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Could I have Dr. Tolman?

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MManolakes wrote: May 29th, 2021, 3:07 pm I'd like to claim Dr. Britt.

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Fantastic! Happy to have you!
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Shawn510 wrote: May 29th, 2021, 3:40 pm Could I have Dr. Tolman?

Thanks!
Certainly! It is an interesting, though brief, role. :)
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Sections 8,9,10 are PL ok for Pratt. I was planning on doing them all, but got interrupted just here. I hope to finish tonight.
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mightyfelix wrote: May 23rd, 2021, 3:18 pm 16:
1:17 Missing line: "Yes." (This is on p. 4 of the script, if you'd like to see the context.)

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2:59 Added a 'not,' which reverses the meaning. P. 3 of the script: "I am going to leave that house if I fall dead in the streets." I hear, "I am not going to leave..."
9:10 OPTIONAL This is very minor. A slight change of meaning, but I wouldn't have mentioned it if you weren't already making a change. P. 10 of the script: "And I'm going to wire Papa-Joe to come and take us home." I hear, "And I'm going to write Papa-Joe to come and take us home."
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Thank you, Algy, nice work! I can't imagine a better growl for our Miss Viola's patron! :lol: These are all PL ok, except that I do have an OPTIONAL suggestion for section 20:

I notice you recorded your first three lines muffled, I presume to give the effect of Pratt's being in the other room when he speaks them. And when I first skimmed through this chapter, I thought he was in the other room too, upstairs. But the narrator says he "appeared at the head of the stairs" just before speaking these lines. So they might work better without the muffling. Your choice. I will mark it See PL notes for now. If you'd prefer to leave it as is, let me know and I'll stick it in the PL ok pile. :D
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Availle wrote: May 29th, 2021, 6:02 pm
mightyfelix wrote: May 23rd, 2021, 3:18 pm 16:
1:17 Missing line: "Yes." (This is on p. 4 of the script, if you'd like to see the context.)

18:
2:59 Added a 'not,' which reverses the meaning. P. 3 of the script: "I am going to leave that house if I fall dead in the streets." I hear, "I am not going to leave..."
9:10 OPTIONAL This is very minor. A slight change of meaning, but I wouldn't have mentioned it if you weren't already making a change. P. 10 of the script: "And I'm going to wire Papa-Joe to come and take us home." I hear, "And I'm going to write Papa-Joe to come and take us home."
Files fixed and reuploaded. Thanks! 8-)
PL ok now, thank you! You're all done here! :D
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Section 20 - Simeon Pratt corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/tyrannyofthedark_20_simeonpratt_128kb.mp3
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Algy Pug wrote: May 29th, 2021, 7:34 pm Section 20 - Simeon Pratt corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/tyrannyofthedark_20_simeonpratt_128kb.mp3
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Wow, thank you for the quick work! :shock:

So you are also all done here, thanks again! :D
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Section 4, Dr. Britt, duration 18:51

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/tyrannyofthedark_drbritt_4.mp3

There are some words in this section that are colored for Britt but belong to the narrator: He turned a number of pages slowly. (in the paragraph that begins, "Mark his change of tone...) You probably want to fix this before the section is narrated.

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May I play Joseph Lambert, her step-father? I think I can tell which character that is in the scripts - the purple and turquoise are far enough from the blue.

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ToddHW wrote: May 30th, 2021, 3:36 pm May I play Joseph Lambert, her step-father? I think I can tell which character that is in the scripts - the purple and turquoise are far enough from the blue.

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Oh, you'll make a great Papa Joe! :9: If you do end up having trouble with the colors, let me know. I'll happily change the formatting for you.
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MManolakes wrote: May 30th, 2021, 2:57 pm Section 4, Dr. Britt, duration 18:51

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/tyrannyofthedark_drbritt_4.mp3

There are some words in this section that are colored for Britt but belong to the narrator: He turned a number of pages slowly. (in the paragraph that begins, "Mark his change of tone...) You probably want to fix this before the section is narrated.

Mike
Ugh, thank you for pointing that out! :? I've already found quite a few mis-colored lines while PLing. :roll: I remember that when I set this project up, I stayed up past my bedtime more than once working on scripts because I was so excited to get going that I wanted to get them ready as soon as possible! Lesson learned, I guess. Don't prepare scripts when your brain isn't fully functioning. :lol:
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Morton PL ok for sections 4, 6, 7 and Dr. Britt PL ok for section 4! Thank you both, these two will sound wonderful together! It really was a treat to listen to their conversation in section 4 back-to-back. :9:
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mightyfelix wrote: May 30th, 2021, 5:35 pm Ugh, thank you for pointing that out! :? I've already found quite a few mis-colored lines while PLing. :roll: I remember that when I set this project up, I stayed up past my bedtime more than once working on scripts because I was so excited to get going that I wanted to get them ready as soon as possible! Lesson learned, I guess. Don't prepare scripts when your brain isn't fully functioning. :lol:
For what it's worth, don't hesitate to ask me to resubmit if anything like this happens with one of my sections & I don't catch it. I save all my raw files and it won't be a problem to make edits.
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