COMPLETE[PLAY]One Fool Makes Many by de Solis - thw
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Still need someone to read the stage directions?
I'd be glad to take that on.
I'd be glad to take that on.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
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Here's the correction. I imagine that was inaccurate editing.Kitty wrote: ↑March 10th, 2021, 5:17 am Update: archive works again and I was able to PL Act 3 for Don Diego. Excellent theatrics again :thumbs:
> at 1:42: (p. 316) "Don Lewis, if I remember rightly..." – the beginning is cut off, I only hear "-is" instead of "Don Lewis" :hmm: maybe a jump in the audio ?
Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_dondiego_3.mp3
Thanks for your words of encouragement. I tried to make this a character you wouldn't particularly like - vain and cruel.
I think, in hindsight, I should have made him a bumbling fool. Oh well.
Best Regards,
Adrian
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I know what you mean, yes he definitely has that streak. I am always looking forward to the personal interpretations of some characters, which sometimes differ from what I initially thought. It's part of the excitement and fun here in the drama forum.adrianstephens wrote: ↑March 10th, 2021, 11:09 amI tried to make this a character you wouldn't particularly like - vain and cruel.
Thank you, this is PL ok now
Sonia
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Larry, aside to Todd: Here are the stage directions:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_stagedirections_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_stagedirections_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_stagedirections_3.mp3
Sonia, aside to Larry:
You missed six asides, three exits and a partridge in a pear tree....
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_stagedirections_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_stagedirections_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_stagedirections_3.mp3
Sonia, aside to Larry:
You missed six asides, three exits and a partridge in a pear tree....
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
Todd, earnestly, with a large smile: "Thank you!"
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Thank you.
Todd
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Here are all three acts for Don Lewis:
Act One: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_1_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Act Two: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_2_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Act Three: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_3_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Have a wonderful week!
Greg
Act One: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_1_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Act Two: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_2_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Act Three: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_3_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Have a wonderful week!
Greg
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
how did you know !!! well...you didn't miss six asides, but I found six spots to edit no partridge in a pear tree though...silverquill wrote: ↑March 12th, 2021, 12:51 pmSonia, aside to Larry:
You missed six asides, three exits and a partridge in a pear tree....
Act 1:
> at about 3:21: (p. 247) please insert: "exit" (there should be two in succession)
> at about 5:36: (p. 259) please insert: "Enter Donna Anna and Juana"
> at 6:23: (p. 264) "Juana, aside" – name missing
Act 2:
> at 4:35: (p. 293) "Donna Isabella, aside" – name missing
Act 3:
> at 1:35: (p. 312) "Don Lewis to Martin" – title missing
> at about 2:43: (p. 319) missed line: "Enter Don Cosmo"
thank you, Larry, for the fast turn-around ! Excellent narrations, as always ! And sorry for the delay in PL feedback...weekend was busy and I am only now catching up.
Sonia
thank you, Wendy, Juana is perfectly portrayed I love the energy you display here at scheming and at fretting about being found out all PL ok
Sonia
and last but not least, the huge role of Don Lewis. Excellent job, Greg wow this was a big part. And I got more and more confusing by who is dating whom here. Those pesky veils make it so hard to know who each man is talking to.
Act 1 is straight PL ok.
Two small notes to edit for the other acts though:
Act 2:
> at 7:49: (p. 303) "but hear me madam" – you say "bear me", which sounds a bit odd, since she replies "what would you say"
Act 3:
> at 0:52: (p. 313) "he chooses his messenger well" – "chuses" is an old spelling of "chooses"
thanks
Sonia
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Sonia,Kitty wrote: ↑March 15th, 2021, 7:03 amand last but not least, the huge role of Don Lewis. Excellent job, Greg wow this was a big part. And I got more and more confusing by who is dating whom here. Those pesky veils make it so hard to know who each man is talking to.
Act 1 is straight PL ok.
Two small notes to edit for the other acts though:
Act 2:
> at 7:49: (p. 303) "but hear me madam" – you say "bear me", which sounds a bit odd, since she replies "what would you say"
Act 3:
> at 0:52: (p. 313) "he chooses his messenger well" – "chuses" is an old spelling of "chooses"
thanks
Sonia
Thank you for the quick PL-ing! I did not do too bad in the mistakes area if I do say so myself! I will have the corrections made shortly.
This was a nice change up for me. I tried to downplay the part a bit since I did not see the character as "over the top" as the last one or two I have read. I hope I did it justice. I was not familiar with the play before I began so I hope I pulled off the good Don Lewis the way he deserved.
Thanks again for all the hard work YOU do!
Take care,
Greg
P.S. Please keep me on your casting list. My projects are almost complete so am in the market for another good cast to join.
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Sonia,
Here are the two corrections for Don Lewis:
Act Two -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_2_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Act Three -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_3_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Many thanks, as always!
Greg
Here are the two corrections for Don Lewis:
Act Two -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_2_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Act Three -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/onefoolmakesmany_3_donlewis_128kb.mp3
Many thanks, as always!
Greg