COMPLETE [DR] Understood Betsy by Dorothy Canfield Fisher-mas
PL notes for Narrator Ch 5:
@ 11:49 Misread word: "...and then they'd all set their feet hard when Ralph shouted out..."
@ 10:45 Repeat: "...when she came to be grown up. Of course, she didn't really know that till she did come.."
@ 0:00 Intro is incorrect. Please read it word-for-word from the script.
@ 11:49 Misread word: "...and then they'd all set their feet hard when Ralph shouted out..."
@ 10:45 Repeat: "...when she came to be grown up. Of course, she didn't really know that till she did come.."
@ 0:00 Intro is incorrect. Please read it word-for-word from the script.
PL note for Henry Ch 10:
@ 1:29 Two missing lines: "I know just how feel, Mother," and "When I saw 'em standin' there by the roadside..."
@ 1:29 Two missing lines: "I know just how feel, Mother," and "When I saw 'em standin' there by the roadside..."
Henry Chapters 8 and 11 are PL OK!
Don't forget to upload your Chapter 9 file!
Don't forget to upload your Chapter 9 file!
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Here's the edited chapters 3, 4, and 5!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_04_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_03_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_05_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_04_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_03_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_05_128kb.mp3
2 Timothy 1:7. Look it up.
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Thank you!
Narrator Chapters 3, 4, and 5 are spot PL OK!
Narrator Chapters 3, 4, and 5 are spot PL OK!
Little Molly Chapters 5, 7, and 9 are PL OK! Excellent job!
PL notes for Little Molly Ch 8:
@ 0:02 Pause needed: "Well, anyhow," [Insert 3-5 second pause here] "I don't care what his stepfather does..."
@ 0:00 Missing three lines: "And sometimes," and "he forgets to put on any stockings..." and "How can he drink up stockings!"
@ 0:02 Pause needed: "Well, anyhow," [Insert 3-5 second pause here] "I don't care what his stepfather does..."
@ 0:00 Missing three lines: "And sometimes," and "he forgets to put on any stockings..." and "How can he drink up stockings!"
Ellen Peters is all PL OK! Lovely job, as always!
Eliza Ch 8 is spot PL OK!
PL notes for Miss Benton Ch 4:
@ 0:45 Longer pause needed: "This is the whole school," [Insert 3-5 second pause here] "There are only two or three in each class."
@ 0:36 Longer pause needed: "They don't see many strangers," [Insert 3-5 second pause here] "and they feel very shy and scared..."
@ 0:27 Longer pause needed: "This is the school," [Insert 3-5 second pause here] "and I am the teacher, and you'd better come..."
@ 0:45 Longer pause needed: "This is the whole school," [Insert 3-5 second pause here] "There are only two or three in each class."
@ 0:36 Longer pause needed: "They don't see many strangers," [Insert 3-5 second pause here] "and they feel very shy and scared..."
@ 0:27 Longer pause needed: "This is the school," [Insert 3-5 second pause here] "and I am the teacher, and you'd better come..."
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Narrator chapter 6 is ready for PL too(and Ms. Fisher wasn't kidding about the amount of conversation in this chapter! )!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_06_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_06_128kb.mp3
2 Timothy 1:7. Look it up.
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Sorry to be late with my corrections, but here are Chapters 6 and 10 with the missing lines -- hope I got them all.
And, Chapter 9 that I somehow overlooked. I could fine just the one "together" line. I wasn't sure of the pacing so I gave you two for you to choose from. If neither are right, just let me know.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_06.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_09.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_10.mp3
And, Chapter 9 that I somehow overlooked. I could fine just the one "together" line. I wasn't sure of the pacing so I gave you two for you to choose from. If neither are right, just let me know.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_06.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_09.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_10.mp3
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
Thank you!Bookworm360 wrote: ↑April 9th, 2021, 6:27 pm Narrator chapter 6 is ready for PL too(and Ms. Fisher wasn't kidding about the amount of conversation in this chapter! )!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_06_128kb.mp3
No worries! Sorry I didn't get them proof-listened sooner!silverquill wrote: ↑April 9th, 2021, 11:15 pm Sorry to be late with my corrections, but here are Chapters 6 and 10 with the missing lines -- hope I got them all.
And, Chapter 9 that I somehow overlooked. I could fine just the one "together" line. I wasn't sure of the pacing so I gave you two for you to choose from. If neither are right, just let me know.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_06.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_09.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_henry_10.mp3
Thank you!