COMPLETE[PLAY]A Woman's Way by Buchanan - thw
Thank you. I think what you said you read is what I wanted.
Todd
Todd
it was an excellent job, considering how many stage directions there are really very done, Scott, you made my job so easy this time.iBeScotty wrote: ↑July 1st, 2021, 1:43 pmHere is Act I stage directions. I did not read the lengthy introduction but did the author’s note, if wanted. Even at 35 minutes i still have this feeling i missed something
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_1.mp3
Though lulling me into security, I nearly missed one omitted name near the end of the act you did forget one thing !
> at 29:18: (p. 50) "Marion, rising, seeing the funny side..." – you forgot to include the name "Marion" here
all the rest is perfect. Thank you so much for the fast turn-around.
Sonia
Awesome, thank you! I just replaced the file with this correction—quick copy and paste of previous Marion
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_1.mp3
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
Hi, ijust uploaded Act II stage directions, that would take 33 minutes to listen to at normal speed
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_2.mp3
scotty
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_2.mp3
scotty
fantastic job of catching all the stage directions, even some very well hidden ones. This is totally PL ok. Thank you so much, Scotty, you're making my task here very easy.iBeScotty wrote: ↑July 7th, 2021, 3:30 pmHi, ijust uploaded Act II stage directions, that would take 33 minutes to listen to at normal speed
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_2.mp3
Sonia
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Here is Oliver Whitney!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_oliver_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_oliver_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_oliver_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_oliver_3_128kb.mp3
Tomas Peter
thank you, Tomas, Oliver is so like I imagined him, jovial, good-humoured, up for sport, but still very much in love with Marion. A tragic hero somehow. She should have left Howard for Oliver.WiltedScribe wrote: ↑July 8th, 2021, 6:02 pmHere is Oliver Whitney!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_oliver_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_oliver_3_128kb.mp3
Both acts PL ok !
Now only waiting for the final main character
Sonia
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I'll submit the Howard Stanton part by the middle of next week. Sorry for the delay.
Thank you. No apology necessary - you still have a month left on your claim.
Todd
Todd
Act III stage directions (~25 minutes)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_3.mp3
~Scotty
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_3.mp3
~Scotty
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
thank you, Scotty, you really had a lot to record for these stage directions. And the level of accuracy was near perfect, making it so enjoyable for me.iBeScotty wrote: ↑July 9th, 2021, 10:57 amAct III stage directions (~25 minutes)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_stagedirections_3.mp3
I did find a few small things to correct though:
> at 6:14: (p. 129) "Marion, low" – we need to include the name here, as it's after stage directions mentioned other characters
> from 14:18 to 14:20: (p. 141) between "had his conquests" and "Morris and Bob" – you can shorten the pause here, as it's inside the same quote chunk
> at 14:40: "No wedding bells for me-whistle from Whitney" – best to say the title of the song as well, as I don't think that Whitney will say this line, he is supposed to whistle the tune. I know Tomas didn't include it. So you can also shorten the break in between here as well
thank you !
Sonia