COMPLETE[PLAY]The Princess and the Butterfly by Pinero - thw
super, Tina, thank you so much. It's always helpful to get the stage direction in very early on, so Todd can already start assembling his preliminary base frame of the play.
Only a few names to cut, where there were no accompanying stage directions, so we don't need those:
Act 3:
> at 2:27: (p. 130) "Lady Ringstead" – can be cut
> at 3:05: (p. 131) "Lady Chichele" - as well
> at 28:21: (p. 173) "Servant" - as well
Act 4:
> at 1:52: (p. 183) "Sir George" - also can be cut
the rest was perfect
Sonia
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Here is the corrected Act 3, removing your 3 edits. Length: 33:49
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_3_.mp3
Here is the corrected Act 4, removing one edit. Length: 18:08
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_4_.mp3
And, here is Act 5. Length: 28:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_5_.mp3
I'll watch for any further recommended changes. I can't wait to hear this complete!
Tina
Only a few names to cut, where there were no accompanying stage directions, so we don't need those:
Act 3:
> at 2:27: (p. 130) "Lady Ringstead" – can be cut
> at 3:05: (p. 131) "Lady Chichele" - as well
> at 28:21: (p. 173) "Servant" - as well
Act 4:
> at 1:52: (p. 183) "Sir George" - also can be cut
the rest was perfect
Sonia
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Here is the corrected Act 3, removing your 3 edits. Length: 33:49
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_3_.mp3
Here is the corrected Act 4, removing one edit. Length: 18:08
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_4_.mp3
And, here is Act 5. Length: 28:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_5_.mp3
I'll watch for any further recommended changes. I can't wait to hear this complete!
Tina
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
thank you, and all PL ok nowWendyKatzHiller wrote: ↑March 29th, 2021, 9:02 am Here's the corrected Act 1
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_ladychichele_1.mp3
Sonia
well, you are probably happy to hear the good news that Act 5 was perfectly PL ok on the first run (and the other two as well) you got the hang of it now.TrLove wrote: ↑March 29th, 2021, 11:05 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_3_.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_4_.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_stagedirection_5_.mp3
I'll watch for any further recommended changes. I can't wait to hear this complete!
You can now range yourself officially among the brave and hardy Pinero-stage narrators I believe there should be printed t-shirts "I survived narrating a Pinero play and all I got was this lousy t-shirt" It's really a feat.
Thank you, Tina ! And hopefully I'll hear you in another play soon.
Sonia
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I'd like to take the Princess' French butler.
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
well, you are probably happy to hear the good news that Act 5 was perfectly PL ok on the first run (and the other two as well) you got the hang of it now.
You can now range yourself officially among the brave and hardy Pinero-stage narrators I believe there should be printed t-shirts "I survived narrating a Pinero play and all I got was this lousy t-shirt" It's really a feat.
Thank you, Tina ! And hopefully I'll hear you in another play soon.
Sonia
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You’re very welcome! Pinero sure exerts lots of control over movement! Some scenes sounded like he was posing clay figures by phone. His is a style very well suited to audio performance. Lovely working with you.
Tina
You can now range yourself officially among the brave and hardy Pinero-stage narrators I believe there should be printed t-shirts "I survived narrating a Pinero play and all I got was this lousy t-shirt" It's really a feat.
Thank you, Tina ! And hopefully I'll hear you in another play soon.
Sonia
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You’re very welcome! Pinero sure exerts lots of control over movement! Some scenes sounded like he was posing clay figures by phone. His is a style very well suited to audio performance. Lovely working with you.
Tina
Hello!
Here is Maxime Demailly
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_maximedemailly_2.mp3
act 2, 2:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_maximedemailly_5.mp3
act 5, 3:25
Rémi
Here is Maxime Demailly
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_maximedemailly_2.mp3
act 2, 2:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_maximedemailly_5.mp3
act 5, 3:25
Rémi
ah excellent, Rémi, you played him very well. The suppressed anger in Act 2 is well done and later being slightly ashamed as well. I think he is consoling himself a bit too fast with Annis in the end Typical French, to change loves so fast ?
In any case, nothing missing, so straight PL ok. Thank you for taking part !!! Your accent gives him the right French flair.
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I can probably handle Mrs. Ughbrook's huge role in Act 3 if I clear my calendar.
Username to be read as "DianaHKennedy"
Please use Diana Helen Kennedy as voice credit - thank you!
Please use Diana Helen Kennedy as voice credit - thank you!
Thank you.
Todd
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here is the French servant
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_frenchservant_3.mp3 (0:28)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/princessandthebutterfly_frenchservant_3.mp3 (0:28)
Thank you.
Todd
Todd