(COMPLETE) [DR] The Mystery of a Hansom Cab by Fergus Hume - tg
I'll check them out and let you know.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Hey,Zanna wrote: ↑August 19th, 2021, 6:10 pm Here's Chapter 9 for Mrs Sampson. Hope it's fine.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_9_128kb.mp3
Sorry for being late. I've been busy. The volume for this one is right. Your narration is Perfect. Well done! I have few PL notes.
Could you please cut this line? @07:55 - "And he keeps good hours?" That is Mr. Gorby's line.
Could you please add those lines? On page 10.
@10:35 - "Makes what right?" and "And 'ow do you know my clock was ten minutes wrong?"
By the way, I've checked the volume of your other sections and they don't pass because they are below 86 dB. I don't know why is that since Section 9's volume is right.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Here's the louder version of chapter 13
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_13_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_13_128kb.mp3
Here's the louder Chapter 27 for Mrs Sampson
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_27_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_27_128kb.mp3
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I'll take on Mother Guttersnipe.
It might help to find readers if you move the parts that aren't assigned to the top of the section list (drag and drop). That way they're easy for browsing readers to see.
It might help to find readers if you move the parts that aren't assigned to the top of the section list (drag and drop). That way they're easy for browsing readers to see.
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Here's the louder Chapter 28 for Mrs Sampson
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_28_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_28_128kb.mp3
Here is the revised Chapter 9.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_9_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_9_128kb.mp3
Here's the louder Chapter 10
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_10_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_10_128kb.mp3
And here is the louder chapter 29, for Mrs Sampson
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_29_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrssampson_29_128kb.mp3
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Mother Guttersnipe:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_motherguttersnipe_15.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_motherguttersnipe_16.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_motherguttersnipe_18.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_motherguttersnipe_27.mp3
I found three places where the narrator lines weren't separated from my character's lines.
Page 7, I didn't note which chapter
narrator line: "—with an impressive look at the bottle—"
Chapter 27
narrator line: "snarled the hag with sudden energy;"
narrator line: "laying her hand on the pillow,"
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_motherguttersnipe_15.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_motherguttersnipe_16.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_motherguttersnipe_18.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_motherguttersnipe_27.mp3
I found three places where the narrator lines weren't separated from my character's lines.
Page 7, I didn't note which chapter
narrator line: "—with an impressive look at the bottle—"
Chapter 27
narrator line: "snarled the hag with sudden energy;"
narrator line: "laying her hand on the pillow,"
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Here's the cabman:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_cabman_08.mp3 29 seconds
Thank you for allowing me to hold onto this role for so long! Since I last recorded for this project, I have moved to a new city and also switched to a new computer. Because I have a new setup, I would be especially grateful for any thoughts you have on this recording.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_cabman_08.mp3 29 seconds
Thank you for allowing me to hold onto this role for so long! Since I last recorded for this project, I have moved to a new city and also switched to a new computer. Because I have a new setup, I would be especially grateful for any thoughts you have on this recording.