COMPLETE [DR] Understood Betsy by Dorothy Canfield Fisher-mas

rieyrules · Post by **rieyrules** » March 16th, 2021, 1:14 pm

Here are my contributions:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_voice1_01.mp3
4 secs
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_eliza_08.mp3
23 secs
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_eliza_09.mp3
6 secs
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_grayhairedwoman_10.mp3
20 secs

I'll await suggestions/critiques.

Laura

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 17th, 2021, 7:14 am

Thank you, Laura!

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 18th, 2021, 5:33 pm

Betsy Chapters 10 and 11 are PL OK!

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 18th, 2021, 5:51 pm

Abigail Chapters 2 and 3 are PL OK!

Lovely job!

Bookworm360 · Post by **Bookworm360** » March 19th, 2021, 3:47 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_01_canfieldfisher_128kb.mp3
Here is the updated Chapter 1!(and goodness Jaykitty, you were right about those pause lengths!

)

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 4:47 pm

Abigail Chapters 4, 6, 8, 10 and 11 are all PL OK!

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 4:58 pm

Bookworm360 wrote: ↑March 19th, 2021, 3:47 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/understoodbetsy_narrator_01_canfieldfisher_128kb.mp3
Here is the updated Chapter 1!(and goodness Jaykitty, you were right about those pause lengths! )

Thanks, Bookworm!

Everything's good except the intro still isn't quite right.

When you read your voice credit, you need to say your catalog name rather than your forum name. So you would say "Narrator read by MaybeCordelia." (Unless you want to request your catalog name be changed to "Bookworm360" -- you can do that if you really want to.)
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Your voice credit is at the wrong spot in your recording. It needs to be at the very beginning of your recording, before anything else.
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At 0:16, you left out a little sentence in the intro: "...please visit librivox.org. Understood Betsy, by Dorothy Canfield Fisher. Chapter 1: Aunt Harriet Has..."

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 5:09 pm

PL note for Eliza Chapter 8:

@ 0:00 Missing a voice credit

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 5:12 pm

Eliza Chapter 9 is PL OK!

Group lines sound perfect!

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 5:18 pm

Dan is PL OK!

Great job, as always!

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 5:22 pm

Conductor Chapters 2 and 11 are PL OK!

Great acting!

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 5:28 pm

PL note for Gray-Haired Woman:

@ 0:00 Missing voice credit. (You wouldn't want to miss out on getting credit for reading the "gray-haired woman," would you?

)

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 5:30 pm

PL note for Voice 1:

@ 0:00 Missing voice credit.

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » March 19th, 2021, 5:34 pm

Voice 2 (a.k.a. Cousin Ann in disguise

) is PL OK!

Sounded great!

rieyrules · Post by **rieyrules** » March 19th, 2021, 7:08 pm

Yikes! I knew I was forgetting something! I'll add the characters' names + my name ASAP!
Thanks for the reminder(s)!

Laura