Indeed! Fixed and reuploaded. Thank you very much!ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑June 10th, 2021, 2:02 pm Aunt Ellen: In Act 2, please double check me, but after the line "Excuse me" at 2:58 I believe there is an additional line before you say, "Yes, when they behave." That missing line is "How do you do?"
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Hello EltonTheSnowman,
I really enjoyed your characterization of Isabel. Here are my notes for Act 1: at 22:20, I believe there is a line missing between "There. That's better." and "What have you got for a pillow?" That line is: "You'll put your overcoat over you?"
At 23:11, please check to make sure you used "would" in the line "It would be too bad if...."
At 26:46 after "Come in, Johnnie!" and before "And we all do what..." please add the line "It was lovely of you to drive all night...to find me."
Thank you,
Lora
I really enjoyed your characterization of Isabel. Here are my notes for Act 1: at 22:20, I believe there is a line missing between "There. That's better." and "What have you got for a pillow?" That line is: "You'll put your overcoat over you?"
At 23:11, please check to make sure you used "would" in the line "It would be too bad if...."
At 26:46 after "Come in, Johnnie!" and before "And we all do what..." please add the line "It was lovely of you to drive all night...to find me."
Thank you,
Lora
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Here's the corrected file for Isabel, Act 1:ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑June 18th, 2021, 12:14 pm Hello EltonTheSnowman,
I really enjoyed your characterization of Isabel. Here are my notes for Act 1: at 22:20, I believe there is a line missing between "There. That's better." and "What have you got for a pillow?" That line is: "You'll put your overcoat over you?"
At 23:11, please check to make sure you used "would" in the line "It would be too bad if...."
At 26:46 after "Come in, Johnnie!" and before "And we all do what..." please add the line "It was lovely of you to drive all night...to find me."
Thank you,
Lora
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_isabel_1.mp3
(28:48)
I rerecorded that tiny part of a sentence at 23:11 because I did indeed say "It wouldn't" instead of "It would". I blame the obviously contagious sleepiness of the character
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Perfect, Matea--thank you. The sleepiness was contagious; I even yawned! PL Okay.
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Hi Matea,
PL Okay for Isabel, Act 2.
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PL Okay for Isabel, Act 2.
Thanks,
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Hi Matea,
PL Okay for Isabel Acts 2 and 3. Well done!
Thanks,
Lora
PL Okay for Isabel Acts 2 and 3. Well done!
Thanks,
Lora
Here is narrator Act 1
52:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_01_stagedirections_128kb.mp3
52:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_01_stagedirections_128kb.mp3
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Thank you, queued for PL.wib66 wrote: ↑June 22nd, 2021, 2:34 pm Here is narrator Act 1
52:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_01_stagedirections_128kb.mp3
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Hi wib66,
You did a nice job on the stage directions for Act 1!
I have a few minor notes: at 26:15 please add Station-Master before (Disclaiming responsibility); at 45:01 please omit repetition of "coquetry"; at 45:23 add "Florence turns to Ames suddenly" after "The fire begins to pick up; and last but not least, at 46:09 omit "Alexa stop"
Thank you!
Lora
You did a nice job on the stage directions for Act 1!
I have a few minor notes: at 26:15 please add Station-Master before (Disclaiming responsibility); at 45:01 please omit repetition of "coquetry"; at 45:23 add "Florence turns to Ames suddenly" after "The fire begins to pick up; and last but not least, at 46:09 omit "Alexa stop"
Thank you!
Lora
Thanks Lora. I didn't read this properly at first and thought you wanted me to add in 'Alexa Stop'. I was thinking to myself what a strange line to be in the play. Ha Ha oh dear will sort that over the next couple of days thanksADKreader1122 wrote: ↑June 28th, 2021, 9:13 am Hi wib66,
You did a nice job on the stage directions for Act 1!
I have a few minor notes: at 26:15 please add Station-Master before (Disclaiming responsibility); at 45:01 please omit repetition of "coquetry"; at 45:23 add "Florence turns to Ames suddenly" after "The fire begins to pick up; and last but not least, at 46:09 omit "Alexa stop"
Thank you!
Lora
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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Michelle--It was quite a funny moment for me; I'd never heard that in a recording before!
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Thanks for your hard work, Lora
Chris,
Some claims are 2 months old now. Were extensions requested? Are you extending them?
Thanks, Todd
Some claims are 2 months old now. Were extensions requested? Are you extending them?
Thanks, Todd
Oh dear! I think I’m one of those over due claims
May I get a short extension, Chris? I should have time this weekend to get it done.
May I get a short extension, Chris? I should have time this weekend to get it done.
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Here is Act 1 stage directions edited.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_01_stagedirections_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_01_stagedirections_128kb.mp3
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi