COMPLETE[PLAY]A Woman's Way by Buchanan - thw

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Kitty wrote: July 12th, 2021, 5:27 am
iBeScotty wrote: July 9th, 2021, 10:57 amAct III stage directions (~25 minutes)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_3.mp3
thank you, Scotty, you really had a lot to record for these stage directions. And the level of accuracy was near perfect, making it so enjoyable for me. 8-)

I did find a few small things to correct though:

> at 6:14: (p. 129) "Marion, low" – we need to include the name here, as it's after stage directions mentioned other characters

> from 14:18 to 14:20: (p. 141) between "had his conquests" and "Morris and Bob" – you can shorten the pause here, as it's inside the same quote chunk

> at 14:40: "No wedding bells for me-whistle from Whitney" – best to say the title of the song as well, as I don't think that Whitney will say this line, he is supposed to whistle the tune. I know Tomas didn't include it. So you can also shorten the break in between here as well

thank you !

Sonia
I re-uploaded the file with these corrections: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_3.mp3

Thank you for your careful listening! This project is in good hands!

Scotty
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Thank you.

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iBeScotty wrote: July 12th, 2021, 9:30 amI re-uploaded the file with these corrections: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_3.mp3
excellent, thank you, and it's PL ok. Now after this feat you can lie back and wait for the finished result. I predict this will be a great play. :9:

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Acts 2 and 3 assembled; starting on 1. Not ready for PL - one character (Stanton) is still missing everywhere.

Here is my take on the cast list (it formats to look slightly different):
<BR><BR>Cast list:<BR>
Mr. Lynch: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a><br>
Salie Livingstone: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15380">Annie Mars</a><br>
Mrs. Stanton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11790">TJ Burns</a><br>
Mrs. Blakemore: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a><br>
Bob Livingstone: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Oliver Whitney: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a><br>
Mrs. Belle Morris: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7026">Michele Eaton</a><br>
Mr. Morris: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10801">Jim Locke</a><br>
Wilson: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15638">qthemusic123</a><br>
Howard Stanton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16240">HelloCentral</a><br>
Marion Stanton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a><br>
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11331">Scotty Smith</a><br>
Editing: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a><br>

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Why are the General and his missus missing in the cast list ? Are we both going incognito on this one ? :mrgreen:

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Becuz he was lost in Africa and she was looking for him.

General Livingstone, Act 1: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a><br>
Mrs. Livingstone, Act 1: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a><br>

Thanks for finding him!

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Everything assembled. Now we just wait for final character to show up so this can be finalized.

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Thank you.

(Sonia, I will PL these as I cut them in. You can listen with the Final PL of the completed acts.)

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Rick,

Nicely done. Glad to have you here.

A couple PL Comments for Stanton, Act 1. (Normally I'd give timings of where in your file the problem is so you could fix them there and upload everything, but since I'm cutting your file apart as I do this, I don't know where these errors are. But anyway, instead of fixing your file, I'd like just a small separate file - put "fix" at the end of the file name - with only the fixes.)

Page 11 - missed the line after the stage direction: "What's the matter, you idiot?"

Page 29 - I hear "Is it serious?"; text is opposite: "Isn't it serious?"

Page 61 - three missing lines: "Yes." and "Hang it, Marion, you've been frank with me — I'm damned if I know." and "Marion!"

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Todd,

Got it, thanks. I'm about to submit act 3 and then I'll work on the fixes.

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Thank you.

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