(COMPLETE) [DR] The Mystery of a Hansom Cab by Fergus Hume - tg
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Sarah,SaraHale wrote: ↑June 1st, 2021, 4:46 amExcellent, Greg. I have a few PL notes.GregGiordano wrote: ↑May 30th, 2021, 7:05 pm Mr. Gorby:
Act 4:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_04.mp3
Act 5:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_05.mp3
I have recorded all of the acts he appears in. I hope to have them edited over the next few days.
Take care,
Greg
Chapter 04: Optional feel free to ignore this PL note.
Page 2, @3:26 - so I'll start with his clothes. I heard "the" instead of "his"
Chapter 05: Please add this missing line.
Page 5, @1:16 - "I know that," is missed. It is before "He is dead".
Thanks.
Chapter 6 and 8 are PL OK
I'm going to leave Chapter 4 as is since you indicated it was optional.
I do have a question about Chapter 5. The version of the script I pull up shows the line you reference as belonging to Mrs. Hableton. Either the line does not belong to her or the line attributed to the narrator following her line is not correct. Here is the exchange I am referring to:
Narrator: said Mrs. Hableton, thinking that Whyte had got into trouble, and was in danger of arrest.
Mrs. Rubina Hableton: I know that
Narrator: answered Mr. Gorby.
Mrs. Rubina Hableton: Then where is 'e
Narrator: Mr. Gorby answered abruptly, and watched the effect of his words.
Mr. Gorby: He is dead.
Narrator: Mrs. Hableton grew pale, and pushed back her chair.
I do not want to edit the file until I know how it should be changed, if at all.
Thank you!
Greg
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Here is Chapter 9 for Mr. Gorby:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_09.mp3
Take care,
Greg
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_09.mp3
Take care,
Greg
Greg,GregGiordano wrote: ↑June 1st, 2021, 8:22 pm Sarah,
I'm going to leave Chapter 4 as is since you indicated it was optional.
I do have a question about Chapter 5. The version of the script I pull up shows the line you reference as belonging to Mrs. Hableton. Either the line does not belong to her or the line attributed to the narrator following her line is not correct. Here is the exchange I am referring to:
Narrator: said Mrs. Hableton, thinking that Whyte had got into trouble, and was in danger of arrest.
Mrs. Rubina Hableton: I know that
Narrator: answered Mr. Gorby.
Mrs. Rubina Hableton: Then where is 'e
Narrator: Mr. Gorby answered abruptly, and watched the effect of his words.
Mr. Gorby: He is dead.
Narrator: Mrs. Hableton grew pale, and pushed back her chair.
I do not want to edit the file until I know how it should be changed, if at all.
Thank you!
Greg
Chapter 4 is PL OK.
As for Chapter 5, Here is the exchange from the Gutenberg Text.
If you would like to wait for Annie's input, that's okay."He ain't here," said Mrs. Hableton, thinking that Whyte had got into trouble, and was in danger of arrest.
"I know that," answered Mr. Gorby.
"Then where is 'e?"
Mr. Gorby answered abruptly, and watched the effect of his words.
"He is dead."
Mrs. Hableton grew pale, and pushed back her chair. "No," she cried, "he never killed 'im, did 'e?"
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Sara,SaraHale wrote: ↑June 1st, 2021, 9:23 pmGreg,GregGiordano wrote: ↑June 1st, 2021, 8:22 pm Sarah,
I'm going to leave Chapter 4 as is since you indicated it was optional.
I do have a question about Chapter 5. The version of the script I pull up shows the line you reference as belonging to Mrs. Hableton. Either the line does not belong to her or the line attributed to the narrator following her line is not correct. Here is the exchange I am referring to:
Narrator: said Mrs. Hableton, thinking that Whyte had got into trouble, and was in danger of arrest.
Mrs. Rubina Hableton: I know that
Narrator: answered Mr. Gorby.
Mrs. Rubina Hableton: Then where is 'e
Narrator: Mr. Gorby answered abruptly, and watched the effect of his words.
Mr. Gorby: He is dead.
Narrator: Mrs. Hableton grew pale, and pushed back her chair.
I do not want to edit the file until I know how it should be changed, if at all.
Thank you!
Greg
Chapter 4 is PL OK.
As for Chapter 5, Here is the exchange from the Gutenberg Text.
If you would like to wait for Annie's input, that's okay."He ain't here," said Mrs. Hableton, thinking that Whyte had got into trouble, and was in danger of arrest.
"I know that," answered Mr. Gorby.
"Then where is 'e?"
Mr. Gorby answered abruptly, and watched the effect of his words.
"He is dead."
Mrs. Hableton grew pale, and pushed back her chair. "No," she cried, "he never killed 'im, did 'e?"
I'm not trying to be difficult about this, I just want to make sure my recording is correct. According to the text linked in the MW the line in question is assigned to Mrs. Hableton, not Mr. Gorby. I clipped it in my previous message so you could see what I was referring to. I have no problem recording one additional line but the script has that line assigned to Mrs. Hableton, not me.
I will gladly do whatever you or Annie decide.
Thanks!
Greg
I understand. Okay, let us wait for Annie because she is the one who created the Google Document.GregGiordano wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 3:38 am Sara,
I'm not trying to be difficult about this, I just want to make sure my recording is correct. According to the text linked in the MW the line in question is assigned to Mrs. Hableton, not Mr. Gorby. I clipped it in my previous message so you could see what I was referring to. I have no problem recording one additional line but the script has that line assigned to Mrs. Hableton, not me.
I will gladly do whatever you or Annie decide.
Thanks!
Greg
Chapter 9 is PL OK
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Thanks, Sara. That sounds fair.SaraHale wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 3:51 amI understand. Okay, let us wait for Annie because she is the one who created the Google Document.GregGiordano wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 3:38 am Sara,
I'm not trying to be difficult about this, I just want to make sure my recording is correct. According to the text linked in the MW the line in question is assigned to Mrs. Hableton, not Mr. Gorby. I clipped it in my previous message so you could see what I was referring to. I have no problem recording one additional line but the script has that line assigned to Mrs. Hableton, not me.
I will gladly do whatever you or Annie decide.
Thanks!
Greg
Chapter 9 is PL OK
By the way, thank you for proofing this project, especially when you have to deal with the picky reader like me!
You're most welcome.GregGiordano wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 3:58 am Thanks, Sara. That sounds fair.
By the way, thank you for proofing this project, especially when you have to deal with the picky reader like me!
My pleasure. I did promise you a fast PLing. Please don't say that. I'm honored to be working with you.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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uploaded the correction to chapter 10SaraHale wrote: ↑June 1st, 2021, 4:02 amBrilliant, Andrew! Chapter 7, 8, and 11 are PL OK.sonofcoltas wrote: ↑May 30th, 2021, 2:37 pm I have uploaded the following 4 Mark Frettlby sections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_07.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_08.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_10.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_11.mp3
NOTE: I think that there is an error in the script on page 2 of Chapter 11. The line “I believe Brian before anyone else in the world,” is attributed to Mark Frettilby, but the Narrator line that follows attributes it to Madge, which makes more sense. I read it as marked
Feel free to ignore this PL note if you want to.
Chapter 10:
Page 7, @01:42 - You can tell that by the length of her tongue. You've missed "that".
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_10.mp3
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You have surely kept your word. I too am honored to be working with you and this incredible family of Librivoxers!SaraHale wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 4:02 amYou're most welcome.GregGiordano wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 3:58 am Thanks, Sara. That sounds fair.
By the way, thank you for proofing this project, especially when you have to deal with the picky reader like me!
My pleasure. I did promise you a fast PLing. Please don't say that. I'm honored to be working with you.
Thank you, Andrew! It's perfect.sonofcoltas wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 4:53 am uploaded the correction to chapter 10
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_10.mp3
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I uploaded Chapters 17 and 22 for Mark Frettlby. I could not find any lines for him in Chapter 18.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_17.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_17.mp3
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Here are the final two chapters for Mr. Gorby:
Chapter 10 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_10.mp3
Chapter 14 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_14.mp3
Take care,
Greg
Chapter 10 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_10.mp3
Chapter 14 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_14.mp3
Take care,
Greg
Chapter 17 and 22 are PL OK . I hope you won't mind but I've marked Chapter 18 as See PL Notes for Annie when she comes back to ask her about the lines.sonofcoltas wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 12:37 pm I uploaded Chapters 17 and 22 for Mark Frettlby. I could not find any lines for him in Chapter 18.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_markfrettlby_17.mp3
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
PL OKGregGiordano wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 9:14 pm Here are the final two chapters for Mr. Gorby:
Chapter 10 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_10.mp3
Chapter 14 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mysteryofahansomcab_mrgorby_14.mp3
Take care,
Greg
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.