Plays and other dramatic works
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by Availle » December 19th, 2020, 6:40 pm
Kitty wrote: ↑December 15th, 2020, 6:15 am
I have a small suggestion to improve
Act 2:
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at 2:21: (p. 26) "for my writings, you know, have
fared but ill hitherto" – you say "fard", which doesn't make sense in context (it should rhyme on
"scared", "dared")

I swear I caught that during recording already, but I seem to have cut out the wrong instance... Anyway, here he is, still complaining:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/authorsfarce_marplayjun_2_128kb.mp3
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by ToddHW » December 19th, 2020, 8:32 pm
Thank you.
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by Kitty » December 20th, 2020, 3:14 am
thank you Algy, now definitely
PL ok.
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by Kitty » December 20th, 2020, 3:15 am
that happened to me as well once

in any case, now
PL ok
thanks
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by Kitty » December 20th, 2020, 3:25 am
awww I love the final romantic duet

who would have thought this ending which began so snappishly in Act 1

well characterised Devorah, I really enjoyed this part. She could have had a bigger role.
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PL ok
thanks
Sonia