wanted the Remarks or not, so read them just in case. In Act 2, I wasn't sure what "Exit L.H." meant so just read " Exit left."
not sure about the remarks, but it's always good to have them.
And they are indeed interesting. Thanks for including them.
Excellently narrated, Joanna, the is only one mistake in several spots, concerning the "asides". In old texts the mention often only comes after the sentence spoken which is a great annoyance and source of error. We need to be extra vigilant to check what really is said as aside. Often it's the first sentence spoken, and then we have to include the person's name.
Here's a list of all the spots where the name is missing:
Act 1:
> at 7:25: "Garcia, aside"
Act 2:
> at 3:30: "Caesar, aside"
> at 3:36: "Caesar in great agitation"
Act 3:
> at 4:02: "Caesar aside"
> at 4:53: "Marcella aside"
> at 5:27: "Caesar aside"
Act 4:
> at 1:20: "Victoria, eagerly"
> at 1:26: "Laura, aside"
> at 2:38: "Caesar aside"
> at 5:41: "Julio aloud"
Act 5:
> at 2:38: "Victoria, in transport"
> at 6:51: "Olivia aside"
> at 7:34: "Olivia apart"
> at 8:13: "Olivia to Minette"
> at 9:36: "Olivia, aside"
The rest was excellent. Thank you
Sonia