FULL[PLAY]The Times by Pinero - thw

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Post by silverquill » January 11th, 2021, 11:50 am

Kitty wrote:
January 9th, 2021, 12:47 pm

PL notes for Act 1:

> at about 8:47: (p. 30) please insert "Jelf enters, carrying a silver tray with tea-things. Beryl pours out tea."

PL notes for Act 2:

> at about 2:18: (p. 63) "Jelf enters, and at the same moment a few chords on a piano in another room are heard"
> at 2:26: (p. 64) "he goes out" - I hear "she goes out"
> at about 2:54: (p. 66) "eating a lozenge"
> at about 10:05: (p. 96) "Mrs Bompas to Howard"
> at about 12:09: (p. 103) "Trimble prompts Bompas"
> at about 13:50: (p. 108) "Jelf enters"
> at about 13:58: (p. 108) "Mrs Bompas totters in"

PL notes for Act 3:

> at 6:59: (p. 138) "trying to put on her mantle" - I hear "put it on"
> at about 10:34: (p. 153) "McShane to Mrs Bompas"

PL notes for Act 4:

> at about 4:16: (p. 177) "Lady Ripstow and Denham enter"

thanks

Sonia
Oh, my, I don't know what happened in Act 2. :shock:

Anyway, all four acts have been corrected, and above are NEW time stamps for Act 2.


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_stagedirections_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_stagedirections_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_stagedirections_4_128kb.mp3
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Post by Kitty » January 12th, 2021, 4:32 am

nicely done, Tomas. I took a liking to Denham, and luckily you didn't make him overly pompous. He is much more endearing the way you portray him. :thumbs:

Acts 2-4 PL ok.

One missed line in Act 1:

> at the very end: (p. 37) "We shall meet tonight, I hope"

thanks

Sonia

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Post by Kitty » January 12th, 2021, 4:38 am

silverquill wrote:
January 11th, 2021, 11:50 am
Anyway, all four acts have been corrected, and above are NEW time stamps for Act 2.
thank you especially for the new time stamps :thumbs: all perfectly corrected and PL ok now.

Sonia

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Post by WiltedScribe » January 20th, 2021, 11:13 pm

Here is Denham's first act with the added line:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_denham_1_128kb.mp3
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Post by Kitty » January 22nd, 2021, 5:27 am

WiltedScribe wrote:
January 20th, 2021, 11:13 pm
Here is Denham's first act with the added line:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_denham_1_128kb.mp3
thank you, and PL ok now :)

Sonia

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Post by Hubert63 » Yesterday, 9:08 pm

Here is Howard's part


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_howard_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_howard_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_howard_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/times_howard_4_128kb.mp3

Have at it. I had considered starting over (this has been done for a couple weeks). Feel like my idea of who this person is wasn't terribly consistent. The accent got a little weird, especially between drunk and not. If needed I will get any alterations (including starting over) in a short time - but I figured it was better to get this submitted.

Dale (Hubert63)

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Post by ToddHW » Today, 6:58 am

Thank you. Maybe the character is purposefully confused...

Todd

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