mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 22nd, 2021, 9:42 pm
Excellent work on Clarke! Especially as he starts to see things crumbling around him, his desperation is almost palpable! I only have on note for you, in section 2, but it is optional. If you think it is fine as is, just say so and I'll mark it PL ok.
Section 2:
4:49 OPTIONAL pronunciation note. The last word here, animalculae, has an extra syllable which you're missing, the final syllable that makes the word plural. An-i-mal-kyool-ay. However, in spite of Clarke's apparent knowledge of this topic, he has never formally studied it that we know of, and this mispronunciation seems to fit with someone who has gotten all of his knowledge from books, as I imagine he has. Your call to leave it or change it.
Hi Devorah,
I agree with you. This is early in the work when Anthony still was supposed to be one of the most erudite men in the village, being the pastor. I have made the suggested correction and re-uploaded:
JHedrick wrote: ↑July 24th, 2021, 8:43 am
Hi Devorah,
I agree with you. This is early in the work when Anthony still was supposed to be one of the most erudite men in the village, being the pastor. I have made the suggested correction and re-uploaded:
I don't know whether you've read ahead to find out what Clarke's tragic fate is after Viola leaves him, but if not, I won't ruin it for you. Thanks for playing a guy we'll love to hate!
mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 24th, 2021, 12:12 pm
Waldron is very nearly PL ok. I like the faraway sound here. I think it will work very well in this ghostly scene! But I do need a small correction.
Part of the voice credit is missing (underlined): "Waldron, her father, read by..."
Hey man. Apologies. Here's the revised file. Time: 1:09
cavaet wrote: ↑July 26th, 2021, 9:52 pm
I'll take Weissmann off your hands
ooops, just realised it was taken. My mistake!
Yes, it was indeed claimed awhile back. But I'm beginning to wonder if I may need to orphan Weissman. I've contacted the reader who claimed him to get an update.
cavaet wrote: ↑July 26th, 2021, 9:52 pm
I'll take Weissmann off your hands
ooops, just realised it was taken. My mistake!
Yes, it was indeed claimed awhile back. But I'm beginning to wonder if I may need to orphan Weissman. I've contacted the reader who claimed him to get an update.
Well, if you don't hear back I'll take it for you, just drop me a line. I am half German and my accent is not that bad. although doing my German accent in English will be an interesting challenge, since I don't generally
I recorded one more line than you marked for me, at the very end: "Keep to your own trail," The context seemed to indicate, to me at least, that it was Morton saying this, rather than Mr. Lambert. If you do not agree, then you do not have to use it.
I only have on note for you, in section 2, but it is optional. If you think it is fine as is, just say so and I'll mark it PL ok.
Thanks for playing a guy we'll love to hate! 