[COMPLETE] Lesley Castle, by Jane Austen (1775 - 1817)-mtf

[JoannaHoyt]

Here's Mrs. Marlowe, letter 9, duration 4:16


https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_mrsmarlowe_9.mp3

[Amatullah]

Hiya, I would like to take Eloisa Lutterell for letters 7 and 8 if that's ok?
This is my first time trying dramatic works

[ktaylor07]

Here is Charlotte Luttrerell:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter7.mp3

[brownrottger]

Are the characters supposed to read the narrator's part first?

[Salvationist]

Here's Mrs. Marlowe, letter 9, duration 4:16


https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_mrsmarlowe_9.mp3

Thank you for recording your part so quickly, Joanna!

[Salvationist]

Here is Charlotte Luttrerell:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter7.mp3

I appreciate you getting these uploaded so soon, Kelly!

[brownrottger]

nvm I now see there is a dedicated narrator for each letter

[brownrottger]

Here is Charlotte Luttrerell:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter7.mp3

Hi ktaylor07! I thoroughly enjoyed your Letter 2 especially your most excellent accent and tone! Since this is word perfect checking, I have the following for you for Letter 2:
1:02 missing the "after"
1:06 missing the worde "by" before "Night"
2:32 remove the word "all"
2:56 should read "Lifeless" instead of "of lifelessness"
3:00 should be "chests" plural instead of singular
3:04 missing the phrase "I immediately .... her to herself again."
4:31 "Alacrity" instead of "a clarity"
4:54 "rouse" instead of "arouse"
5:09 please remove the word "so"
5:42 "or" instead of "for"
5:54 missing the word "for"
6:37 remove the word "and"
6:43 "the" instead of "a"
6:51 remove the word "to"
6:54 missing the word "a" before "high delerium"
7:20 "confidently" instead of "confidentially"
7:43 missing the word "at"
7:45 missing the word "very"
I am very much looking forward to the other letters you are dramatizing!

[Salvationist]

Hiya, I would like to take Eloisa Lutterell for letters 7 and 8 if that's ok?
This is my first time trying dramatic works

You got it, Amatullah! Welcome to the DR side of LibriVox!

[Amatullah]

Here's Eloisa Lutterell letter 7
Duration 00:35
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_eloisalutterell_7.mp3

[ktaylor07]

Here is Charlotte Luttrerell:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter7.mp3

Hi ktaylor07! I thoroughly enjoyed your Letter 2 especially your most excellent accent and tone! Since this is word perfect checking, I have the following for you for Letter 2:
1:02 missing the "after"
1:06 missing the worde "by" before "Night"
2:32 remove the word "all"
2:56 should read "Lifeless" instead of "of lifelessness"
3:00 should be "chests" plural instead of singular
3:04 missing the phrase "I immediately .... her to herself again."
4:31 "Alacrity" instead of "a clarity"
4:54 "rouse" instead of "arouse"
5:09 please remove the word "so"
5:42 "or" instead of "for"
5:54 missing the word "for"
6:37 remove the word "and"
6:43 "the" instead of "a"
6:51 remove the word "to"
6:54 missing the word "a" before "high delerium"
7:20 "confidently" instead of "confidentially"
7:43 missing the word "at"
7:45 missing the word "very"
I am very much looking forward to the other letters you are dramatizing!

Here is the corrected version:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter2.mp3

Sorry I made so many little mistakes! But at least this did give me the chance to go back and re-record over some spots where I cracked up and got too giggle-y about Charlotte's "devouring plan" and her complete lack of concern about her prospective brother-in-law's demise. What a character!

[Salvationist]

Here's Eloisa Lutterell letter 7
Duration 00:35
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_eloisalutterell_7.mp3

Thank you, Amatullah! It is good to see this little project speeding along.

[Salvationist]

Here is the corrected version:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter2.mp3

Sorry I made so many little mistakes! But at least this did give me the chance to go back and re-record over some spots where I cracked up and got too giggle-y about Charlotte's "devouring plan" and her complete lack of concern about her prospective brother-in-law's demise. What a character!

Thank you for coming back with these corrections, Kelly! Yes, Charlotte is a funny character. It seems that Jane Austen was good at writing comedy from a young age!

[brownrottger]

Here's Mrs. Marlowe, letter 9, duration 4:16


https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_mrsmarlowe_9.mp3

PL ok!

[brownrottger]

Here is Charlotte Luttrerell:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter7.mp3

Hi ktaylor07! I thoroughly enjoyed your Letter 2 especially your most excellent accent and tone! Since this is word perfect checking, I have the following for you for Letter 2:
1:02 missing the "after"
1:06 missing the worde "by" before "Night"
2:32 remove the word "all"
2:56 should read "Lifeless" instead of "of lifelessness"
3:00 should be "chests" plural instead of singular
3:04 missing the phrase "I immediately .... her to herself again."
4:31 "Alacrity" instead of "a clarity"
4:54 "rouse" instead of "arouse"
5:09 please remove the word "so"
5:42 "or" instead of "for"
5:54 missing the word "for"
6:37 remove the word "and"
6:43 "the" instead of "a"
6:51 remove the word "to"
6:54 missing the word "a" before "high delerium"
7:20 "confidently" instead of "confidentially"
7:43 missing the word "at"
7:45 missing the word "very"
I am very much looking forward to the other letters you are dramatizing!

Here is the corrected version:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/lesleycastle_charlotte_letter2.mp3

Sorry I made so many little mistakes! But at least this did give me the chance to go back and re-record over some spots where I cracked up and got too giggle-y about Charlotte's "devouring plan" and her complete lack of concern about her prospective brother-in-law's demise. What a character!

You fixed all above so beautifully and seamlessly! What is your secret? I did find a few more very minute deviations:
0:50 missing word "that"
2:03 missing word "a"
2:25 missing word "Why"
3:28 should be "in" instead of "into"
4:38 missing word "a"
5:08 should be "your" instead of "you"
5:59 should be "sufferings" plural instead of singular
I apologize for not catching these the first time around.