COMPLETE[PLAY]Lightnin' by Smith and Bacon - thw

Post by **ToddHW** » March 1st, 2021, 6:55 pm

Great - now this is full.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » March 2nd, 2021, 3:53 am

WendyKatzHiller wrote: ↑February 26th, 2021, 11:42 amThe pivotal role of Mrs. Starr.
BTW, I think she's in only Act 1, although the MW says otherwise. Let me know if I missed something.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_mrsstarr_1_128kb.mp3

sorry for the feedback delay, the weekend was quite busy. But I'm working off my PL backlog and I arrived at Lightnin' now.

Mrs Starr is excellently PL ok and indeed I checked the entire act 2, and while she is physically present in the courtroom, she is more the quiet type there and has no speaking lines. So I'll delete this section in the MW.

Thank you !!!

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » March 2nd, 2021, 3:58 am

wib66 wrote: ↑February 27th, 2021, 2:00 pmHere is the edited file for Mrs Preston thanks
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_mrspreston_01_128kb.mp3

thank you, now all the lines are in and PL ok

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » March 2nd, 2021, 4:18 am

ssfellows wrote: ↑February 28th, 2021, 11:49 amRodney Harper ready for review:

hey Steve, thank you and you did a great job on the Harper character.

I was rooting for the guy to have his happy end with his wife.

Loved the small chuckles in between

All of Harper PL ok. Well done.

Oh only one small note for future drama recordings: when there are stage directions in-between one of your speeches, please also leave 2-3 seconds of silence there, so Todd has it easier to fiddle with in the editing phase. No need to reupload this time though.

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » March 2nd, 2021, 4:27 am

Availle wrote: ↑March 1st, 2021, 4:56 pmHere's Mrs. Cogshall:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_mrscogshall_1_128kb.mp3

and the last one for today...thank you Availle, also this lady is PL ok. At least she gets the stand-alone sentence "Good night Mr Jones" in the second part

And yes, she only appears in Act 1, so I changed this in the MW.

Sonia

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » March 5th, 2021, 9:30 am

Old man Zeb Crothers:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_zeb_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_zeb_3_128kb.mp3

I found just two lines in Act I, but I know you will let me know what I missed.

Forgot I had the Clerk in Act II, but I'll have his bit in post haste.

Post by **ToddHW** » March 5th, 2021, 10:49 am

Thank you.

Todd

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » March 6th, 2021, 8:35 am

Here's the line for Clerk at the end of Act II

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_clerk_2_128kb.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » March 6th, 2021, 9:17 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » March 8th, 2021, 6:36 am

silverquill wrote:Old man Zeb Crothers:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_zeb_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_zeb_3_128kb.mp3

Here's the line for Clerk at the end of Act II
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_clerk_2_128kb.mp3

perfect, Larry, I so loved the performance for Zeb, excellently done. Kinda endearing in his bumbling way. And that coughing was a brilliant touch !

And I seriously had to browse through the entire second act, only to find the clerk had just two lines at the very end

I think all the lines are in. Perfectly PL ok, thanks

Sonia

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 8th, 2021, 4:08 pm

Here is Mrs. Moore Act 1:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_mrsmoore_1_128kb.mp3
2:45

I looked and looked but couldn't find any lines for her in Act 2. Can I have someone else take a look as well?

Post by **Kitty** » March 9th, 2021, 2:34 am

jennlea wrote: ↑March 8th, 2021, 4:08 pmHere is Mrs. Moore Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lightnin_mrsmoore_1_128kb.mp3
I looked and looked but couldn't find any lines for her in Act 2. Can I have someone else take a look as well?

she seems to appear on a few occasions but doesn't have any speaking lines. I'll delete the section.

But she is quite bossy in the first act

well done Jenn, thanks. Totally PL ok.

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » March 9th, 2021, 2:37 am

Now we only need a small correction from our sheriff (nudge to Chris) and then the all important stage directions. Has anybody heard back from Amber by any chance ?

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » March 9th, 2021, 4:23 am

Thank you all for your parts, and to Sonia for all the PLs!

Amber is now editing her play in the 14th One Act Play collection.

Thanks, Todd

Ambsweet13 · Post by **Ambsweet13** » March 10th, 2021, 4:58 pm

The Stage Directions are on their way. Please do not orphan them. I have been recording Prologue/Act 1 in sections and it is already over an hour-long