COMPLETE[PLAY]One Act Play Collection 015 - thw
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Todd
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Duke of Illyria [3:41]
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/retamingoftheshrew_dukeofillyria_postgate.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/retamingoftheshrew_dukeofillyria_postgate.mp3
Jim in Ohio
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Great! I will PL as I add it to the Draft file.
EDIT: Duke is PL OK.
Thanks, Todd
EDIT: Duke is PL OK.
Thanks, Todd
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Hi! I would like to claim the part of Lancelot Briggs, The Boy, for The Trysting Place. Thank you!
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Listening with the text, I'm a bit confused when some narrator's lines are skipped while others (sometimes same wording) aren't. So I won't comment on narrator's lines.jennlea wrote: ↑May 24th, 2021, 5:37 am Here is The Last Rehearsal:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays015_07_various_128kb.mp3
23:10
I do not already have someone lined up to PL. Would anyone like to do it?
Missing at 12:05 (ISABEL) "What has he done?"
12:15 (ISABEL) "Tell you what I have learned?" (it has "What has he done" instead)
12:26 overlap "Tell you what I have learned?"
12:35 missing "Sister do you ask me what it is?"
12:45 overlap ditto
13:00 missing "Give me the letter I will read it"
13:10 overlap ditto
Thank you for listening! I'm new to editing plays so I appreciate the feedback! I tended to skip some of the narrator lines if the voice quality in the reader was obvious but I will go back and edit again adding them back in if it seemed confusing not to have them. Still so much to learn about editing plays to flow nicely!Rapunzelina wrote: ↑May 27th, 2021, 6:19 amListening with the text, I'm a bit confused when some narrator's lines are skipped while others (sometimes same wording) aren't. So I won't comment on narrator's lines.jennlea wrote: ↑May 24th, 2021, 5:37 am Here is The Last Rehearsal:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays015_07_various_128kb.mp3
23:10
I do not already have someone lined up to PL. Would anyone like to do it?
Missing at 12:05 (ISABEL) "What has he done?"
12:15 (ISABEL) "Tell you what I have learned?" (it has "What has he done" instead)
12:26 overlap "Tell you what I have learned?"
12:35 missing "Sister do you ask me what it is?"
12:45 overlap ditto
13:00 missing "Give me the letter I will read it"
13:10 overlap ditto
The overlapping was supposed to sound like Isabel was interrupting Margery but I can easily fix that (with the lines in the correct places this time) and add the narrator portion back in so it isn't confusing. I was trying to be fancy with the editing but just turned into a mess instead
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You may leave narrator's lines out when you feel they are superfluous, I just meant that I couldn't judge which you wanted to leave out and which not, so that's why I didn't comment on those.jennlea wrote: ↑May 27th, 2021, 6:44 am Thank you for listening! I'm new to editing plays so I appreciate the feedback! I tended to skip some of the narrator lines if the voice quality in the reader was obvious but I will go back and edit again adding them back in if it seemed confusing not to have them. Still so much to learn about editing plays to flow nicely!
ETA That is, I was confused about what to comment on; the listening itself is not confusing
I see. Thanks!Rapunzelina wrote: ↑May 27th, 2021, 7:02 amYou may leave narrator's lines out when you feel they are superfluous, I just meant that I couldn't judge which you wanted to leave out and which not, so that's why I didn't comment on those.jennlea wrote: ↑May 27th, 2021, 6:44 am Thank you for listening! I'm new to editing plays so I appreciate the feedback! I tended to skip some of the narrator lines if the voice quality in the reader was obvious but I will go back and edit again adding them back in if it seemed confusing not to have them. Still so much to learn about editing plays to flow nicely!
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I figured that was what you meantRapunzelina wrote: ↑May 27th, 2021, 7:02 am ETA That is, I was confused about what to comment on; the listening itself is not confusing
I worked on fixing the Isabel/Margery scene:
-11:54- after listening to it again I removed the stage direction "Isabel tragically"
-12:04- added the stage direction "Isabel interrupting Margery" to make it clearer what is happening here.
-12:06-13:05 fixed lines so they are in the correct place and not overlapping.
Open to any other suggestions you might have
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Hi, I'm interested in reading "MASTER ROBIN GOODFELLOW HAMLET, their son" if still available? Thanks.
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Clear, flowing editing and no overlapping. This can be marked PL OK!jennlea wrote: ↑May 27th, 2021, 7:14 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays015_07_various_128kb.mp3
23:18
Let me update again the "Where do we stand at this point?" list.
OPEN:
5 - Roadhouse; one part unclaimed, one part not submitted, three parts ready for PL
10 - News; two parts unclaimed, one part ready for PL
FULL:
2 - Jealousy; two parts not submitted yet
4 - Lady; one part ready for PL, one part has PL notes
8 - Trysting; two parts ready for PL
READY TO EDIT: 1 - Shrew; 9 - Circle
DONE: 3 - Fix; 6 - Glen; 7 - Rehearsal
It would be really good to get the PL's (or Spot PL's) done quickly. You never know if readers will be around to make fixes and if you delay you might have a big problem.
Thanks, Todd
OPEN:
5 - Roadhouse; one part unclaimed, one part not submitted, three parts ready for PL
10 - News; two parts unclaimed, one part ready for PL
FULL:
2 - Jealousy; two parts not submitted yet
4 - Lady; one part ready for PL, one part has PL notes
8 - Trysting; two parts ready for PL
READY TO EDIT: 1 - Shrew; 9 - Circle
DONE: 3 - Fix; 6 - Glen; 7 - Rehearsal
It would be really good to get the PL's (or Spot PL's) done quickly. You never know if readers will be around to make fixes and if you delay you might have a big problem.
Thanks, Todd
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to PL for meRapunzelina wrote: ↑May 28th, 2021, 7:18 amClear, flowing editing and no overlapping. This can be marked PL OK!jennlea wrote: ↑May 27th, 2021, 7:14 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays015_07_various_128kb.mp3
23:18
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