COMPLETE[PLAY]The Emperor of the Moon by Aphra Behn - thw
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Todd
Todd
Stage directions for acts 2 and 3 in the MW. These are confusing! I added some character names where it was unclear who was saying something or to whom.
I do know that some of the directions will get deleted in editing where they will end up not being necessary.
Thanks, Todd
I do know that some of the directions will get deleted in editing where they will end up not being necessary.
Thanks, Todd
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Hi Tchaikovsky! Nicely done! What a shame that Don Charmante can't join us for the final Act...Tchaikovsky wrote: ↑April 23rd, 2021, 8:55 am Here are the files for Don Charmante. He was fun to read. Files passed in Checker.
Tchaikovsky
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_doncharmonte_1_128kb.mp3 (7:23)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_doncharmante_2_128kb.mp3 (4:50)
Both Acts are PL OK as far as the text itself, just one small edit required:
For your voice credit, please include full character description as it appears in the MW. In this case: "Don Charmante, Nephew to the Vice-Roy, and Lover of Bellemante". And since you'll be reuploading the file anyway, you may wish to fix a typo in the Act 1 filename: you have "doncharmonte" rather than "doncharmante". Filename issues aren't the end of the world when it comes to dramatic works, but it's something worth keeping an eye on.
Thanks again!
Todd - hang tight for PL on the Stage Directions. I'm hoping to get to them this evening, but they may have to wait until tomorrow.
"The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents." - H.P. Lovecraft
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These are complicated stage directions are to be sure...suitable for the insanity of the play, I suppose. I only caught a couple of small things:
Act 2:
~11:07 - Missing "Doctor Enters"
Act 3:
~4:41 - Missing "Aside" (Scaramouch)
Otherwise all is well!
Act 2:
~11:07 - Missing "Doctor Enters"
Act 3:
~4:41 - Missing "Aside" (Scaramouch)
Otherwise all is well!
"The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents." - H.P. Lovecraft
Readers Wanted: Seen on the Stage, by Clayton Hamilton
Readers Wanted: Seen on the Stage, by Clayton Hamilton
Thank you. Both sections fixed and uploaded for Spot PL.
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Hello Todd,
Here are the corrections for Don Chamante Act 1 including the spelling correction to the filename. The new duration is 7:27
Tchaikovsky
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_doncharmante_1_128kb.mp3
Here are the corrections for Don Chamante Act 1 including the spelling correction to the filename. The new duration is 7:27
Tchaikovsky
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_doncharmante_1_128kb.mp3
Thank you.
Todd
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Harlequin act 3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_harlequin_3.mp3
Harlequin has quite a lot to say in this act, but I really enjoyed recording this role
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_harlequin_3.mp3
Harlequin has quite a lot to say in this act, but I really enjoyed recording this role
Alan
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
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Thanks Tchaikovsky - PL OK!Tchaikovsky wrote: ↑April 28th, 2021, 8:07 am Hello Todd,
Here are the corrections for Don Chamante Act 1 including the spelling correction to the filename. The new duration is 7:27
Tchaikovsky
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_doncharmante_1_128kb.mp3
Todd - I also double checked the stage directions, which are now PL OK as well
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And I quite enjoyed listening to it! PL OK!alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 1st, 2021, 2:23 am Harlequin act 3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_harlequin_3.mp3
Harlequin has quite a lot to say in this act, but I really enjoyed recording this role
"The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents." - H.P. Lovecraft
Readers Wanted: Seen on the Stage, by Clayton Hamilton
Readers Wanted: Seen on the Stage, by Clayton Hamilton
Thank you.
(If you wish, when you mark something PL OK in one of my plays, you can drag that section down into the set of PL OK parts for each act. Order is unimportant - it just collects everything by act for when I edit and it keeps the top of the MW with only open and assigned roles.)
Thanks, Todd
(If you wish, when you mark something PL OK in one of my plays, you can drag that section down into the set of PL OK parts for each act. Order is unimportant - it just collects everything by act for when I edit and it keeps the top of the MW with only open and assigned roles.)
Thanks, Todd
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
here is the officer
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_officer_1_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:15 min.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_officer_3_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:13 min.
Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_officer_1_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:15 min.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/emperorofthemoon_officer_3_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:13 min.
Sonia