Another great act for Tom! Just a couple of small things for you to fix on this file:Dalerobbins wrote: ↑January 31st, 2021, 11:15 pmTom Cobb Act 2 for review. Thanks
7:02- heard "My dear Tom - my very dear Tom"; text reads "My dear Tim - my very dear Tim"
11:19- there is an lonely, extra "Now" that can be cut out
12:00- please insert the missing line "Seventy-five pounds a year, on a three years' agreement, I believe." (pg 224)
And just a side note- some of the spaces between your lines towards the end were quite long. I think one was around 41 seconds. While I know it is easier to edit the play together with a clear space between lines, they don't need to be quite that long. You can edit them down a little if you'd like (5 seconds is great) but it isn't a huge deal. Just something to keep in mine for next time