COMPLETE[PLAY]The Intimate Strangers by Tarkington - thw

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Kalamareader wrote: June 8th, 2021, 3:34 pm
Kalamareader wrote: June 5th, 2021, 1:22 pm Chris,

I would be willing to finish up the male parts with reading Henry.

Thanks,

Wayne

Did this get missed?

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No, you're signed up for it. (Higher up this thread at June 7th, 2021, 9:24 pm).

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Sorry Chris,

I think it was a function of not 'refreshing' my page. :oops:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_henry_2.mp3

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Hello Ava,
PL Okay for Aunt Ellen, Act 3. In Act 2, please double check me, but after the line "Excuse me" at 2:58 I believe there is an additional line before you say, "Yes, when they behave." That missing line is "How do you do?"

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Hi Adrian,
I've enjoyed all your roles, but so far this is my favorite! Acts 1 and 2 for Johnnie are PL Okay. For Act 3, about 1:00, please change "I" to "he" in "Oh, no; he wouldn't!"; at 4:42 please edit out your "Not my line" comment--not sure if any lines repeat there or not. Finally at 5:30 please change "little" to "light" in "carried away with a light weight for a while."

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Kalamareader wrote: June 8th, 2021, 7:47 pm Sorry Chris,

I think it was a function of not 'refreshing' my page. :oops:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_henry_2.mp3

Wayne
Thank you, Wayne, queued for PL.

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ADKreader1122 wrote: June 10th, 2021, 2:54 pm Hi Adrian,
I've enjoyed all your roles, but so far this is my favorite! Acts 1 and 2 for Johnnie are PL Okay. For Act 3, about 1:00, please change "I" to "he" in "Oh, no; he wouldn't!"; at 4:42 please edit out your "Not my line" comment--not sure if any lines repeat there or not. Finally at 5:30 please change "little" to "light" in "carried away with a light weight for a while."

Thanks very much,
Lora
Hello Lora,
Thank you for your kind words and attention to detail.
Here's the update: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_johnniewhite_3.mp3

Third edit at 5:30 now at 5:19.

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Thanks, Adrian--PL Okay now for Johnnie, Act 3. Chris will upload the corrected file for the MW.

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ADKreader1122 wrote: June 11th, 2021, 1:33 pm Thanks, Adrian--PL Okay now for Johnnie, Act 3. Chris will upload the corrected file for the MW.

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Done.

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Post by ADKreader1122 »

Hi Wayne,
Please double-check me on this. For Henry, Act 2, I think there is a line missing after "I got to drive him over, she says." It's around :28. The line is: "Well to me he looks more like a man....mind-like."

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Hello Todd,
PL Okay for Ames, Acts 2 and 3. Great job!

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Glad you liked it. It was a lot of confusion....

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ADKreader1122 wrote: June 14th, 2021, 1:23 pm Hi Wayne,
Please double-check me on this. For Henry, Act 2, I think there is a line missing after "I got to drive him over, she says." It's around :28. The line is: "Well to me he looks more like a man....mind-like."

Thanks for reviewing,
Lora
Lora,

Shur 'nuff, I missed that one. Here is all that Henry said: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/intimatestrangers_henry_2.mp3

Thanks for your work. That is what you get the big bucks for. :lol:

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Thanks, Wayne, for the fix; yes, those big bucks just keep rolling in :lol:
Chris will upload the corrected file.

Lora
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