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by silverquill » January 11th, 2021, 11:50 am
Kitty wrote: ↑January 9th, 2021, 12:47 pm
PL notes for Act 1:
> at about 8:47: (p. 30) please insert "Jelf enters, carrying a silver tray with tea-things. Beryl pours out tea."
PL notes for Act 2:
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at about 2:18: (p. 63) "
Jelf enters, and at the same moment a few chords on a piano in another room are heard"
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at 2:26: (p. 64) "
he goes out" - I hear "
she goes out"
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at about 2:54: (p. 66) "
eating a lozenge"
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at about 10:05: (p. 96) "
Mrs Bompas to Howard"
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at about 12:09: (p. 103) "
Trimble prompts Bompas"
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at about 13:50: (p. 108) "
Jelf enters"
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at about 13:58: (p. 108) "
Mrs Bompas totters in"
PL notes for Act 3:
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at 6:59: (p. 138) "trying to
put on her mantle" - I hear "put
it on"
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at about 10:34: (p. 153) "
McShane to Mrs Bompas"
PL notes for Act 4:
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at about 4:16: (p. 177) "
Lady Ripstow and Denham enter"
thanks
Sonia
Oh, my, I don't know what happened in Act 2.
Anyway, all four acts have been corrected, and above are
NEW time stamps for Act 2.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_stagedirections_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_stagedirections_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_stagedirections_4_128kb.mp3
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by ToddHW » January 11th, 2021, 12:22 pm
Thank you.
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by Kitty » January 12th, 2021, 4:32 am
nicely done, Tomas. I took a liking to Denham, and luckily you didn't make him overly pompous. He is much more endearing the way you portray him.
Acts 2-4 PL ok.
One missed line in
Act 1:
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at the very end: (p. 37) "
We shall meet tonight, I hope"
thanks
Sonia
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by Kitty » January 12th, 2021, 4:38 am
silverquill wrote: ↑January 11th, 2021, 11:50 am
Anyway, all four acts have been corrected, and above are
NEW time stamps for Act 2.
thank you especially for the new time stamps

all perfectly corrected and
PL ok now.
Sonia
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by ToddHW » January 21st, 2021, 7:39 am
Thank you.
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by Kitty » January 22nd, 2021, 5:27 am
thank you, and
PL ok now
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by ToddHW » Today, 6:58 am
Thank you. Maybe the character is purposefully confused...
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