Sorry to take so long to get to this.
Catherine Chapter 9 is PL OK!
Just some very small notes for Chapter 2.
2:19
This is just a small change, but I think it makes the sentence a bit clearer. The second correction is optional, but if you are redoing the line, I might as well mention it:
"...We had over twelve hundred dollars when we started but we got gypped out of it all
in two days in the private rooms. We had an awful time getting back, I can tell you. God,
how I hated that town!’
I hear "two days into" instead of "in two days in" and you leave out "how".
I'm afraid I gave you three lines on page 14 that should have gone to Mrs. McKee. I'll send her a PM. Sorry about that.
Just one more small note, on page 17, I have you and Mrs. McKee "scolding and consoling".
[CATHERINE & MRS. MCKEE: SCOLDING & CONSOLING] (p. 17)
Thanks!