[COMPLETE] Play: The Marrying of Ann Leete by Harley Granville-Barker -ans

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TallyTiger wrote: March 27th, 2021, 4:46 pm
Tchaikovsky wrote: March 27th, 2021, 5:35 am Hello, absolutely and welcome!

There is one small trouble spot for Dolly on the bottom of page 68. She is a woman of the lower class trying to imitate the upper class that she is surrounded by. She has to mispronounce the word Kashmir shawl. The writer has it as if she says "Cash-ee-Myer" It's an important word for her character so it's worth drawing attention too.

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Hi, thanks for the warning! Ironically, that line was easy. It was another one that I had to redo and redo and redo!
I hope you like it and "Here's Dolly!" :clap:

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_dolly_4.mp3 (1:28)

Tally
Thank You for the fast turn-around. Excellent work. I love how you handled the line that begins "Not Parson Remnant..."

Pl Notes:

You missed a one word line at 01:15. Need to insert the word "John"

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Tchaikovsky wrote: March 28th, 2021, 5:09 am
Thank You for the fast turn-around. Excellent work. I love how you handled the line that begins "Not Parson Remnant..."

Pl Notes:

You missed a one word line at 01:15. Need to insert the word "John"

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I found John! Ready for a Spot PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_dolly_4.mp3

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Perfect! Pl is now ok for Dolly Act 4. :thumbs:

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Here is Remnant with the suggested corrections:

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_remnant_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_remnant_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_remnant_4.mp3

I'm still not clear on the pronunciation of Abud. There are at least six ways to pronounce it. The stage directions sounds like long a, short u, accent on second syllable. Character intro has short a and short you and likewise accent on second syllable, so I went with that.

If you want any other changes, I'll stay tuned.
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silverquill wrote: April 1st, 2021, 9:35 pm Here is Remnant with the suggested corrections:

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_remnant_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_remnant_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_remnant_4.mp3

I'm still not clear on the pronunciation of Abud. There are at least six ways to pronounce it. The stage directions sounds like long a, short u, accent on second syllable. Character intro has short a and short you and likewise accent on second syllable, so I went with that.

If you want any other changes, I'll stay tuned.
Hello, I quickly checked and Abud sounds just right.

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PL ok for all of Dr Remnant. Many Thanks Larry.

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hello all

please can i claim

Mr Carnaby Leete (a politician) all acts hes in

regards

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May I read Lord John Carp?

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Andrewjames wrote: April 3rd, 2021, 3:47 am hello all

please can i claim

Mr Carnaby Leete (a politician) all acts hes in

regards

AJ
Thank you. Yes absolutely.

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ToddHW wrote: April 3rd, 2021, 3:25 pm May I read Lord John Carp?

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Here is George Leete Act 3 & 4.
in Act 3 there is one line that is repeated which made me wonder if it was a misprint. I included it anyway.

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_george_3.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_george_4.mp3
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I agree that the repeated line must be a misprint. Act 3 PL OK

Act 4, missing line before 1:15, on page 73 "goodbye everybody goodbye everything"
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Rapunzelina wrote: April 5th, 2021, 1:52 pm I agree that the repeated line must be a misprint. Act 3 PL OK

Act 4, missing line before 1:15, on page 73 "goodbye everybody goodbye everything"
Thanks for the PL'ing.

Do you think I should retain the repeated line when I am editing all of the act together?

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I wouldn't, but is there another pd text source that you could cross check ?
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Corrections to George Leete Act 4

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/marryingofannleete_george_4.mp3

PL ok.

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