clionawoodbyrne wrote: ↑
December 29th, 2020, 7:23 am
I had such fun doing this. This was my first time doing drama. Please let me know of anything I have done incorrectly. I look forward to your feedback.
Cliona what a treat that was
(no Todd, I forgot to mention the addiction warning, she'll be here to stay now
Wonderful performance in character, Cliona. If this was your first performance, you are quite a natural.
You played out the emotions quite well, I loved the ohs and ahs, especially in the final act
And she is veering between low-life simplicity and affected-aristocratic snobbery. Great choice.
Also loved the way you pronounced this Welsh village
ever been there ?
As far as I can see, no lines missing. I'll mark Acts 1, 3 and 4
already PL ok
One small snip to make in Act 2
> at the end
there is a repeat
of "we're coming..." you can cut it out, or was this the version you preferred ?
In that case, please insert it at the correct spot, to make it easier for our editor to find
Other than that, I would only make one further note, which you don't have to correct for this time though, I only mention it for your dozens of future performances
Please leave more space between the quotes, best would be 2 or 3 seconds
. Sometimes you have enough but sometimes it's more only like 1 second or even less. The reason for the long silence is that Todd has to cut each quote out and this task is made easier if there is a lot of silent fiddling space around it, so he immediately sees when a quote starts and ends. No need to reupload, for this time it's ok, just as a reminder for the future
Congrats on your first role, and I am hoping to hear you in many many more. (still many open plays...have a look around